The Steel Ship Island of Great Navigation

I just started reading it, but when I saw Ilya, I was really disgusted by this woman. The author also wrote so many conversations with her. To be honest, is the daughter of such a big family so speechless and without class?

The handwriting is good and belongs to the upper-middle (upper, upper-middle, middle, lower-middle, lower) level. I have two questions to ask: ① Please don't write so naively about the plot of pretentiousness and humiliation between nobles. If you target the male protagonist just because he has a bad background, or specifically punish him just because he is close to a certain white and rich girl? Very naive. Forgive me for my shallow knowledge. I have basically never seen him in society (this kind of person may only live in novels). . . If you want to talk about the medieval setting, you can either throw away the handkerchief or commit suicide (see "The Sorrows of Young Werther") laugh ② That Arthur proposes to you on the first meeting? I think the author should delete this plot. It conflicts too much with Arthur's identity and character. It's too embarrassing to turn a wolf-blooded old man into a rich second generation pretending to be rich. ③Can the author try to break out of the cycle of (killing monsters-upgrading-going to auction) and write something unique of his own? Otherwise it feels very common and meaningless. The author saw that I wrote so much and gave me a comment (funny)

I don't have much leftover food recently, so I'll fill in 100 chapters first 😅, come on 🤓

I really like the power system in it, and I also contributed a few pictures to the protagonist. Mainly because I don't have any money, I just jumped on it. Then I'm so sorry to the author. When I have enough money, I will reward you with fifty yuan of book coins and a full subscription. To express your feelings😁. Daduo arranges some weird abilities, which is fun to watch hahaha. I hope you can see Bixin❤️

I have read more than seventy chapters, and there are no problems with the key points such as writing and plot. However, the author is really a little bit toxic in some places, such as blind shooting, qi turning into armor, arcana, ghost, and too many compound words with unclear meanings or extremely awkward. These really affect the reading experience. It is recommended to change it. In fact, I didn't think much of it at first. It wasn't until chapter 70 or so when we introduced the dissolved monster and the life-limited area of ​​1,000 square meters around it. The protagonist's ability reaches its limit after advancing 300 meters. What is the concept of 1,000 square meters? What is the concept of a circle with a radius of 17.8 Meters and a radius of 300 meters? It covers an area of ​​28w square meters. I always don't like to dwell on such insignificant details when reading books, but I didn't read much of the story here or even that chapter, so I just turned to the last book review to complain about this. After that, I thought about it carefully, and finally came to the conclusion that I could continue reading the book because it was indeed interesting, but the poisonous words before also led to a lower tolerance for some minor problems. If such minor problems can be solved, it will not improve the reading experience in the slightest. (Guixiao will probably appear in the future. Let me complain about it. Guixiao is a mythical pest. Guixiao also describes people and has nothing to do with the region.)

After seeing the exchange banquet between the two leaders, the author's book has a huge world view, good writing style, interesting protagonists, and the layout is unfolding little by little. It is a good book. It's just that the pretentious slap-in-the-face routine is really not popular anymore, there are too many, and the author's routine is too straightforward, and the slap-in-the-face background characters are too facial makeup. There is no need to write so much ridicule for the corner characters. This book should have more than this, and it also describes a wry smile on the face. This kind of description can easily make people laugh now. You can write the protagonist as non-committal, and the word count is the same, but it will not make people complain when you look at it. There are some others that I won't give examples. Anyway, keep going.

This book is really good, there are not too many emotional scenes, and the most important thing is that it only borrows a few settings from One Piece. Most of the settings are mixed by the author himself, so that people who have not watched One Piece can read it. I don't have any suggestions. I hope the author can continue writing according to his own ideas. 👍

The setting is good, and the writing is actually up to par. The big plot is okay, just this small plot. . . It's hard to describe in one word. There was the strange stepmother and step-sister in the front, the strange loan shark money system (while saying that he could not repay the 30,000 yuan, he took 45,000 yuan to make medicines), the strange pharmacist apprenticeship process, the strange embarrassing scenes where he was hidden here and there, and was always exposed, the strange career plan (how did he suddenly become a shampooer...) Until I saw the scene of wearing a bathrobe in the teacher's room to force the teacher's love rival away. I don't like to call this a poisonous point. It's really a bit too cliché. . .

It's well written, but I don't like the protagonist's interaction with female characters, which lowers my IQ a bit.

The world view of this book is very grand, and the new system set with One Piece as the background is refreshing. However, the protagonist of the plot is sometimes really brainless, and there is no logic in many places, forcing rationalization, and the characterization of small characters is not deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. The humble and pretentious writing style is particularly awkward for people to read. To be honest, the shortcoming of recent online novels is the world view. There are already routine templates for dealing with details. Our novel is just the opposite. The world view is grand. But the details are very awkward Some small comments. I hope the author can pay more attention to details and logic. Don't force rationalization. Pay attention to the readers' pleasure. There are too many depressing parts. This book is well-founded. The author has a great starting point. I hope that he can continue to work hard. We old bookworms can also have good books to read.

The world is very big and the author is very ambitious, but I have to say that there are quite a lot of poisonous points. This book is suitable for those who like to be passionate and slowly work hard to become stronger. Forget it for those like me who like to read cool short stories. Although it is not suitable for me, I think this book definitely belongs to the category of high-quality products.

