Orin Hunter

Well, this book has a novel world view, distinctive characters, compact plot, attractive story, and visually impressive fights, with the potential to become a god.

The writing is really good. I have seen the routine thousands of times but it brings a different feeling when you write it. Please stick to it no matter what, and I will always support you (but I still have to suggest that the next new book can simplify the battles and enrich the description of other characters and events besides the protagonist and villain as last year) 😁

In fact, to be honest, the writing is okay, very good. I believe the author should also know how cool the fantasy genre is. If you don't really like it, you probably won't write it. Come on, author, keep at it I don't usually read fantasy because I can't remember people's names, but this one is okay. I actually remembered the name of the protagonist Wow, I'm so awesome!

It's pretty good. It's pretty good among new writers. I hope it becomes popular!

I have read more than 100 chapters of this book. The theme of steampunk + Cthulhu is great. Generally speaking, the author has a good grasp of it, but in some details, especially under "steampunk", and especially the technology tree of this book, emmmmm... There is electricity, there is electricity! This immediately makes people think about the growth of the technology tree... Of course this is not a big problem However, there is a very serious problem, which is the sense of substitution. First of all, we certainly do not deny that a book that can give people a strong sense of immersion is definitely not bad, so how much a book can give people a sense of immersion is very important The whole book should be a world that has nothing to do with the earth, but it has a considerable part of the British Industrial Revolution period in the 18th century, and also has the background of the European medieval church. The overall style is more Western. The author please continue to read my suggestions on the premise of agreeing with my above sentence. After all, I don't know much about this book. If there are any discrepancies, please ignore my opinions Okay, based on the first sentence of the above paragraph, if you want to have a sense of substitution, then the narrative style of the entire book should be more Western-style. Ah, of course, this requirement is indeed not very good. Some people think that the original flavor is good, and some people think that you, a Chinese, cannot speak Chinese well or use a translation accent. So as far as the overall style of this article is extremely Chinese, I don't make any comments. Of course, I don't deny the idea that a proper Western-style narrative will make a Western-style novel more immersive. Then, in that sentence, I delineated two timelines, one is the eighteenth century, and the other is the Middle Ages. Of course, the author has integrated the backgrounds of these two timelines to a certain extent, so we can lock the general timeline in the eighteenth century. So, do we need to make the entire book eighteenth century? For example, I remember that when talking about the setting of the hunter's black bracelet in the article (it should be around Chapter 100), you (please allow me to use the honorific) used the metaphor of a "black box" for its camera-like functions. The black box itself is fine, but it is full of strong flavor of the 20th and 21st centuries, so the problem is that it is extremely easy to pull a person who is immersed in the story into reality, because the impression it brings is incompatible with the thick steam smoke. Strong contrast is extremely easy to interrupt people, because it conflicts with people's inherent cognition. People may not feel anything special when they look at it, but subconsciously, they will feel extremely inconsistent and uncomfortable. So please don't think that changing a person's inherent cognition is easy, even if it is very trivial. In short, when an author writes a book, if the content impacts people's inherent understanding of the world for many years, please be careful So how to deal with this "black box" problem, you might as well change it to: You readers can understand it as a black box. While appearing friendly, the entire world setting in the book does not impact people's inherent cognition. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. I believe you will have a better way to deal with it - as long as you agree with my point of view. After being verbose for so long, I am actually very uneasy. I don't know how the author or other people will evaluate it if they see it. If it helps, it won't waste my time coding so many words. If it doesn't, please allow me to apologize for wasting your time.

As far as the beginning is concerned, it's not bad But when I saw Teeth Count as Weapons, I had the urge to abandon the book. If teeth are considered weapons, why are fists and bones not considered weapons? Let's look forward to a wave of subsequent developments.

It's not bad, but I personally feel it's a bit messy, has no background, and no goals. It feels a bit boring 😴

The most important benefit of time travel is to have a protagonist who highlights a calm and mature character, so that even if he becomes a little kid after time traveling, he will not look like a real kid. When I scanned the book, I assumed that the indigenous people would not read it. This is because since the author chose the indigenous people, there is a high probability that the protagonist is a growth-oriented protagonist, or the protagonist's outlook on life is somewhat different from that of modern people.                         The protagonist with a problematic personality is the most poisonous in my opinion. Only great gods can write well, and those who write well will eventually become great gods and eventually appear on the list.        ，，， Either way, if I have this strength, then this book will naturally appear in front of me later.

