Cybermen Do Not Die to Infinity

Xianxia Cyberpunk

To be honest, it's really heartbreaking to watch. He is obviously a very talented author, but he can't be so good and not so proud of himself. It feels like "ruining" a good book. Although I am not qualified to say that, it is indeed very unpleasant. This book feels like a waste to me. The setting is very good and very attractive to me. But the story is too confusing and tiring to watch.

I'm a newbie, does the author know how to dress up as a woman?

There is no malice. After the author finished writing, did he read it carefully? I feel like I got excited about writing, but then the author didn't write completely what was in his mind. I read it very coherently, including the ins and outs and so on. The reader seems confused and confused.

Vague characters talk vague things in vague places, utter vague concepts, and argue vague theories. This is not the infinite cyber immortality category, this is the horror disaster category.

There is no Einstein and no Heisenberg. Self-viewing is Bohr. When I go deep into quantum physics, I see Schrödinger's cat. Everything is uncertain and dual-image. Waves are not different from particles, and particles are not different from waves. Waves are particles, and particles are waves. The same is true for feeling and thinking in a microscopic way. The propagator is a vacuum of all dharmas. It does not exist or perish, is neither empty nor real, neither increases nor decreases. Therefore, the vacuum is not empty, and there is no absolute accuracy. There are no top-bottom charms, no four basic force fields, no operators, or even Lagrangian. Abel, there is no exchange field. It is a spin-free and supersymmetric theory. Lattice quantum field theory has no wisdom and no gain, because it has no singularities. Superstring theory, so called Ekara Picchu space. There is no classical at heart, super classical allusions, no conflict. Far from the classical coordinates, it is contemporary after all. Hilbert, the world story of Fourier perspective spectrum. Obtain 500 solutions to the power of ten of string theory. Therefore, we know that contemporary physics is a big theory, a big solution, the Holy Grail of physics, and the Nobel Prize. It can eliminate all suffering and is true and not false. Therefore, the divine curse of unified theory is said to be: relative relative, quantum quantum, macroscopic and microscopic, does God roll the dice?

This book is very imaginative and has many jokes, but the biggest problem is that it cannot be overdone. I often feel like I am jumping out of the plot while watching it. Often when the author gets excited, he omits a lot of things and just writes the results directly. And setting is also a big problem. Although there are many settings thrown out, they are not systematic, and the forces are too chaotic. They all appear in a swarm. The author assumes that readers will know them and does not explain much. The biggest problem is that the plot is too confusing, with various Riddlers and no foreshadowing.

It feels like it's about to be finished. The setting and structure of this book are very good, but the dense setting and half-telling, half-hiding narrative style coupled with the obscure language make it very tiring to read. After the novelty wears off, it's easy to give up and lose readers. I hope the author changes the rhythm.

It has a great imagination, rich writing style, rigorous research, and a high concentration of stories. But the plot jumps around, the logic is confusing, and it makes me dizzy.

There are many characters appearing in this volume, which are confusing. Many raiders who have entered this world together; The "extremely smart" Nizun; Muscular Sakai who was written down without realizing it; Yin Jue, who loves chatting but lacks a sense of presence, and other small raiders The team; There are also the taciturn Nakazeke, the taciturn Hanagatayama, and the Yakuza Masaichi Ando who pretends to be brave; the old scoundrel who was hacked to death after five chapters, Nara Kato Nitie; the old Wei who can make green onion noodles. There should be some supporting characters that I forgot about and was too lazy to look for... Anyway, which character is most impressive to you?

I don't understand, but I have a question Since there are other forms of demons, such creatures, why can the four vendors of chaos still jump around? Whether it is Tzeentch, Slaanesh, Khorne, Naren, etc., To put it bluntly, they are the product of the projection of the negative emotions of all living beings in the subspace and the corresponding concept. Isn't it easier for him to deal with them as the Demon Lord of Freedom than to eat a plate of food?

Even Du Gong is updated every day, do you still have the nerve to pull your crotch?

