Ninja Completion Plan

The sauce is bubbling, a cup of milk tea, hot popcorn, crispy snow cakes, raisins, and a small bench in the front row to read a big book ~ By the way, please visit each other ^_^

After reading the first chapter, I suddenly felt that Danzo Nabe King is so cute 😂

The characters in this book are so lovable, just like a sitcom. I wonder when Danzo here will become as dark as in the original book.

First of all, let me say that this book's performance is indeed a rare success. Even if I am a new author, I have a headache looking at dozens and hundreds of collections. But no matter how uncomfortable it is, this book still needs to be finished, and it should be more than two million words. I hope readers will encourage supervision. A new QQ group was created, and its name is Ninja Completion Plan 610418389. I am the only one at the moment, so it is strangely deserted. Everyone is welcome to come and discuss the plot. Originally I planned to put it on the shelves in January, but I'm really embarrassed that the results turned out like this. So the specific time to put it on the shelves still needs to be discussed. If possible, I hope everyone can give me more recommendation votes. After all, if the results are good, I should still want more updates. That's it.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. I think the language style of this book is very similar to another book I have read part of before, "Naruto: Chiba Legend", maybe this one? This is a narrative method that I like very much. In terms of characterization, this book is indeed eye-catching. It does not follow stereotyped character impressions. The images of the Pot King and the two consultants are very surprising. Of course, it is not just the original characters, but many original characters are also very satisfying. The combination of Gongdao and Danan is very well arranged, and Sakumo's love story is also very interesting. In general, it gives people the feeling of a small four-frame theater when watching it. It is also a very life-like story that can be read. Judging from the coherence of the scenes, the author has obviously put a lot of effort into it. Well. After talking about the good things, let's talk about the problems I think this book has. The first thing I want to say is that I don't like people who argue in fan fiction that the author's setting is inconsistent with the original setting. Take One Piece as an example. Hitomi Oda failed to pass the knowledge competition in One Piece. Why should the setting of a fan fiction be exactly the same as the original work? Fandom is a good place for us to continue dreaming about anime, but it is also an independent work. I think it is untenable to use the original character image or ability setting to be too demanding on fanfiction. Secondly, regarding the problem that the protagonist does not look like the protagonist, I think there will be some problems. Indeed, in the early stage when Naoki was not strong enough, he did not appear enough as the protagonist, and there was no attractive plot arranged for him. These problems Yes, it exists, but I quite like to see the author fill in the stories one by one that were not written in the Hokage chapter. I think the birth of the art of extracting minor problems is very good, and since Naoki has the ability to kill elite jounin, the plot of the story is also deliberately moving closer to the protagonist. If there is a shortcoming here, it should be that it is not enough to attract readers, but from the structure of the article, I can't fault it. But whether there are any problems with this book, at this stage, I think there are still some. I think the main points will be on two points. The first is that Naoki has grown up too fast. He became an elite jounin at the age of ten. It was more than a year ago that he even took full action. I have reason to believe that he has hit the threshold of accurate shadow in close combat. So if nothing unexpected happens, Naoki will reach the peak of his shadow before the age of eighteen, and even become a super shadow like the Third Raikage. But the problem is that such an anomaly appears in the three wars, and at the same time, Madara, as an old and decaying existence, will not show up rashly, which will have too great an impact on time and space. It's very possible that nothing will happen to Naruto. A healthy Chaokage and Yondaime, Akatsuki should be gone. There are several possible endings that I can think of. One is that Naoki over-squeezes his own potential and his strength stagnates; the other is that Uchiha Madara takes action and severely injures Naoki; the third is that there is a problem with the spiritual book and the account is forcibly banned. All in all, when someone with qualifications like the Fourth Daime needs to be banned so as not to affect the prince's ability to save the world, unless the author intends to finish the book before Naruto graduates, Naoki must be banned (of course, if he opens a copy of the Unified Ninja World, I didn't mention it), because there is a lack of opponents with matching strength (Nagato Ga I feel that I may not be able to beat him, my body is bruised), so let's discuss it under the premise of being banned. I hope the author can use a method to end this banned life as soon as possible; the fans of hot-blooded comics are actually the same as those of hot-blooded comics. The stagnation of the protagonist's strength will lead to serious assimilation of the plot, and it will lose its appeal. Second, Naoki's thoughts are actually a bit too young for the audience of this book. When we teenagers watch Naruto, the thoughts in it can still trigger our thinking. However, as adults, the topics of love and peace discussed in Naruto are actually quite immature or even unfinished (maybe because my major is philosophy). For the same reason, the author has indeed carefully portrayed the evolution of Naoki's thoughts. It is understandable that the root is ignorant of worldly affairs until now, but I hope the author can speed up this growth to some extent (how can I let someone be a sixteen or seventeen-year-old who has a relationship between men and women... And knows the basic social methods) Naoki is really like a fool now... That's it. If the author reads this, thank you for putting up with my nagging for so long.

No matter how cold a ninja looks, his intestines are warm and soft🤓

After finishing it, let's all turn into orange juice together😂

It's been a long time since I read a Naruto novel with such anticipation.

The writing is very good, but this kind of novel is easy to read

This book is really good! Even the Pot King looks cute

The story is getting more and more interesting, and I want to laugh when I think about the young lady getting up at four in the morning.

Do you want to plant trees too? Kabbalah tree of life?

The first time I read a fan, the first time I registered a Qidian account, the first time I made a deposit, the first time I gave a reward, I have dedicated them all to you, I love you so much. Naruto has been with me for more than ten years, and I have fantasized about living in the world of Naruto countless times. Thank you to the author for taking us to revisit Naruto and feel its charm.

The author's idea is very good. I think the macro ninja world should be like this, but Kazekage wrote something idiotic. The leader of a military group is not bad. Also, although the author wants to write a comprehensive ninja world, this is a novel after all and should give more protagonists a role. I have read nearly forty chapters and I still can't see that the protagonist is treated like a protagonist. Even if you don't explain it in the introduction, I don't know that this guy is the protagonist.