Fake Lord

It's too weird to mix things up. I'd be cautious if I came here for fantasy. If I want to write about the Three Kingdoms, I'd also write it in a Western fantasy style. It's really unbearable to write a fantasy lord story based on the names and plots of the Three Kingdoms. It's okay at the beginning, but after seeing the chaos of the empire in the back, I feel that this book can be transferred directly to the fantasy area. 😅 Other shortcomings are that sometimes the plot is a bit 🍬, and the data will be calculated incorrectly. , It's awkward and awkward to use a template to praise the protagonist for any character, and the combat power system is relatively messy, which is still a minor problem You can watch it, the plot is copied from the Three Kingdoms, which is quite exciting, but it is not acted and it is just a Three Kingdoms style, and I am too lazy to think of a way to make a Western fantasy. As long as I can accept the Western fantasy and fantasy mixed writing, I can watch it, but now that it has become fantasy, I can't watch it.

The abolition of slavery is indeed a failure. Western fantasy is completely different from our national conditions, not to mention it is still the age of magic. Slavery will only be implemented more thoroughly.

Disappointment Chapter 230 started writing a pornographic book. Give up decisively

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Why does a farming novel give the protagonist such an abstract stand-in identity, and also insist on a buff that will kill him if he doesn't detoxify for 3 years? Do you think it's too enjoyable for readers and is deliberately disgusting? Although I quite agree with you leaving your comfort zone, you have to be smart when writing about farming. Is it reasonable that you can occupy a high-yield mining area with 20 people? I have read farming stories before that have good writing and stories, but very unreasonable logic. I really need to be more careful.

Who invented this "medieval fantasy" and is it still used by these authors today? Instead of focusing on describing fantastic geographical scenery, fantastic animals and plants, fantastic unsolved mysteries that are revealed by the protagonists, etc., Instead of writing about medieval political struggles every day? Here Comes the Dragon and The Witch are popular because they have fantasy elves and dragons and witches. What do you have in this book?

The author's understanding of the military merit system is completely wrong, and understanding it as a so-called promotion channel for the lower class is a pure misunderstanding. I can even say that the military merit system is a more cruel exploitation of the lower class, and it is by no means a welfare. It is even far inferior to the feudal system, and is a typical thing that is bound to collapse. Author, when you borrowed this thing, did you forget that the Qin Dynasty only lasted for fifteen years? Liu Bang and Qin Shihuang were contemporaries. Have you ever seen such a short-lived thing in the second unified dynasty? Even Yang Guang in the Sui Dynasty was better than the Qin Dynasty! I won't mention the more complicated ones. I will just talk about two serious problems with this system. If you understand it as a promotion benefit like the protagonist, then, if after a few battles, your enemy is very tenacious and has withstood your invasion even though it has sacrificed a lot, and you have gained almost nothing by using the tactic of fortifying the wall and clearing the field, what are you going to reward your men who have beheaded a lot? Especially since you have formulated a strict reward gradient, you can't deny it. Maybe you can still get credit for the first time, but what about the second time, and what about the third time? Sooner or later you will be torn to pieces by angry men, and then replaced with new military leaders who can give you money and benefits. After all, the absolute legitimacy of your so-called nobility has been removed by yourself, so you yourself are no longer special and can be replaced at any time, just like the old story of Wei Bo Jiedu (so this This system is not even as good as the medieval system of enfeoffment. At least one must conquer a certain piece of land and win a victory with a lot of loot before he can reward the enfeoffed knight based on his merits. Relying on the head is really nonsense) The second question is that this promotion system is completely based on personal analysis of pros and cons. You If you try to rely on rationality to build the enthusiasm of soldiers, you will inevitably encounter a serious problem. Your soldiers will also rationally realize that once they die, all the so-called military achievements are meaningless, so they will quickly become an army of oilseeds who grab heads when the wind is blowing and flee for their lives when the wind is blowing. , When the time comes, those who will fight to the death to protect you may still be those few guards who have received traditional knightly education In short, you will definitely not be able to fight a tough battle, you can only fight a smooth and easy battle, but anyone can fight this kind of battle So, how did the Qin Dynasty solve these problems? It's very simple. The first point is to punish everyone as criminals first, and then use military titles to offset the punishment. This way there is no need to issue rewards, and it can squeeze the people's power to the greatest extent. For example, the Qin Dynasty stipulated that all people must serve the country for three months every year, but in fact the service is often overdue. It is normal to even travel time, and serve half a year for half a year. If you want to be exempted from hard labor, you have to go to the battlefield to obtain military titles, and there are other major issues. There are many strict laws, big and small, that may be violated if you are not careful. If you violate them, you must rely on military honors to atone for your crime. In other words, military honors are not a system for ordinary people to work hard to become nobles. The military titles that can be obtained are basically middle and lower-level titles, and there is no upper-level title that can make you a noble lord. The upper-class nobles are basically monopolized by blood In addition, military titles cannot be hereditary, which can even avoid the problem of too many titles and no one to serve - you don't have to serve, your son still has to serve The second point is that the Qin State has not solved it at all. The Six Kingdoms were more powerful, but the Qin Dynasty did not have much headwinds. Later, at the end of the Qin Dynasty, the Qin Dynasty army made almost no movement, and Xiang Yu surrendered as soon as he was beaten, but was killed directly after being surrendered As for the system that the protagonist created on paper, it is not like a military system. Anyone who has some experience will laugh it off and marvel at the adaptation of the aristocratic system. I think this princess is also from the Tang Dynasty

