The Immortal of Yujing

How should I put it? I think your writing is very strange and I can't figure out what's wrong with it. It's just that you wrote well in every aspect, but when you wrote them together, it was a mess. It should be said that they were completely different.

Many immortals write about the five kinds of immortals, heaven, earth, humans, gods and ghosts, but there is actually no difference between what they write about. They are all underworld cultivators. The author has obviously put a lot of thought into it. The practitioners in this book are named immortals, but they are actually ghosts. They are also related to many immortality techniques in our ancient legends. They are mysterious and dark, and they are really vivid. I also look forward to seeing other kinds of immortals in the follow-up. Unfortunately, everyone is living a very difficult life nowadays, and they need a woman to vent their anger, so the popular ones are refreshing articles and pretending to slap people in the face. This writing style of the author is difficult to become popular. I hope more readers will like this book.

Bookworm, highly recommended! A novice can't see the charm in it, nor can he see the Taoism in it. Ten thousand people practice Taoism, but only a few can succeed, 😥😥😥

The writing is still good but the plot is very toxic

After reading the first few chapters, I have a feeling that the logic does not make sense. Three questions. One: The two personal maids of the protagonist are the madam's people. So if the madam wants the protagonist's hair, does the maid need to throw the protagonist and then pull his hair? 2: In a world where magic is prevalent, what is the difference between using magic to kill the protagonist and sending someone to kill the protagonist? In order to prevent others from taking advantage of it? The entire mansion is under the control of the madam. Even if you send anyone to kill the protagonist, no one can catch the murderer! Three: Since the protagonist only needs a spell to be cured, how can it be possible that as a father-in-law, no one will treat him? Not to mention that no one will care about him after his father dies. Even if he is pretending, there are too many people who need to arrange for people to heal the protagonist!

👍 A very meaningful fairy tale novel! The author must have dabbled in and thought about cultivation while creating, and his words are meaningful. The writing is precise, the narrative is reasonable, the characters are vivid, and the logic is clear. It is very suitable for old Xianxia readers. As for younger readers who are used to reading mindless and cool articles, turn left when going out.

The most important thing when reading a novel is that the author talks serious nonsense

As an author, I was actually banned. Finally, I am unblocked and can reply to your book reviews in the future.

It's a very ordinary book about harem and reincarnation. The male protagonist is like a peacock in heat. He offends everyone. He will open his screen to show his favor when he sees a woman. Aggressiveness and love of showing off are basically the two characteristics that support the male protagonist. I reluctantly ordered some books to read. The male protagonist has basically offended everyone until Si Tianjian. Known interest group, the author likes to do a stupid thing very much. The male protagonist offended A and ran away. People from A came to check and suspected that B was responsible. But was this calculated by the male protagonist? No, the person who is A is an idiot. The male protagonist has always been so lucky. All kinds of blind cats meet dead mice.

Don't criticize it if you don't like it. It's obviously a work with depth and ideas, but it has to be criticized by some people. You didn't understand the previous book, and of course you don't understand some of the plots in this book. A lot of people just like to read novels written by novices, which are mindless. . .