Rusted Iron Crown

It can be seen that the author wants to write about a big background, but the setting of the protagonist is so strong that I can't understand it at once, but it is already better than some chronicle novels

Great support for the author, the writing is very tasteful.

Snake is super cute

It was a bit messy, so I ran away after seeing a few pictures.

Advantages: The world setting and the extraordinary power system are very interesting. I personally feel that the design is rigorous enough. Although the use of too many uncommon words is indeed a bit middle-of-the-road, it makes me happy (laughs). At the same time, I can also see that the author wants to have a deeper intention. Overall, it is not so empty. Disadvantages: The writing style is uncontrollable and the narration is unclear, especially when two people are talking. It is really easy to randomly divide a paragraph into two natural paragraphs so that readers cannot understand who said it. There are too many irrelevant descriptions, and sometimes I get stuck while reading. Summary: I enjoyed watching it, but it seemed a bit tiring. (Since the author has the inspiration to write a book, everything is easy to say. In the future, he should pay more attention and practice his narrative writing when writing books)

Absolutely, all the critical posts are gone, but that's okay.

. . . I was dumbfounded by the unscrupulous righteous protagonist and the villain who is not as ruthless as the protagonist.

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After reading the introduction, I feel that the setting is "Silent Throne" + "Apocalypse Forecast" by Fengyue Niang. But I can't find the feeling of Western fantasy when I read the content.

Prostitution for a while, pleasure for a while (⸍ꔷ͈ᗄꔷ͈⸌)o

(Qi Miao + Feng Yue + Yin Tian) mixed low configuration version, very exciting

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👐No one 🙌 knows better than me 👌 👆Snake

The story alone is not bad, but the details are a bit poor. The overall grasp of the plot is really at a loss. I can't think of where to write. After all, it is for readers to read. . .

Come over and support 😡. Also, set up some book club management and so on. In the end, it is better for the author to be less present and leave it to the tool people 👍

Emmm, what I'm very curious about is that the protagonist's predecessor was not a weakling but a very smart person, and his family even had holy relics. As a result, the protagonist's predecessor was sacrificed and died, and he was still an ordinary person, and he only got his abilities through a cult. Emmm, is he really like this? Then in the communication between the protagonist and his family, is the protagonist still the protagonist or the predecessor? Also, the previous writing was too confusing. When I saw the holy relic, I didn't understand what the book said and what the protagonist was going to do. Don't tell me that the main plot is very clear. The protagonist wants to prevent natural disasters. I'm not talking about this at all. But isn't the protagonist going to join the Holy Order? What is he busy with now? Does it have anything to do with his goal? Not at all?

It takes 500 points_(:3亅 L)_only 40

The first reason why this book is difficult to read is that there are too many unfamiliar names in the first few chapters, and each name is very obscure and long, which makes it difficult for people to have the desire to continue. I hope the author will pay attention to this issue in the future

The author uses Fengyue's style to set up the world view, but the specific writing method and plot direction are Yintian Shenyin.

It's too strenuous and tiring to watch. Doesn't the author feel that there are too many inner activities (nonsense) of various characters? !

This introduction looks a bit like an apocalypse forecast

Snake, be nice, let me have sex for free and contribute some points (⸍ꔷ͈ᗄꔷ͈⸌)o

This cover is the same as my QQ avatar

Why is the writing of this book so similar to "Apocalypse Forecast"? Is it the same author?

There is a recommendation on the cover of the book, does that mean I didn't add it myself?

The settings and everything are fine, but it looks very messy.

I almost thought it was written by the author of "The Sky of History". A battle can contain several or dozens of chapters.

I think this novel is okay. I have read too many novels, high-quality ones, great masters, etc., And strive to improve them. This novel can be considered a high-quality novel in the book world. The strict plot and characters are quite interesting, but the main line is a bit vague.

Ah, this book looks a bit nice, just, just, add a quality one

This male protagonist's name smells like a meatball fruit