A Song of Ice and Fire: The Legend of the Dragon King

Khal Drogo is not a likable character, so this book doesn't do well. Either create an original protagonist, or choose a likable character, such as Dragon Mother and his brother. It would be good to read Wrath of the Sleeping Dragon Next Door.

In the world of ice and fire, there are not only fire dragons, but also dragon bone remains similar to the beast of chaos in the Bible. I wonder if anyone who has seen ice and fire has noticed it? We are about to land in Westeros, and by then the dragon will have grown to the point where it can be ridden. If it destroys everything along the way, then this book will not be long, so the world of ice and fire mentioned that foreign objects that Mr. Martin did not write about in detail will also appear one after another, but the dragon is still the most powerful! In the future, if I write about forces and characters that are not in Game of Thrones or have not been written about in detail, I will add a few more words to introduce them. Otherwise, those who have never seen Ice and Fire will be confused. Once I am confused, I will feel sad 😃

Let's talk about the character Daenerys Targaryen. As a beggar princess who lost her country, she has been wandering around the major free trade cities since she was born. The environment can affect a person, not absolutely, but definitely. She suffered a lot of hardships and contempt, which led her to be full of goodwill towards the people at the bottom. In the early days, Dany was full of gratitude to those who were kind to her, and she valued love and justice. So when she rose up, the first thing she did was to break the wheel of history, liberate the slaves, and strive to let them live a stable life. She even chained up the dragon who relied on her most, and even sacrificed herself to marry the leader of the Sons of the Harpy who was causing trouble in Meereen. As the orphan of the Mad King, who was once the guardian of Westeros, and dependent on her hot-tempered second brother Viserys who has always dreamed of restoring the kingdom, she naturally developed the desire to be a conqueror, but she was unable to reveal it when she was weak. As her dragons gradually grew, the tribes under her command became increasingly fierce. As she grew stronger, her desire to conquer and her desire for greater power naturally overshadowed her original character. She became dissatisfied with allies and cronies who blocked her way or refuted her ideals, and even had murderous intentions. In the movie and TV series, she captured King's Landing and the Iron Throne belonged to her, but she was still not satisfied. She wanted to conquer the entire world. In my opinion, Daenerys lives a very real life, and it is this that is most deeply rooted in people's hearts. There is a question. Many people have doubts about her hair being burned off. In fact, the hair of the Unburnt One in the original book cannot withstand the burning of the flames. The TV series retains her silver-gold hair for the sake of beauty. Otherwise, she would be a bald and eyebrowless woman almost the whole time, which would be embarrassing.

A weak person with dragon blood cannot even beat a mortal. A weak person is not worthy of being a king. I am disgusting and have given up my book.

Looking at the main text, the author actually writes well. However, as the protagonist, he deliberately lowers the protagonist's IQ in order to promote the plot and makes the protagonist do some very brainless actions. It seems very poisonous. In the story of Glory City, the protagonist went on an affair before the city was captured and was almost assassinated by an assassin. The wizards and witches had long been enemies with the protagonist, and they believed in their words and potions to be controlled. This showed that the protagonist lacked basic IQ and was impatient. There are also some words used to express the protagonist's emotions, such as fear and so on. I think the author can use more subtle words. After all, he is the horse king, not Renly. You can describe that even if he has the memory of a time traveler, he will have the same fear and surprise as ordinary people when encountering strange events, but there is nothing "kingly" about showing his emotions. The protagonist feels that sometimes he is a brave and strategic general who charges forward, and at other times he is a timid ordinary person who is impatient and brainless. It is very contradictory. You can see in the TV series that when Queen Mother of Dragons came to attack the city, she was very panicked when facing the giant dragon, but she was able to do her best to plan. So even though Queen Catherine is lustful and vicious, her courage and scheming make the audience have to admit that she is a superior person. Obviously, most of the protagonists in the plot perform well. I think the author can immerse himself in the protagonist when writing it. Think of yourself as the protagonist and how he will behave. Don't write the protagonist as a puppet in order to promote the plot. We feel that the people in the book behave reasonably and have the desire to continue reading. It is indeed not easy for newcomers to write. You have a good attitude. Keep up the good work.

The early stage was very good, but in the later stage, when the Dragon Mother became ambitious, it became more and more unsatisfactory. The writing became more and more confusing. When Poseidon appeared, I didn't know what the meaning was.

The failure of this book is that the protagonist time travels too late? It gives people the feeling of being ready to eat soft rice. This book will definitely be more exciting if you travel back in time when you first married Dragon Mother! ! !

I thought the previous writing was okay, but when I got to VIP, I felt that the writing was getting worse and worse. As a time traveler who knows all the plot, he always wants to find some immortal to predict his fate and gets tricked. Is this him sick? If he continues like this, he can only give up.

I feel like the little clerk is really pitiful. This is the tragedy of the weak. Being used and used by various people.

It's still a little bit less, but it doesn't matter, quality is the most important!