The title setting is a real failure. In Chapter 27, some samurai, fan lords, generals, and palace lords appeared. I thought they were talking about the Japanese hierarchy. Of course I'm not familiar with Japan either. Why not just use the system of Gonghou Bozinan? I don't know what the author's innovative use of this system is, but it looks really awkward. Innovation in novels is important, but it is mainly for the plot and the practice system. If you invent a title like this, I don't think it has any use other than to distract readers. Anyway, I read Chapter 27 with great interest, but I choked on the title of the title.

The development of this story has already been written down. When writing about a fantasy world, just write about the fantasy world and don't engage in political establishment or the Industrial Party style. Originally, when I wrote about the psychic system, I wrote according to the organization and worldview system. But I was really speechless when I wrote about slave workers in so many pages. Each book was worse than the last. If the direction of this book is not adjusted, the beginning will be useless. Also, the progress in the last two chapters has been too fast. The emperor was killed in one fell swoop, and chaos ensued. The power system hasn't been set up yet?

The most powerful chancellor of an empire in an extraordinary world. His son had an affair with the wife of the general marshal of the empire and he was able to get things done. He was so smart that he was on the same level as the Four Emperors of One Piece. His deputy housekeeper was so weak that he was defeated by two third-rate criminals at the border. Are you telling me that the red-haired first mate was defeated in three seconds by two young men with a reward of 10 million? Why don't you write about extraordinary people and come up with such a big background? In the end, the butler in the family of the empire's powerful prime minister can't defeat the second-rate bandits in the backwoods.

There is still no golden finger on the roadside, still playing games with the air, still using wisdom, still the history book, still AI, still no fun, still fake.

Why does this author keep writing more and more times? I can't believe he has written the Alchemist before. The following books are not good at all. They are very novel in style, but I feel that the works have become very middle-class and childish. Some settings and plots are so old.

It's so disgusting and anyone can continue to read it? I came here to see a cool novel, not to see the protagonist being walked around on a dog leash! ! !

That third lady. For shipping. When the protagonist went to the engagement party of his love rival. It was said that the protagonist's nominal father asked him to meet this third lady and get married. Go to 151 and chat. The third lady said, don't even think about swallowing up the people and the fleet. The protagonist was very confused and said that he didn't know about the marriage. I really can't stand it anymore. There are a lot of women around the protagonist. Each of them is extremely good, but each of them has not established a relationship with the protagonist, and at the same time, they all fall in love with the protagonist... You took the initiative to contact me at the engagement party, and the other person was also the one who received the news of the marriage in your family. The characters in your book can be wise, or they can make mistakes due to misjudgment. But you can't treat readers like fools. Every time I see the interaction between your protagonist and the female supporting character, I get embarrassed. Do you still want to make money by writing like this?

I started boxing again and didn't want to watch anymore. The whole writing style has a Jiuzhou style that is neither earthy nor foreign but the urban-rural fringe and has a fantasy rotten tomato flavor. You put the patriarchal system on your body all day long. I wonder if you people have some weird hobbies. You always describe being played by powerful women.

There are a few problems now. It would be poisonous to maintain the identity of 'Arthur' after three years. There is also a sense that I don't like Arthur's fiancée and that thing. If there is a chance in the future, I can run over it.

When I read Chapter 103, I found two poisonous points. One is that the protagonist in the early stage is a chatterbox and has a lot of psychological descriptions, but I can barely get through it. Until 93, the female Asian appeared, and the protagonist fought a siege battle with the zombie tide in the city. This woman attracted a group of high-level zombies and almost destroyed the city, and several of her men died. As a result, he still raised this woman directly later. She lost her memory, so he didn't care. All his men died in vain. The key is that he also imitated the pension scheme, built monuments for the dead, and then turned around and let the woman go. I said, don't be so disgusting about double standards. I almost lost all my money, I almost packed up my things and left, and I didn't feel any emotions at all. Why did you set up a military academy or something like this for the protagonist? Seriously, anyone who can train such things is just for the sake of recruiting evil for the military. It's not as good as the city of the King of War.