Support the author, let's take a look at the Sajia family, and give me a reward first The cash will reach a thousand layers... Come on, author It's just that the character's name is a bit... You know

Damn it, the author, aren't you tired from writing this battle... Four people wrote fifteen chapters with the same scene and background, a total of 30,000 words, and the one who fought the Smoke Hunter was the only one. Technical flow, oh advanced! I didn't understand it at all, maybe I didn't have the heart to read it carefully, but it looked so awesome anyway... Not completely, but it contained: I predicted your prediction, and I kept another hand behind your back... No, no matter how wonderful your writing is, this is too much, so write it to your heart's content. After coming back to his senses and letting out a breath, it seemed like he had been reading for a long time. Well... The battle has already passed ten chapters. The question is why the battle has not been finished yet. Looking back, there are still five chapters to go. It slipped away, it was scary, and it was exhausting to watch.

As a rookie writer, I am now aware of all the mistakes I made in my past writing, especially the storyline from the early chapters 48 to 104. At the time, I didn't think there was any problem, but now I think it is almost fatal! And some of the settings even conflict with my subsequent plot... Therefore, I decided to overturn and rewrite them all. The tentative goals are as follows: 1. Rewrite the plot and speed up the pace. 2. Increase the proportion of daily life and reduce the proportion of fighting. 3. Improve the protagonist's early character and dilute the character's secondary sense. 4. Improve the setting of Holy Light Pure Land, introduce the system of Holy Light Church, and reshape the image of Holy Light Knight. In addition, I will also simplify the remaining chapters before and after, especially the combat part of the large dungeon, to retain the essence of the reversal, and to minimize the description of trivial action details. In the future, I will also find time to fill in the daily plots that are missing during the protagonist's academy period and early hunter career, as well as the interactive stories with other characters. This rewriting task requires a lot of work, so for this month's text update, I chose to update it weekly. At least, book friends who have invested will not have their investment failed because the author stopped updating for seven days in a row. I will give priority to creating new plots from chapters 48 to 104. When they are all written, I will release them all at once at the end of the month. Don't worry, already paid chapters will not be charged twice. Of course, these overturned and rewritten plots will only be updated in real time on legitimate platforms such as Qidian, QQ, and WeChat. After all, pirates will not pay attention to old chapters that have been uploaded once. To be honest, now that I look at this book from the perspective of a reader, I can't even stand it! As a result, there are still a group of readers who have been following the update, which really touched me. As a newcomer, the author would like to thank all the genuine book friends again for their continued reading and support!

Regardless of the results, I will strive to finish this book, because the plot outline has been drawn up and the ending has been determined. It would be a pity not to write it. In general, it is currently tentatively divided into the following chapters: Trial Chapter, Survival Chapter, Academy Chapter, Labyrinth Chapter, Holy Abyss Chapter, and Arcane Spirit Chapter. How should I put it? I hope I can finish the story steadily. "Currently there are two updates a day, one at 12 noon and one at 6:00 in the evening. Future updates will be determined depending on the situation" 😁

The trumpet has been silently paying attention to it. Even when the performance was at its worst, the author did not have a eunuch, but persisted all the way to the 3 million words so far. This spirit alone is worthy of encouragement. I will reward you with a silver alliance, and I look forward to the next work!

I like novels with female protagonists, I like single female protagonists, and harems are acceptable, so that the novels appear humane. I don't read novels without female protagonists. He's not a eunuch, so why can't he have a female protagonist? He's really going to be alone forever. What's the use of such a life?

Why don't you watch it unless you travel back in time? It's because the values ​​are different. The indigenous values ​​​​of the plot world are completely different from modern people. If you write with the same values ​​as modern people, it will be out of place. If you write with different values, the protagonist will look stupid. If you can just write a dozen chapters of plot with ups and downs, then that's no problem. The current values ​​of human society were reshaped after the zbzy revolution and gczy revolution. Original works without these revolutionary values ​​would be so backward.

I don't like novels with female protagonists (not women), novels that feel that great power belongs to oneself, and the success of the male protagonist is just luck and charity from others. Is there any great emperor in ancient times who was single-mindedly devoted to women?

