I Stole My Son’s Basketball System

The writing is a bit too drawn out; the main plot is progressing too slowly, which might deter some readers… Another thing is that some of the male lead's characteristics could be added, like his height and weight. After all the setbacks, it's time to give him some sweetness—right now it's all setbacks…

The first 48 chapters of this book were incredibly engaging and refreshing. However, after chapter 48, the author deliberately downplayed the protagonist's intelligence. A player who does the work of an excellent scout, is highly capable, spends his own money to work for the team, yet only receives a minimum salary and is considered untouchable.

The pacing is a bit slow. If it were explained within three chapters, the protagonist would be a retired wrestler or Sanda athlete with excellent physical fitness, over two meters tall, thirty-five years old, retired, his wife left him, his son is sick and needs treatment, he went to the United States, but ran out of money for treatment, and because of some act of bravery, he met an NBA executive…

The more realistic the preceding text is, the less tolerable this flaw becomes. Does the author understand what it means to successfully predict all the orders? If you can successfully predict most of them, it means you know everything about all the NBA teams and all the inside information. You understand the thoughts of all the team owners, managers, and coaches.

The protagonist is only in his early thirties, but his personality is portrayed like that of a sixty-year-old farmer—stuttering, indecisive, and dawdling. I almost threw up after reading the first ten chapters. Isn't thirty-something supposed to be in the prime of life? Even if it's considered old for playing sports, it can't be a terrible personality!

This isn't just being unconventional, it's downright awful! The author's first two books were alright, how did they end up like this?

... After seeing the main character's age in the setting, I lost all desire to continue watching.

The idea that someone in their 30s can still play basketball is just too unbelievable.

It's so long-winded and deliberately depressing. Go read Dong Wang Yi's novels; that's pure enjoyment from beginning to end. Why try to suppress your feelings while reading a basketball novel? It's so depressing!

If you're in your 30s and want to get into the NBA, how amazing do you have to be? 27 Is already your peak, so you could say that if you're in your 30s, you're already past the end of your career, and teams basically have no chance of taking you on unless you're an indispensable piece for a championship.