I just finished reading Chapter 20, and I feel a bit pity. First of all, I admire the author's knowledge reserve. There are a lot of ancient texts that I don't understand at all in the article. Although I can't understand it, it must match the artistic conception at that time. Secondly, I think the author's imagination is great. For online articles, the most important thing to become popular is imagination and the amount of updates. Only with good imagination can readers feel fresh and have the motivation to follow up. Only with a large amount of updates can more readers retain it. However, as for the author's update volume, I can only say that it is best to have a lot of updates after it is put on the shelves. After talking about the author's advantages, it is inevitable to say something unpleasant. First of all, the first few chapters develop too fast. Many settings are just known by name, and then quickly ignored, such as what Zhenwu Pharmaceutical is, how powerful it is, the reason why the protagonist traveled through time, whether the protagonist is an innate genius, or has received a mysterious gift, the background and identity of the attackers, and what their purpose is. The amount of information given is too large, which always makes people feel a bit overwhelmed. However, if it is handled well, it can also be a foreshadowing for readers to be interested. But what I don't understand is why it suddenly entered infinity? The foreshadowing and information in the previous article suddenly lost their effect. Of course, I know that these will be explained later, but if I look at the rhythm of the novel in a macro perspective, it feels a bit too fragmented. Also, the setting of the protagonist is really a bit unclear. Is the protagonist a natural person with genetically enhanced genes, a modified synthetic person, or an ordinary person taking drugs? Was he already that sinister and calculating persona before he accepted the Demonic ID card, or was he behaving like this only after he gained that kind of ability after accepting the ID card? Also, did the protagonist look that handsome from the beginning, or did he look like this after taking drugs and obtaining the Demonic ID card? Maybe I didn't read it carefully enough. Anyway, up to chapter 20, I felt a little overwhelmed.

It's not fun to watch at all. . . I would like to ask if there are any other fairy tale novels with such sophisticated nouns? It doesn't matter whether it's a game or not.

This kind of book usually has more people ordering it and less people ordering it. If you don't like it, everyone will read it and leave.

🙂 The setting is quite interesting, but I feel that the entry barrier is too high. The writing is a bit off-topic, and while I was typing, I suddenly remembered that the introduction setting was actually a bit of a drama. It's a good thing that there are many innovations in the power system, but if you can't introduce it all at once, it would be better if you can leave it to explain the current status. Overall, it's a solid work. Keep up the good work and support it with a monthly subscription 😜

Rough format: Name: Age: Gender: (male/female/asexual/bisexual) Race: (bionic person, adjusted person, synthetic person, etc., No specific limit) Main abilities: Appearance characteristics: Approximate personality: What identity do you want: Well, the above columns are optional, and I will make certain changes in the blank spaces based on the specific plot. The criteria for selecting supporting actors are uncertain, but the weaker the actor, the sooner he will appear in the plot_(:з∠)_

Damn it, I couldn't understand it after watching it for a long time.

Between immortals and cybernetics, you must be clear about which layer is the skin and which is the core. You are neither a cybernetic nor a fairy...

Yay! Yay! Yay!

Use two monthly tickets as a sacrifice to summon the Bird of Hermes: Sleep, sleep, sleep, sleep on your horse ×××, get up quickly and update, don't you still have life?

Hold the grass, I wanted to fatten up but now I am a eunuch? 🥵

When you see Chapter 16, please leave a comment. This is not to find fault. I hope it can inspire the author. Please forgive me if I am wrong. Just pretend you haven't seen it! First of all, the writing style is smooth, the sentences are smooth, and the echoes are very good. Personally, I like to look at the writing first. No matter how big the ideas are in poor writing, I don't want to read them. Then, the ideas are very big, too big is not good. From the current point of view, the ideas are just right, not too much, not too little, they are all interesting, and they appear quite timely Then let's talk about the shortcomings. The author is very good at writing. It is obvious that many details have been speculated over and over. But it is one thing to speculate deeply, but expressing it is another thing. Obviously the author has thought deeply. The expression is too shallow. After reading it for the first time in junior high school, I felt that I couldn't accept it! Then I can understand the author's urgency to tell a story, but to be honest, it's too compact! Many authors can compete with each other, but the author is too compact. It is not too much to limit the infinite exile to chapter 100. There is a lot of space in the front to pave the way for the world view. But now I have only read Chapter 16, and I jumped to the infinite world before I understood the world view. . . It feels inexplicable Finally, I don't know the author and noticed that there is no source of power. It is simply inexplicable. I always criticize novice writers who like to talk about a complete theory, while veteran writers will establish a system (of course there is no difference between the old and new systems. I really hate changing the soup without changing the medicine. Change the name. In fact, there is no fundamental difference between all systems). This is the difference between new and experienced writers. The author seems to want to slowly build a system in future articles, but buddy, you have jumped into the pit of infinite writing. You are destined to start in chaos and end in chaos. So before jumping into the infinite pit, sort out the protagonist's power system so that it can be absorbed and strengthened, or you can change the system Above. Please forgive me if there is any offense. This is not a nitpick.

Come on, I look forward to your next book

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○○⸜( "´༥`"○ )What about this update? . . Snake! ! !

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

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It looks unclear, I just can't understand it

I'm sorry, it's because I don't have enough IQ and I have a headache.