I'm the NBA's Gatekeeper

The book title could be changed to "The NBA Journey of a Mentally Retarded Child".

The title is good because it highlights the key points and attracts readers. The flaw is that the description limits the protagonist's development space, making readers mistakenly believe that the protagonist (in the future) is just a defender. I wonder if the author has an outline.

I feel the author portrayed the protagonist as too cowardly. Having read so many basketball novels, I've never seen anyone cry in front of others after being traded by their team, displaying all sorts of grievances. Was it really necessary to write it like that?

This is the story of an idiot with a system messing around in the NBA.

After a season ends, you could consider adding some storylines involving the female lead, her daily life, training, and unexpected events. If it's just constant competition, people might get tired of it. Incorporating some plot elements is fine (ps: don't make it too drawn out). This is just my personal suggestion; please don't criticize if you disagree.

I was so angry about the bull trade that I cried. 😥😥😥😥 How much of a childish person does someone have to be to do something like this? The author claims to be a bookworm who's been reading for over 10 years, doesn't he even know this much common sense?

This book is surprisingly good; it doesn't have a mindless plot and is a decent read. If you're looking for something to read, you might want to check it out. However, I feel the author might not have done a good job promoting it. I was going to stay silent, but I couldn't resist. Judging by the number of chapters, it's almost ready for release, but there aren't many readers. I hope the author will improve its marketing.

It's too slow-paced; the protagonist feels like an idiot. Defense requires experience, but dunking doesn't. With the protagonist's physique, he could easily force his way in. He could attack the rim in one step. Screen-setting is also easy; as long as you're wide enough and have a stable stance, you're good to go. Also, soccer goalkeepers have throws; poor free throw shooting is understandable, but missing one out of ten shots is strange. At least you should be able to make three out of ten.

I hate pushovers. In the NBA, which is dominated by Americans, they'd rather suspend you for dozens of games than back down. They'd dunk on you head-on, and you'd be embarrassed? You even helped Durant out, but he was being nice to you, and you just gave him the cold shoulder.

25+15+3 Is not as good as 30+5+3? It's far from enough? It's really funny.