Uchiha Laughs Wildly at the Five Heroes

In every Naruto fanfic, I look forward to torturing Itachi and Obito. No matter how you torture them, as long as you torture them hard, it's a good book! It's best not to let them die happily and keep them tormented every day.

I don't know what it's about. Is it interesting to watch the entire clan being persecuted and killed without any emotion? Very noble? Is it difficult to escape from Konoha? Even with Kaleidoscope turned on, it's all rubbish, there really isn't much to say. Having changed labor and management, it is better to strike first. Catch Naruto directly and release the Kyuubi. Once Konoha seals the Nine-Tails, it releases it once

Showing off skills is too much. Comment on the author's writing style that "everyone is a living person with his or her own story." A plate of loose sand. In fact, there is nothing to say. If you want to write a supporting character too much, the protagonist will be perfunctory, but the story of the supporting character needs a fulcrum. If the protagonist does not stand up, the fulcrum does not exist.

The sight of Hinata makes her sick, that's what a candidate for clan leader is. . .

This author's thoughts are actually about the same as Uchiha Itachi. If a modern normal person has traveled through time, it is actually very simple. If you destroy my clan, I will watch you 365 days a year and liberate the Kyuubi day and night... It depends on how you play in the wood industry. Release it twice, and the ninja armies of the four countries will come over.

Does Uchiha Itachi really love his brother? You killed his entire family and made his life worse than death. You destroyed his entire family and made him live in hatred for most of his life. You can even use other gods to control his consciousness to distort his three views and let him kill his entire family. , Is this love? Is this worrying that the owner has no dog to control him? Let's train the dog for them And isn't Shisui his best brother? Your best brother was killed in front of you and had his eyes gouged out. Your first reaction was not to avenge him, but to kill your brother's whole family. How unlucky must he be to have a brother like you And me The most incomprehensible thing is where that inexplicable loyalty comes from. The family parents gave birth to you, raised you, cultivated your knowledge and talents, provided you with food, drink, and food to protect you as you grew up. From the beginning to the end, they never did anything sorry for you. On the contrary, Konoha has always rejected you, discriminated against you and smeared you. Thinking about what to do all day long. How to persecute you, how to kill you, I have never done anything worthy of you from the beginning to the end, and yet you can still lick your face and treat me like a dog And the reason for killing the whole family was that you thought the rebellion would not succeed. At that time, there were three pairs of kaleidoscopes and a bunch of Jonin, Shisui's eyes were both gods from other gods, so the success rate was quite high. Damn So what if he fails? If Sandai wants to maintain his good-natured persona, it is impossible to exterminate all of you. At least those pregnant women, those babies, and those ordinary tribesmen who have no talent and pose no threat to him can survive Besides, even if you don't plan to rebel, show your blood Rinnegan, if you dare to touch me, I will die with you, We will all die together. With the stubbornness of Konoha's top management, I will never dare to touch you. It's like there is a group of bullies in the village who bully you all day long. They occupy your family's land today, rob your family's cattle tomorrow, and kill your people the day after tomorrow. Try your best, but you parents don't know whether they are masochists or have some serious illness. Suddenly, you have a sudden brain attack and run to help these bullies kill your parents and wipe out your whole family. You can even worry that your enemies have no dogs to control them, so you train your own brother into a dog to be used by your enemies. The thing that puzzles me the most is that there are so many people who call us weasels and can even control him. Compare his image of a man who kills his relatives with the anti-Japanese hero. The prototype of this guy is the murderer near Kishimoto's house. A Japanese devil is still a murderer. What qualifications does he have to compare with the anti-Japanese hero? How can he talk about his spirit, his beliefs, and how great his ideals are? Except for the theory of victim guilt, I really don't see anything else in him.

I'm telling a story of revenge, but it's not just a story of revenge. It is not a homogenous revenge with a simple killing of blood, nor is it just a half-hearted way of killing the culprit. Everyone has his own ending, and every family has different people. They are not an extension of the clan leader's will. They have different choices, different beliefs, and different actions, just like Uchiha Shisui, Itachi, and other Uchiha clan members. Not everyone in the Sarutobi family believes in the will of fire. Hinata will have countless branch families who want to resist. There are also people in Zhuludie who want to change the status quo. Everyone is influencing each other and compromising with each other. Some people never compromise and only pursue the ending she wants. This can form a story, instead of one magatama hitting genin today, two magatama hitting chuunin tomorrow, and the day after tomorrow I will directly kill with kaleidoscope. Finally. Death may be the most cruel punishment for people like Orochimaru or Voldemort, but for those who pursue something other than eternal life, destroying, smashing, and trampling on their dreams or realized realities is the most painful punishment.