It's a piece of rubbish internet memes that are dressed in + useless Manchu language, and it's not a pig's trotter with a bunch of strokes in its mouth that doesn't contribute to the plot at all. With these points, you can continue reading.

Just like the title, the subject matter is really good, and the writing is not bad, but there are too many weak points in the plot. It is so uncomfortable to watch. The author did not realize the pain. Is there any high-level replacement?

The timeline is so stuck, the total timeline is less than a year! From a team of 12 people to 70,000 people, two cities have been built! I wish I could do everything from getting pregnant to having a child, going to school, starting a family, and becoming a grandpa overnight! There is really no process, just numbers, no brains and no logic! Overall, the writing is good, but the timeline is too illogical! A war involving hundreds of thousands of people ended in three to five days. There was no need to pay attention to spring planting and autumn harvest, and no attention was paid to war preparations. From the beginning to the end, it was just like playing house!

I have read 3 of Blind Hou's books, Cataclysm Card King and Mechanical Alchemist. From the content point of view, Mechanical Alchemist and this book obviously share the same world view, and the realms of these books are also quite similar. The beginning is easier to read. I think it has surpassed 90% of the authors who started it, even better than the platinum ones (in fact, many platinum masters will rush off if they don't have a halo at the beginning, the beginning is too slow). I think the problem lies in the overall style. These three books are in the comfort zone and have breakthroughs, but the flavor is so strong that I can tell it was written by him without even looking at the author's name. The first two books are actually the same, that is, the protagonist fights monsters and upgrades to become stronger. This book focuses on the military, and in order to avoid the bug of one person destroying a country, the strength system of this book has been obviously weakened (Chapter 200 First-order Awakening, I remember 4 sleep in the previous legend, the current combat power ceiling is Hitoyuki, Shelley, almost legendary level). In terms of war, in fact, if you win the Yinse Fortress, you can conquer the separatist faction in the Southern Wasteland. The Yinse Fortress is a key node, similar to Shanhaiguan. The other is the issue of power. On the surface, it seems that the protagonist is innovating the system, but in fact it is a strongman politics that relies heavily on himself. Without an upper class like a party decision-making circle, it is impossible for the system to still function without the protagonist. It is very self-consistent for the protagonist to introduce Vayne to Tongyue. Alchemical medicine is the core resource of the territory and is provided by the demi-humans. As the heir, Vayne must establish a relationship with them. The next step is how Vaien can make Bu Yi, Jon, Xia Ba and others recognize her. This decision-making circle is very important, similar to the current political parties. Only when there are political parties can we say that the system can still operate after the death of the protagonist.

Awesome. In Chapter 200, you are still being treated as a dog. You have just awakened.

I saw where it was written. It has been a long time since it was updated and it means death by poison.

Several of your books started off well, with huge backgrounds, but then fell into all kinds of useless work, and the more you wrote, the more ugly it became. At first, the lords were good at farming, and you were good at training the army and recruiting people. Suddenly, the style of the painting changed, telling readers that the power of this world is the key, and any number of armies is useless. No matter how good your training is, can your army be able to face a mountain? However, the secret keeper can summon the power of God alone, and what a mountain can suppress the old days. Why are you writing this stuff? It seems that the protagonist trains the army like a clown🤡

In fact, it's barely okay, mainly because it's too watery, it feels like a running account, there's a lot of content, and there's nothing substantial about it. It's like treating others as fools. You write it over and over again. The content is too cumbersome and could be streamlined. It's too bloated, there's a lot of talk, and the data fluctuates a lot. You should just lose your mind and read it.

It's really disgusting if the dog's leash is not taken off anymore. Dozens of pictures of people picking up the dog's leash back and forth, asking that woman to take over if he dies, are going to make me sick.

The more you write, the more vulgar it gets. I can't stand it any longer. Have these two novels not improved at all? Stitching only stitches the format, and all you want for the name is Dragon's Breath, which makes me vomit. Also, isn't more than 80% of the stuff you wrote the leftovers from Zhu Xian's game?

He keeps a harem at every turn, and has sex with women whenever he sees them. Whether they are familiar with them or not, they are naked and candid. It is disgusting to watch!

It's too messy, there are too many stitches, things like Game of Thrones One Piece are all there, I can't stand it anymore

The protagonist has too many OSs when he is practicing. Often the whole article is just listening to him talking in his heart, and it is impossible to tell how strong the protagonist is. Every update has duplicates. I only give you an unexpected event at the end of the article and then wait for the next chapter update. If you get strong props or secret techniques, you must be able to show them. There is an explanation function but you can't see the powerful shock exerted by the protagonist, and the reader loses the sense of expectation. It's like watching the movie version of The Lord of the Rings. Everyone is rushing to grab the ring. As a result, the ring is invisible and you can't see how powerful it is. I don't know if the director can't make it or the author didn't write it. Anyway, it is a science fiction movie that I think failed.