It's a very good book, and it's a very unique game article that I read at the starting point. After reading the whole story, I feel that the author still has a lot of potential to tap. Hope a new one comes out soon. Looking forward to…

Come on, the performance of this book is indeed not directly proportional to the writing style. If you promote it more, there should be hope, so please persevere!

To be honest, I really like this book. It's much better than other Pirates fics. It's not a blind imitation. It's all written according to my own script. I hope the author can make more updates.

The beginning of the book is good, but then there are all kinds of inexplicable plots. I was upset when I read it, the characters were completely destroyed, and the power system was also blown up. There was no upgrade in more than a hundred chapters. The writing was so wretched and arrogant that I became more and more angry as I read. It's a good subject. If you don't develop it slowly, you have no strength but you want to soar into the sky. You can know the plot from the beginning of this book, but it's not as good as the beginning. The road is narrowed by yourself.

If this book is viewed as a refreshing novel, one of the more contradictory aspects is that Pig's Feet has been participating in games at many levels beyond its own level from the beginning. It seems that the character is full, but Pig's Knuckle is a small character at the beginning, and it is a bit too deliberate to be rescued by the boss at critical moments. I haven't had time to read the new book, but I feel that if the logic on this point is more consistent with common sense, I will have better results.

After reading Chapter 50, I really can't help but wonder how toxic the rest will be. I feel like I won't be able to handle it anymore. First-class layout and world view, third-rate plot, and subpar character creation.

Already fully booked, author, if you want a eunuch, I will bring my 40-meter machete to block the house

To be honest, the poor performance of this book is directly related to the cliched and awkward moments after getting off the ship! If it weren't for the huge mixed worldview that kept me watching, the Three Sisters would have been successfully persuaded to quit after just one episode. Except for the slap-in-the-face plots, this book is definitely an above-average level among game alien novels. Especially after the story unfolded, I felt that it was very appetizing. It's a pity that classifying games is really thankless. People who read games are all old bookworms, and they have seen too many routines... If the author of this book is not crazy, he will pretend to be awkward and continue to push the main line with the story. If the book does not collapse, I think it can be improved... If nothing else, subscribe and support. Come on, author, you write well.

At the beginning, I felt like giving up several times, but I became more and more comfortable later on. Come on, author.

The author is great, come on, the subject matter is very good, it is a masterpiece. Never be a eunuch. Already supported.

This is because the introduction has dissuaded a lot of people. If they weren't really bored, they would have entered. I really can't believe how good this book is! !

It can be seen that the author wants to tell a good story, but the foreshadowing is a bit long. In the early stage, the various weaknesses of the protagonist's character were vividly displayed, which aroused "public outrage" from readers. The protagonist does not "mature" from the beginning, but gradually grows up. This growth story is very long, so please read it slowly.

The setting is really good, but the writing is not very good. I originally thought it was the decisive real genre. Who knew that he would still be pretending to be cool in the end? Nobles don't have the same cultivation as nobility, and the education of aristocratic families cannot be such a failure. Getting extremely jealous over the slightest thing, and then trying to find a way to deal with the protagonist? Shouldn't it be that after seeing the protagonist's talent, building a good relationship, and everyone being harmonious, it will be profitable in the future? There is no conflict of interest, and there is no reason to be at odds with the protagonist? The show-off routine from ten years ago.

After reading thirty-one chapters, let me complain about it. You looked like the protagonist when you were on the boat, but you became a joke when you got ashore. Going to a black market and being targeted at home was a lot of troubles. You tried to lie at school and was immediately slapped in the face. Author, did you want to specifically think of a plot to improve readers' drug resistance? The aristocratic lady didn't give her a gift to thank her for saving her life. Instead, she gave her stepmother money, ordered a gun barrel to beep a lot, and sold a recipe that made a lot of money. How the hell is this a black market? It's better to go to the market and sell it. Pulling a fool in front of the principal is like playing a big trick in front of Guan Gong. It completely loses your IQ. I don't know how many chapters it will take to return to normal. Who can tell me, so as not to skip chapters. Some plots are still interesting.

Old wine in a new bottle, I read the first dozens of chapters, and this is probably the feeling. The nobles are still so dirty, the women around the protagonist are always so intellectual, and there are always a lot of gangsters chasing after them. The other women are more lustful than the last, the teacher is always kind, everyone around me can't see the kindness of others, and the characters are more extreme than the other. This kind of world is simply terrible. I suggest that nuclear bombs be used to clean up the world. I don't feel anything at all now. If you don't agree, you can chat with me below and give me some examples.

The masterpieces above the horizontal line are in the game category, and they can't stand out. In fact, the audience of this book should be quite broad. After all, it contains a variety of body types. Maybe it is not well publicized, or maybe the readers in the game zone have a tricky taste. Anyway, it makes the author feel like he is thankless for his efforts. Support the author, come on!

I think it's pretty good, keep writing and I'll give you a free reward later 😃

I think the biggest problem is that the favorability of the navy camp is inexplicably reduced by 50. You know, it has become a reality now. How was this done? In reality, he was wanted after being exposed. Or it's a blood curse. The problem is that the curse cannot be said to be so huge as one force, and everyone will suffer it. Have a contact method. It feels like the protagonist has become the public enemy for no apparent reason. You can't realistically make her a public enemy like in the game if you make an announcement.

Already fully booked and finished reading! The first book I read on the fantasy pirate theme was Zhengqidan, but the results were not satisfactory. The author has quit the book. This book is really well written and the world is quite well-conceived.