Traveler's House

Shen Nong tested the poison (Chapter 28 and died from the poison) Ahem, just kidding. After reading Chapter 28, I decided it wasn't suitable for me and ran away. Here are my thoughts after watching it. If you think it's right, you can give it a thumbs up. First of all, I only saw Chapter 28, and the excitement behind it has nothing to do with me. Secondly, I wrote this post on March 27, 2023, and the subsequent modifications have nothing to do with me This book is not a cool article! Not a cool article! Not a cool article! Say important things three times. If you just like cool articles, you can cross them out. This book favors sadism, suspense, and reasoning. The villain is invincible (he has reached the upper limit of the world, and he has a bunch of puppets who have reached the upper limit of the world). The protagonist is also very interesting, but... In short, this book is not a good book. The "breaking point" is after chapter 10. If you want to continue reading, please be patient. Advantages: The world view is grand, the author's character is strong, his writing skills are good, and the basic quality is guaranteed. Disadvantages: There are too many tool people before Chapter 30, serious homogeneity, lack of clear characterization, the protagonist is like a clown (although it is very real, but some people just don't like it), the introduction is deceptive, and the foreshadowing of the protagonist Goldfinger is so strong that I thought the protagonist would explode and fight back, but he turned into a clown🤡. Suggestion: Delete the paragraph where the protagonist Goldfinger appears. He said it so highly, but it turned out to be nothing. I know that the author wanted to write about the protagonist's experience, rather than directly speeding through it, but those words are very inconsistent when they appear here (I also had a poisonous attack here) The above, I am responsible for what I said, feel free to say it, I will not reply. If you think I have a bad influence, please delete the post. I have no objection and refuse to curse.

I feel like your golden finger setting is a bit ridiculous. There is no logical foundation. It looks like two people arguing. What do you do, and then I do something to restrain you, and then the other party says that I will do something to restrain you. There is no sense of reality, and it feels a bit floating. Just like the same setting, water overcomes fire and fire overcomes wood in the five elements. Not only does it have a certain logic in reality, but there are also ancient classics to prove it. This kind of virtual novel setting will make people feel real. , Convinced, but the setting of your book not only does not have a certain realistic logic in it, but also does not provide certain plot foreshadowing for the rationality of the existence of these cheats in the early stage. It would be okay if the protagonist only has a cheat for a short period of time.

This theme is like that of a certain salt-selected member. It focuses on creativity and fast pace. It will work wonders in a short thread. It doesn't require too many settings, but it will be very strange once it is written long... After I saw the protagonist becoming a survivor, I felt that the best ideas of this novel have been written. The second step of turning to stone is too different from the previous rhythm, and it is not so attractive...

The beginning of this book is a bit new. After being reincarnated as a stone man, it is no longer interesting. Your setting is not as good as traveling directly. You have to intercept and kill them all in the Tiandao Tower. So many people have died, and you are the only one who has escaped. Goldfinger is hard to explain. You have to go step by step. Is there any meaning in it?

It's still a matter of IQ. It's so simple to hit the tower master with these golden fingers, but it can actually destroy the group. A person who can roll back, knows everything, but can't think of a way. The simplest way is to make him stronger as he dies, just die a few more times. I really don't believe that with countless opportunities, there will be no way to give him a few more chances to die. If you can't commit suicide, can't you let your teammates kill you? I couldn't think of such a simple solution, and I actually made myself crazy.

It feels pretty good. In the first 30 chapters, don't think that with so many cheats, it will be difficult to tell who they are. From the point of view of Chapter 30, most of them are part-timers or even tools. I'm afraid they won't have too many roles in the subsequent scenes, except of course for those people who have been actually described. After all, there is a description, and there may still be scenes, but it depends on the individual.

How did the Tiandao Tower grow up without being blown up by organizations like the Traveler Alliance? Or is it that the author directly acted like a deus ex machina?

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Except that it's a bit new at the beginning, but then it becomes the same old routine again, and you can probably figure out the general plot later on.

The settings are pretty good. . . But it was boring, and it was just water until the fight with the tower owner. . . The back of the tower is not interesting, and I don't understand what is written. . . It's just a gimmick gone.

Can you please stop talking so much? I feel that the descriptions of these characters are quite homogenous. Some of them are arrogant, pretentious, and confident. Does the distinction depend entirely on ability?

It's very well written. I don't want Shi Bao to die.

From the book list and the first few chapters, I thought it was a group story, but in the end, the protagonist is still doing things by himself. It's just that the boss appears in advance. It makes me feel like eating ice cream. As I eat it, I get ice cubes.

Just kill them if you have nothing to do, and wait until the disaster strikes to interfere? After all, there are many time-travelers who fight against the catastrophe and promote social change. Should they kill those who are wearing flesh? The idea of ​​the Tiandao Tower is to prevent travelers from interfering with the world, so what if the Tiandao Tower interferes? There are also systems. The sources of systems are diverse. Are you not afraid that the system will kill the world? If the Tiandao Tower fights the catastrophe and promotes social change, there is nothing to say, but that will only restrict the time travellers, so take good care of them. After all, it is not the time travelers who kill people, but the system kidnaps people to kill people. If you don't fight with the system and the source of the system, you can see that the Tiandao Tower is just an organization of cowards.

Initial design 1

The writing is okay, but it's just not suitable for the current online writing environment. The current rankings are all fast-paced, mindless and simple articles. It can't be helped, after all, new readers can make money easily. In short, try your best to support.

I read Chapter 34 and couldn't stand it any longer. The first part was so passionate, but the second part was as bland as water. Although the protagonist in the early part looked like a clown, it was still good. After reading the second part, I found the disconnect was too serious and there was nothing interesting to watch.

It is recommended that the author add a sentence to ensure that the book will be completed with 3 million words to increase the reading rate 🙂

This book is quite good, but it is not good to set the time chain in advance. It is already a stone man and can be involved in the longevity flow. Later, it can even write about daily life or waste time and start over again. The plot is much more flexible. There is also a stone man as the heroine. Although there is no problem, I always feel that I will be stabbed later. It is still the problem of the time chain. I always feel that when fighting a boss, I put the blood bottle in my backpack instead of the shortcut keys.