The Pokémon Breeder

Let's chat a few words. First of all, the title of this book is "Elf Breeder" rather than "Elf Breeder House". The author has read the title many times and is really right. But there are always embarrassing people saying, what are you writing about? Is this an elf breeding house? Apart from hatching eggs, how do you feel about a breeding house? Please! The author writes about an elf breeder! (""Home"")! If there is something wrong with your understanding, then I apologize to you and should not argue with you. But if you are a normal person, you should be able to understand that Elf Breeder writes the story of the protagonist, not the story of the breeding house. The author Jun also wrote in the book: A good breeding house will definitely have a strong trainer behind it. The protagonist of this book, Tongji, will not stay in the breeding house for the rest of his life, whether it is to hatch eggs or take care of elves. The author can write about this kind of daily life, but he will not write all the time. Writing in a loop, is it exciting? The author's bacteria will start a series of adventure stories. Such as: Elf Gorgeous Contest, Elf Gym Challenge, Elf Alliance, Mane Group and a series of adventures, including fossil excavation, glacier exploration... And many other such adventures. The main idea is how the protagonist becomes stronger. Only a strong trainer can protect an excellent breeding house. The breeding house will develop and grow, but the protagonist's strength must also become stronger and stronger. For those who want to see the protagonist guarding the breeding house and doing whatever, please cut the book. There was even a certain anti-fan who directly asked: What are you writing about? It is recommended to watch "~~~~~", and you can also copy it. This comment is the main reason why the author posted this post. Please, if you like that book, just read that book. There is no need to suggest other authors to read it or copy it, right? You will only bring bad luck to that book. The author has never read that book and has no plans to read it! Therefore, your purpose of recruiting gangsters has been achieved. If you like another breeding house book, I suggest you read it a few more times, or ask the author to write another one. This has nothing to do with the author. The author wants to write his own book, with his own outline and his own conception of the world. Let the author copy the book? I can only tell you what the ingredients are, and I don't need the author to say more, right? It's just that there is no moral bottom line~~. Then some viewers may ask, aren't breeders just taking care of the elves' daily lives? Yes, didn't the author let Tongsi take care of his elves, including the wild elves in the backyard, on a daily basis? There must be elf cultivation. You think Xiaogang is a breeder, right? In addition to taking care of elves, including stupid people who can't take care of themselves, isn't he also traveling? Elf breeders not only guard the breeding house, but also travel and take risks. Shinji's brother has been guarding the breeding house, but before that, did he also participate in the league competition? Did he almost dominate the battle zone? Dear viewers, please open your mind. Don't rest on your laurels. It's already 2021. Doesn't anyone still think that breeders are just shit-sweepers guarding the breeding houses? Those people can read those old books, but there is no need to read the author's books. You can say that the author's writing style is not good, you can also say that the author's story is not good, and you can also give the author various suggestions (including subsequent plots, elves to conquer later or adventures, etc.), But please do not tell the author: which book you should read or copy. On this point, absolutely not! Sorry, the author's fungus is really broken! Let the author copy the book. There is no need to say more about the characteristics of this kind of reader, right? How much... Finally, I would like to thank the audience who have always supported the author, thank you! Thank you so much! ! Thank you very much! ! ! …

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Tongji

This book is otherwise good, but the book is too aggressive

It seems that the higher the qualifications, the stronger the combat power of the same class is definitely a drawback. Shouldn't the combat power here be related to level, combination of moves, and tactics? Because if the setting of the novel is the individual value and racial value of the game data, then it is understandable But in the context of the novel, the setting is still the "qualification" of fantasy. How should I put it, it is not easy to accept Qualification does not equal strength, it is just an upper limit.

Electric Shock Monster

I have temporarily seen the degradation of Ibrahimovic, and here are the problems I feel so far: 1. The plot of the first 20 chapters is okay, but the narrative is a bit bland, and it is a bit difficult to grab the audience's attention. Maybe because of this, many people who were attracted by the recommendation in the early stage to watch some of it ran away. This problem has improved after the war with Fire Fox. Although it is not as good as the Great God, at least it can attract people to look down. 2. Interaction with elves. The protagonist is slightly eccentric, and almost all interactions with elves are with Eevee. The interaction mentioned here does not mean training or anything, but daily chatting, communication, or maybe touching and intimate contact. The only scenes in Dengeki Monster are training and battle. This part of Ibrahimovic is good, as his body movements represent the psychological activities/inner thoughts. There are also interactions with the protagonist. 3. It's still a problem with the elves. Dengeki Monster's character is too unclear, while Ibrahimovic's character is too distinct. An Eevee has elements such as gluttony, arrogance, willfulness, unwillingness to fight, and going its own way. I think there is actually nothing wrong with Eevee's character, but after you created it, you didn't use her usual cute side to influence the readers' perception, causing the readers to hate her (although I think this part is okay for me). Perhaps tsundere can be appropriately described as cute. 4. Regarding Ibrahimovic's reluctance to play. Throughout the entire Pokémon world, whether it's specials, animations or theatrical versions, there is no Pokémon that is unwilling to battle. You may be able to describe the story of the 6-player battle where it was reluctant, complaining about the protagonist afterwards, and the protagonist comforting/persuading it, but at the moment it still chose to listen to the protagonist. Or describe a crisis. After Ibrahimovic and the protagonist experienced it, Ibrahimovic discovered his own lack of strength, and then trained hard. You can continue to hate fighting, but you will still strengthen yourself and step up when needed. I think your Eevee may want to create a Pokémon that is unwilling to level up, fight, or work hard, but is very talented (although it only has public qualifications at the beginning). However, if you do not master this aspect well, it will cause readers to dislike it, especially if your characterization of the Pokémon is slightly insufficient. 5. Advance degradation problem. First of all, this is a second creation, which is bound to cause displeasure. . Then you just made 500,000 in the early stage, and you spent it just for advancement, and the readers thought it was a waste of money. Next, this is the product of Ibrahimovic's willfulness, adding to the reader's displeasure. These three points caused the loss of readers and the fuse for Ibrahimovic to be disliked. Also, they will think that you want to copy/compromise the leader and write an Arceus book, which will be annoying to fans of the leader. Let me talk about my opinion on the leader Ibrahimovic: Before he changed his style in the early stage, he created a strong impression of Ibrahimovic and successfully made readers like her. Later, when he cheated Arceus, his willfulness and other willfulness will be regarded as cool/cute. 6. Your rhythm. Although I and some viewers like to watch more daily routines, the early stage (the first 20) is really too bland. It can be fun to have a battle or some plot in the early stage with the audience's exclamation. Advantages: 1. After the battle between the Fire Fox and the Fire Fox, the number of battle scenes increased slightly, but it was not too overwhelming. In addition, your description of the battle is pretty good, and it doesn't look boring 2. After twenty chapters, the overall situation gets better. The characterization of people, Pokémon, and plot has been significantly improved.

Lazy cloth

Dear viewers, what role do you want to play in the book? Please leave your comments in this post. (For reference only, you can use it if appropriate.) Format template: Name: Zhang San Elf: Carp King Identity: Friend of the friend of the eldest son of Liu, the head of the four major families in Hualong Kingdom Personality: Likes to be a younger brother (For reference only, may not be used.)

How can I put it, if there is no Ibrahimovic, I think it would be really interesting. This Ibrahimovic is too open.