The Pokémon I Created Are Too Good

It's the first time I read this type of fanfic and it feels very novel. However, it is easy to write about multiple types of elves without a sense of immersion. Each type of elves has people who like it and people who don't like it. And there are not enough elves to write about. Unlike traditional fan fiction that only cultivates a few main characters, each of them can appear frequently, which has a profound impact on the characterization of the elves. The author can consider multi-line writing. Like how Xiao Lu teaches Charmander physical skills or the anchor girl's Charmander learns skills, how to fight, and how to evolve the elf. The sense of accomplishment of cultivating elves from scratch to the evolution of elves will be more satisfying than just writing about the main character mass-producing elves and interacting with the elves around him. Or some chapters can be written from an elf perspective on how to work and learn, such as Squirtle becoming a firefighter, or Jigglypuff's journey as a singer. The protagonist just needs to stabilize the main plot rhythm. Of course, La's current writing is good, but I personally don't really like watching the protagonist. The golden finger is too wide open. Finally, I wish this book will get better and better 😊

I've been watching Elf Master recently, and the world view in it is very good. The purpose of going to school is to learn how to train and cultivate elves, and any adoption of elves must be strictly reviewed and there are strict quantity requirements, otherwise it will be quite a hoarding of arms. The country's force is its elves. There are elves in all walks of life, and even criminals can use them.

. . . 90Km/s. . . . It has to reach the speed of light, right?

I just started watching it and now I'm reading Chapter 4. It's so poisonous that I can't stand it any longer. A brief mention of what I personally think is poisonous 1. The system functions were not even introduced at the beginning. From later on, it seems that the system gave all the genetic coding to pig feet. 2. Pig's Foot has just traveled through time, and he can throw away the past and accept his current parents without saying the reason. 3. Pig's feet's personality changed drastically, and his parents didn't react much. (The description of the original owner is submissive and poisonous) 4. The names of the two uncles are too random. 5. The company has gained momentum, but after only one competition, it declined to the point where it could only carry out gene editing once. Don't you just want the pig's feet to show off? This is really too poisonous. Doesn't it mean that the pig's trotter mother has business capabilities? Not even leaving development funds? Moreover, the only two researchers have almost no R&D capabilities, which is a dead end for a company that needs to constantly innovate. 6. The company was in danger of life and death, so Pigfoot agreed to let him do it as soon as he said it. (I don't know the laws of this world, but according to the situation in China, it is definitely illegal to carry out genetic engineering without a license, which has many uncontrollable factors) 7. Pig's feet actually changed the genetic code given by the system at will (the author did not say it, it can only be understood this way), the original owner is a top student, you are not! And the original owner is not at this level either! You have to show off. 8. There is no control group. It would be too lax to not check it after editing! Pig's feet are so confident! 9. The mainstream culture tanks on the market do not have automatic adding function. 🤔 (As for the related experimental process being unscientific, I won't mention it, just treat it as the author's characteristic) 10. The bi-monthly event 🤔 is too unreasonable. I wonder if the protagonist will have to attend this event every time in the future. It's a grand event, this setting is for the convenience of pig's feet 🤔 The people in this world are really powerful. The protagonist made a small Charmander. It took three days to copy it. It seems that it will need to be in the cultivation tank for 7 days, which is 10 days. After it is cultivated, it still needs to grow, right? Do you still need to test it? 2 Months is enough? Doesn't R&D take time? Of course there is no need to attend every session, but what's the point of doing it every two months? 11… There are many more that I really don't want to say.

The main line is best to promote the Elite League Competition, the Gorgeous Competition, and the Exhibition Competition. Introducing elf food or energy cubes for beginner, intermediate and advanced levels. When introducing evolution stones, there is no fixed evolution of elves. It is best to use fire stones to evolve when the fire element is about to evolve. Evolution stones can become a kind of energy supplement and evolution advancement, but they can also evolve without them. Introducing other evolution-specific props, metal coatings, and communication evolution into special machines that emit special energy waves. Introducing mage stones and key stones. As long as you come to the protagonist's company for testing and can mage evolve, you will be given mage stones and key stones. Each person can only have one. However, the mage evolution conditions must be adjusted to the level of bond evolution in the setting to eliminate a large number of people. It is mainly used to promote the bond between elves and trainers. Let the novel reflect the bond and inseparable emotions between elves and trainers or people in anime. The quantity of mage stones must be controlled. The elves that can mage evolve can refer to the anime or add new ones yourself. Do you want to add custom crystals? Don't add Dynamax. It really feels weird and disgusting. Introducing Poke Balls, red and white balls (cheap), (expensive) gravity balls, bait balls, and other types of balls.

I have a suggestion. The world you live in is very advanced in biotechnology. Can you fuse the elves in Pokemon? In other words, by fusing elves with the unique creatures of this world, you can create a brand new species. Since the biotechnology of your world is very advanced, you should do this! You always move the pets from Pokemon to your world, and then let this modern human being sigh, this person is really awesome, this is another type of literary copycat, he has no creativity at all, nothing new, always feels, of course, this is just my personal opinion, it is your business to adopt it, otherwise, everyone knows about those real elves, I always feel that there is nothing new, writing a new species is fun, is it a novel? The two most important points are imagination and writing. I feel that your imagination is not very good, but it may be more exciting in the future. I hope you can write better and better. I have a small opinion.

Pick your favorite! 1 2 3 4 5 6

After reading dozens of pictures, I would like to give some suggestions to the author: 1. The details should be appropriate. Hundreds of elves, each written like you, will only make readers feel the same and have no freshness. The first two are detailed enough, and the following can be summed up in one stroke. 2 The author definitely wanted to write this book because he wanted to write about the real world of elves, so why not make his own alliance? In just one sentence, after a few years, which elves were released, I resumed the league, and then I opened a gym and started a league.                                                                                                         You should only write the publishing wizard. After publishing a few times, readers will get tired of reading it. It is nothing more than what is published, and everyone will comment on how cool it is, how cute it is. A few times is enough, but too many times will not be read by anyone.

The more I wrote, the more crooked it became. Originally, this book created Pokémon. You should just click Create Alliance and let the trainers target Pokémon battles. Isn't the point of watching Pokémon to watch training and battles? You also translated Pokémon dialogues. I don't know if you're just trying to count the words or what? Having read so many Pokémon fan books and anime, there is no translation of Pokémon speech, and I don't think there is anything wrong there. I don't like it when you translate it. Even if the boss next door doesn't write very well in battles, I'll fully support him. Why, because he cultivates and writes well. Watching Pokémon fandom is nothing more than looking at two things. You are now creating Pokémon without instructing others on Pokémon's abilities in battle. Basically it's daily life. I can't see the training and battle of Pokémon. I really don't deserve it for them. You are writing this book, and even if someone really has ill intentions towards Pokémon, you don't have to write it out at all. As long as you are not a Pokémon fan with a dark orientation, basically no one will pick on you. I hope the author can see it! (This may be a bit confusing, please forgive me)

The protagonist is given a Chinese cultural background, but the protagonist's family is all Japanese, and even the important female supporting characters all have Japanese names 😅 Nondelicate, the author is poisoning and disgusting readers.