In a sense, I admire the author. It's quite impressive to be able to write a book with all negative reviews. . .

It's really a fundamentalist fanfic. I wrote more than 100 chapters of a battle + memories and still haven't finished it. In the third chapter, add 20 chapters of memories, and in the third chapter, add an off-site chat. At the beginning, animation production was not so outrageous, so people just bit the bullet and did some bad work like swapping shadow clones. You are so good at it. Is this battle about to end?

Suddenly I remembered the reason why I added it to the bookshelf but didn't read it. There are three original female characters at the beginning. Kidnapping Hinata shows that the author wants to change the Hinata family, but he has not improved his own strength. A supporting role is always a supporting role. It cannot take up too much of the protagonist's role. In this case, it will be selling the dog's meat over the sheep's head.

After reading Chapter 197, I planned to give up. The protagonist was well portrayed, but the main plot in the early stages was not very coherent. The resulting effect was a lack of enjoyment, the plot was a bit confusing, and the reading difficulty increased. But this is not the reason why I abandoned the book. The real reason is that I think the protagonist has been distorted by the ninja world, or I think the protagonist will eventually become a more powerful Hiruzen Sarutobi. The way of torturing Obito is very cool, because the illusory Lin is used, and it is also very creative to make Uchiha Itachi suffer from schizophrenia, and the method can be said to be very exciting. However, you cannot use such methods on innocent people. Learn how to crack the caged bird and rescue the separated family, but at the same time use the same method to enslave Yuhi Hong! And he still uses deception as a method to lower his intelligence. After all, he is a special jounin who is good at illusions. Okay, even if Kurenai Yuhi is really a love brain and is really willing to undergo human experiments in order to marry Asuma, then your method of gaining trust by consuming Tsunade's credit is not honorable. More importantly, the protagonist takes advantage of the weakness of human nature and uses dishonorable means to enslave an innocent person. Isn't this the same method used by the people in northern Myanmar? I was also wondering if Kurenai Yuhi was an innocent person, but I think she just wanted to marry Asuma. Then the author rigidly sketched out various desires based on this, which was extremely unnatural. In short, I think the scope of the struggle should not be expanded to this extent. When the protagonist has no bottom line, there is no essential difference from Sarutobi Hiruzen Danzo. I just browsed it briefly, but I couldn't stand it anymore. Because I think the author is trying to lower the moral limits of the readers, which makes me unhappy and a little disappointed. Although the story is quite exciting, when this idea appears in my mind, I have no motivation to read on. Personally, we should not use our intelligence to bully honest people, let alone enslave them!

I don't even know why I'm still staying in Konoha after my clan was exterminated. I won't be able to write after leaving Konoha? She even asked the Konoha female ninja to be her wife, and it was the Yuan Fei clan who gave the order.

This was the first time I saw a book with all negative reviews, and the author opened my eyes.

The plot is not good, it's a bad batch. There are also many weird original characters. I really hate these original characters. It's not that the original characters are not good, but they are a bit overwhelming.

There is no need to read further when you see that there is a member of the Hyuga branch in ANBU.

Awesome, I have been short of books recently and I was looking for a book in the light novel derivative fanfic category in the library. I didn't expect to see that this 4.25 Million word book is still level 1. woc, how bad is this? In a sense, this author is also a talented person.

The fan also created an original character, a real bullfrog, and left the existing ones alone.

After reading the first four chapters, I really can't stand it. I don't know what you wrote. I don't know what it means. I really don't know what you want to say. Can't you check it yourself before posting it to see where your writing is not good?

Now in Naruto novels, does the Uchiha protagonist have to be paired with a Hyuga heroine? What logic? ? ? From the Warring States Period to the annihilation of the Uchiha clan, do you think the two clans are better than each other? We all rely on our eyes to eat. Don't you know that colleagues are enemies? How dare a group of branch families disobey the clan? Even if the woman is from the Zong family, do you think those who are disobedient will be allowed to have their eyes leaked? How many are in Naruto's situation? You are a time traveler who leads the system. Do you really think you are better than the natives? Why do you think it was your turn to get the system? Host!

What the hell, the woman involved in Sarutobi and Hinata at the beginning, are you writing about Naruto or Stallion? He also inexplicably escaped Tsukuyomi and Amaterasu, Uchiha Itachi is an excellent killer. Every thought comes out, poisonous weed

I went through more than a thousand chapters and more than four million words. Which world did I think I jumped to? It turned out that there was still Hokage in the back.

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After watching it for a long time, I don't know what the protagonist's special ability is.

In the comics, Fugaku does not have a kaleidoscope. In addition, Shisui is immortal and Itachi cannot open a kaleidoscope. Therefore, except for Obito and Madara, there is only one living Mangeka Jane Uchiha at the same time.