I'm the NBA's Gatekeeper

You can change the title of the book to "The NBA Journey of Mentally Retarded Children"

The title of the book is good for highlighting and attracting readers. The flaw is that the description limits the protagonist's development space, making people mistakenly think that the protagonist (in the future) is a defender. I don't know if the author has an outline. Will the protagonist change from a defensive blue-collar player to a star player with both offense and defense, or will he be a top-notch defensive player with a second-rate or higher offense? In general, most people prefer offense to defense. If the protagonist does not transform, this book can only gain the attention of a small number of readers. After reading the latest chapter, I felt that the author's handling of interpersonal relationships was okay. The potential female protagonist was not quickly won by the male protagonist, but the plot was progressed relatively steadily, which was well received. There are also interpersonal relationships in the alliance, just two or three ordinary friends, which is okay. In addition to the need for the plot to make Zhang Yanan and his wife have a closer relationship with the male protagonist, the overall description of interpersonal relationships is better. It is not like some cool novels where the protagonist just takes the lead casually, which is very fake.

I feel that the author describes the protagonist's heart as too cowardly. After reading basketball articles for so long, I have never seen anyone who was traded by the team cry in front of others and feel all kinds of grievances. Is it necessary to write like this?

This is the story of a mentally retarded man who used the system to cause chaos in the NBA.

After a season is over, you can consider adding some heroine, daily life, exercise, encounters, and other plots. If it is always a game and you watch too much, you may get bored. It is okay to add some plots appropriately (ps: don't be too watery). Personal advice, don't spray if you don't like it.

I cried because of the Mavericks trade 😥😥😥😥How many giant babies can do such a thing? The author said that he is a bookworm in his 10s and doesn't understand this common sense?

This book is surprisingly good. It doesn't have a too brainless plot. It's food and can be eaten. Those who are short on books can read it. I just feel that the author may not have done a good job in publicity. I originally wanted to dive, but I couldn't help it. According to the number of chapters, it is almost on the shelves. Not many people will read it. I hope the author can run it well.

It's too slow and it feels like the protagonist was written by the author as a fool. Defense requires experience, but dunking doesn't. The physical quality of the protagonist can be improved. Attack the rim in one step. It's also easy to pick and roll, as long as your body is wide enough and your feet are stable enough. Also, the football goalkeeper has a hand to throw the ball, so the penalty difference is understandable, but it would be strange if he couldn't score even one of 10 goals. At least he could score 3 out of 10.

I hate bad guys. In the Yankee NBA, they would rather be suspended for dozens of games than be tough. They would dunk on your head and be tough from the front. Are you still embarrassed? If you give Du a helping hand, you will be treated favorably, but you can use your face to show off your face.

The data of 25+15+3 is not worth 30+5+3? ? ? Still far behind? ? ? ? Really funny,