I'm the NBA's Gatekeeper

The first two hundred chapters are quite to my liking, but there are too many things that have nothing to do with basketball in the back. For example, the charity football game and Wang Dachun's brother's wedding, nearly 100 chapters were written, with basketball interspersed in between. Moreover, it is originally a good article, but the author insists on making readers unhappy. After Wang Dachun and Scarlett, they did not want to have physical contact with their opponents during the game, and then were ridiculed by the media in various ways. It was really uncomfortable for me to watch. Then there were a lot of things that made me unhappy, so I jumped straight to the finale.

This basketball is very bad for you to play.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style and details may be poor. Writing about a game is like writing a running account. Writing the data of both sides is done in one game. There is neither a fight of courage nor a fight of wits

Too many times, too many poisonous points

Maximum 6 points, what kind of thing is written, the protagonist was written as stupid! , You can just create a Mongolian B character. I switched to basketball temporarily. I haven't paid attention to it before and I don't understand. It's easy to write out the characteristics. After the 2008 Olympics, I know a lot of information if I just look at it. Is the main character a caveman? He can just copy it in the middle and change it a little bit. It's just rubbish before and after.