Ozawa World

I've read the first twenty chapters or so. To be honest, it's not that good. A lot of people hate the girl at the beginning. It's not that I hate my sister, but many people write it like this, which is really uninteresting. My sister has this quirky character that many people write about, and the protagonist is accommodating in various ways. To be honest, this kind of routine is so old. Then I went to the hunter's house for an adventure. I knew there was a problem, but I still went in, haha. When there is no other way, just go to the tiger mountain if you know that there are tigers in the mountain. This kind of person has no ability at all and can't solve any problems by going in, so he has to go in and take risks. Ah (ﾉ_ _)ﾉI was poisoned!

Insects come from darkness, support the author

As the author, you should ask your editor to recommend your book. This is a very good book.

No wonder the grades are poor, he's too good at it, the main character has a personality problem, he's too good at it

A reminder for those who have just read this book, the first nine chapters of the book are similar to the setting of an extra chapter. They mainly talk about the origin of Goldfinger. Skipping will not affect the reading. I don't know if it's because the pacing is slow or because it's too outdated. Anyway, I just saw it released. The protagonist has just left the novice village and hasn't even gone to the academy yet.

After reading Chapter 7, I am confused and don't know anything about it. The introduction and content are too inconsistent, let alone the slow-burning foreshadowing. Isn't it the same way to write the protagonist first and then tell the story in flashback? At least it can let the readers know what they are coming to see. I suggest the author change the beginning. It is better to be concise and to the point. Most readers will have no interest and read later. If they are impatient, they will leave directly. I will give the author a suggestion. If you don't like it, you can delete it directly.

Counting past lives, people over 30 feel very childish (; 1_1)

Why is this plot so boring? It took more than 40 chapters to save a small town.

It's too bad for the author, he only has 76 fans after being on the shelves for so long!

It's better to go back and continue writing Dark, and your grades will improve.

Author, if you choose the conjuration system, then there should be no other option. . . This is not a choice. Unless there is some foreshadowing, it would be better to change it to the choice of conjuration system.

The author is so good. What is the first nine chapters about? All interest is exhausted. . Although I don't agree with the three golden chapters, your beginning is really not good!

Remember to read Chapter 11 directly, the first part is not important

See the introduction! I'm not even interested in clicking it anymore.

Author, did you not say in your previous book club that you had released a new book?

Cat-chan~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

It's amazing, in every sense of the word, from the very beginning. This kind of writing power... I decided to analyze the structure of the first ten chapters and learn how to write it so well. Come on, author!