Catalog of Forbidden Books in Immortality

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Think about it, according to Uncle Bird's style, could Tianhe be a ring-like Dyson cloud creation of the ancient civilization, whether Yishu of the Zhou Dynasty was analyzed and deduced by a supercomputer, whether Jianmu of the Shang Dynasty was a space elevator, and Afang Palace of the Qin Dynasty was a semi-finished product of the Tianmu starship's sub-planetary ring world. Will there be people from ancient times who will survive in the future? The green-robed nun with a high-energy radiation suppressor whose genes have soared like a fusion reactor, the Kunlun Mountains as the terminal of super-giant magic, the Habayashi Guards whose body has been specially strengthened, the delicacies of mountains and seas cultivated through debugging in the previous dynasty, and the Niwan in Tao Xiu's body as a nano-precision processing factory

After reading the first few chapters, what attracted me was the scientific Taoism of different factions, such as Zhengfa Luotian. I imagined the power of cultivating immortals to control electromagnetic force, but I was not interested in the path of muscles at all.

Is it the life cluster system? Silent Killing fans are ecstatic

It's very artificial, highlighting a situation where everyone doesn't speak human words and everyone is a riddler. I learned the setting of a left hanging, but I didn't learn the perseverance and courage to punch the way forward.

As long as your updates were normal, you would have become a writer long ago!

It's too hard to read. It can't be straightforward and smooth. When I read Silent Kill, the setting was pretty good. The straightforward and tough style is also a major feature.

The Heavenly Ghost Seizes the Weapon Forming Technique! Armor!

I feel that the writing is very good, but when I saw the seventy-seventh chapter, the protagonist absorbed countless Taoist scriptures. . . However, those who can only transform into a mechanical body with flesh and blood attributes either grow in size, or turn their mechanical skeleton into a steam engine, and then use their fists to defeat monsters. . There is also the use of weak psychic spells to influence mortals. . This barren setting 🤐 contains no forbidden arts or curses. . . . The body is very strong and can turn into Godzilla😹😹😹

The comfort of reading is so bad that some parts can be expressed in very ordinary and simple words, so I have to wrap it up 🤔

The background and setting are both good, but the protagonist's personality is a bit too extroverted, which is a bit ruined. It's better to be ruthless and talkative in the Yakuza style. The protagonist of this book is a crooked dragon king at the beginning. He is pretentious and unnatural, talks a lot and is coquettish, and he really likes to sing. . This. . , This is a bit different from what I imagined, I'm at a loss as to what to do

It doesn't look like an ordinary effort. You wrote it for ordinary people to read.

The setting is good, but the story is average. It's more about setting than telling a story. . .

Read the catalog first. I suddenly saw someone wearing a knife but not an umbrella on a rainy night, and suddenly I wanted to watch it.

There is a strong sense of separation between the characters before and after, the performance is exaggerated, and the progression of the plot feels inexplicable.

The discussion part is too long, please make it shorter. The author should not think about releasing everything at once, but should learn to collect it.

The author's writing of fighting is still a bit slow, and the changes in fighting ideas are stretched and scattered in large paragraphs of decorative but unnecessary text, which makes people feel tired after being exciting. The author's writing style is very good, but there is still a lot of room for improvement in the choice of words.

Good luck! Someone come quickly! That's incredible! The little bird has cheated! Originally, I created a bookshelf in the category of eunuchs who entered the palace. There were several novels in it that I thought were very interesting but whose authors entered the palace! I just thought that if those authors completed the practice of the evil-proof sword manual and the Sunflower Manual that day, they would leave the palace again! I didn't expect that! Unexpectedly! It's true that the emperor lived up to his wishes and actually left the palace!

"Silent Killing", "Into the Cultivation of Immortality", "The First Seeker"

To be honest, your writing is pretty good, but I just can't stand it, eunuch.

With the power of my supreme wisdom and god, I will lead you to live a life without fear or worry, because I am your greatest wealth.

The plot of this book is so dense that it jumps from 1 to 10 and then straight to 100. It would be better if it could be explained slowly and slowly. What a pity!

The author has entered the palace? Or something happened?

If a good book is not popular, it must be because the author is unreasonable

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Hurry! ! ! When will it be updated? I really want to read the next chapter! ! ! ! !

I still like Cybermen more.

It's not fun, the grinding clouds and the mountain fog make people feel dizzy the more they look at it

There are always some abstract things found in ancient documents😰

Has the word been deleted from this book? I remember it had more than 1 million words before. Or am I remembering it wrong?