Some readers don't like novels with female protagonists because they have been poisoned by some novels that don't write female characters. They will also like the good ones after reading them; To be fair, if you like authors without female protagonists, you can't be spoiled. The author can write what he wants based on his own strength. Have you paid the author, so you want the author to write according to your needs? Do not do to others what you do not want others to do to you. If you don't like it, you can just leave. You can also complain about inappropriate plots or characters. I haven't even read a few chapters of the novel, so I just wrote "I don't like female protagonists" in the book, which is just disgusting.

Once again, I deeply understand how difficult it is to complete a full-length work, whether it is a comic, animation or online article, from the beginning to the end...🙄

It looks like it's finally almost finished. The author's writing is very good. It's obviously a familiar technique, but when you write it, it's very exciting. But it's a pity. What always made me feel the most was the second and third nightmares of Ye Chen. Personally, I think the best setting is the Oriental Labyrinth, which is weird and encompasses the world. And it has a very Western fantasy-style mystery and unknowable feel. Every time I see a picture full of fog, it automatically brings me to the Oriental Labyrinth. It's a pity that the author focused all his energy on fighting "people" in the later period, and such a potential setting was not explored in depth. In my understanding, hunters are like pioneers, exploring the labyrinth and protecting civilization with powers completely different from civilization. Hunters who are beyond ordinary people run through the strange maze and discover power from it. The relics in the maze are compared with the pure land humanities to reveal the truth of history and the origin of the world. It is quite interesting to think about it.

The battles in this book are indeed well written, very detailed, and have strong visuals, but every battle in the plot is extremely cruel. Maybe the author wants to highlight the cruelty of that world, but after reading too much, it feels like I can't stand it anymore, and it's not fun. Just like Attack on Titan, the plot is also very sad, but it's still very satisfying when the commander appears and the protagonist transforms. Alas, every time I win, I almost die. I even skipped through many plots, and I can guess what will happen. It makes people wonder whether the protagonist is born with troubles, or whether all hunters are like this. If they are like this, can so many hunters survive?

As a first book, the author is incredible. The story style is a bit like the adventure style of ten years ago. The characters also tried their best to portray, and the story also tried hard to express emotions. But it felt like it wasn't enough, there wasn't enough foreshadowing, I couldn't empathize, I couldn't get involved, I couldn't have the sense of expectation that I get when reading a book by an old author. Looking forward to the author's future development.

How strange. The quality of this book is worthy of this vote ranking, but this chapter is not that great. There are many other worse novels.

It's really a bit slow, mainly because if you want to write a group portrait, it's okay, but if each villain has to do a paragraph and then talk a lot, it's really not good and it's a bit slow, so it can be deleted appropriately. The description of the battle scenes is good, but I really beg you to be less verbal in the future. Many book friends want to see stories or other fights, but few book friends want to see battles with mouth. Keep up the good work!

Some humble opinions about "Ri Qing" The novel reads like a river and is very enjoyable, but there is a feeling of "Ni Qing" lingering in it from time to time. After careful consideration, I suddenly realized: Chinese culture has always been euphemistic and restrained, with profound implications. It rarely expresses one's emotions in a straightforward manner. Instead, it mostly focuses on scenery, objects, details, and actions... On the contrary, Riqing is just the opposite. The catharsis and direct expression of emotions such as "talk therapy" are common and have become a major feature. It is precisely because the description of the protagonist's psychological feelings and the unabashed strong emotions in the language coincide with this feature that it has the "Japanese light" flavor.

This is an unfinished story. Maybe the author hasn't thought about the ending of this story yet? I still think it's better like this.

I've only read three chapters, and the author's writing is very similar to Japanese comics and light novels. Are you planning to write like this in the future? Also, I want to ask about the combat value of this book. Is it like Demon Slayer, like Naruto, Pirates, or Dragon Ball? Looking forward to it very much!

It's finished… Will there be a book in the same world as this book? ? I thought the last chapter would end with the activation of the Apocalypse...

How can I put it this way? I have read two to three hundred chapters of this novel. I feel that there is nothing particularly attractive to me. It is a bit bland. I can tell what will happen next just by looking at the routines. It is a bit bland.

Isn't this still being updated? How come it's over?😓

Can I see new books before the Chinese New Year?