Master Fa Will Always Be Your Uncle

There are a few parts of this book that stuck in my throat and were very uncomfortable. 1. The male protagonist began to be unwilling to accept the women in the game, and then one day he became indescribable with the queen and Vivian. Among them, even if the queen can't break through any strange things, Vivian is obviously already there. But there are Xisha girls in real life. Although they weren't together, they didn't refuse. They said they wanted to pursue her, but then it didn't happen again. Can the author handle this relationship well? It's okay to have a harem in the game, but can we handle female relationships well in reality? 2. Regarding the handsome Shu Ke, he actually has a wife, but the people in f6 default to Xiao Longnu as his woman. Isn't this fucking cheating? If the author can't handle the differences between the two worlds and just plays harem or engages in ambiguity, then the book will be like this at best. Too much poison. In addition, the character and design of the queen don't matter, but can you get divorced and then have sex with the male protagonist? Do you just love wives? Isn't it disgusting? The whole book is filled with the author's strange experiences. To be honest, this kind of person can have a wife, and I quite admire his wife.

Harem. What year is it? For the plot of Xisha, I even wonder if the author has changed someone to be able to write it to such a poisonous level. There are also various other poisonous points about eating books. I can remember at least four or five of them. The Queen is a more vivid and three-dimensional character, but the others, including the protagonist, are mediocre. I basically have no impression after reading it. The ending is also a bit rushed. Although I don't know what the specific problem is, it just makes it uncomfortable to read. ... But I still finished reading it. The biggest motivation is that I like the sword and magic genre recently, and it has game elements. In addition, the author's views on interpersonal relationships are quite good, and occasionally there are some sentences that are very well written. Overall it is worth a visit and it is basically worth the money.

The beginning is really amazing, especially the description of the two golden sons grinding the nobles to death. I am really excited. But when it comes to Vivian, the breakfast girl, and the queen, it feels super unreasonable. At the beginning, there is a causal-level handsome-haired setting that can be used as a joke. This main character The plot behind the character is a bit confusing. It's rambling here and there. I feel like the author didn't write such a colorful world. It all revolves around the protagonist and has an affair with three female characters. I can't see where the relationship between the protagonist and the female characters is based. And the curator Jin is just disgusting. The most important thing is to make money with sand sculptures. Wouldn't it be nice for you to walk around the mainland and show us the charm of another world? Every day I shouted to increase my strength, but the result was to play with the puppet-breaking spell, and I was also proficient in the space system, but the result was a teleportation spell. I have to stay in a broken magic tower. Every day I will write about the protagonist fighting the autumn breeze, engage in several big plots, drive a few colored cars, and dozens of chapters will pass. The other players are just backgrounds. Apart from showing their faces in the comment area, in the game they are just a bunch of bastards calling 666 to the protagonist. As for you, the protagonist group, you are one of a kind, one of a kind, a dragon and a phoenix among the people. This game is not a virtual world, it is a daydreaming method. To be honest, it looks boring at the back.

I went to -_-|| to see the latest chapter. I feel that the author can write dozens more chapters...

What a pity. The outline of the writing is good, the writing is smooth, and the setting is relatively rigorous. It is one of the top three works I have seen in the online game category. What a pity. The ending is too fast. The hasty ending ruins the overall quality. If it were written according to the rhythm, it would definitely be regarded as a god-like work. Now I feel that most of the godhead has been condensed and the energy has been lost. It's uncomfortable, Ma Fei

The writing is getting worse and worse, and is no longer at the same level as before. It's getting more and more in the direction of brainless white writing. Come on, author

Ever since the Queen appeared, I couldn't stand the book anymore, and I don't know why.

After reading it, I feel that it is quite satisfactory. The first part is more exciting. I read it more seriously in the early stage. When about 600 chapters, my interest was not high and I read faster. I also read a few chapters of noble heraldry today, but I can't get into it anymore. Looking at the entire starting point, this book is still above average. It is thoughtful and fluent, but the characters are seriously over-represented and the writing of women is not good.

The early stages of this book were okay, and the show-off drama between the players and the natives was a bit interesting. But the powerful skills the protagonist can compile are too much. I can accept the fireball and blue in the front, but I can't accept the CD-less, infinite duration and super high speed of the human cannon. I was so disgusted by this skill that I gave up. After reading books for more than ten years, I really can't stand this kind of plot novel where the protagonist mindlessly crushes the enemy after making his first pot of gold, and neither the enemy nor the supporting characters have any brains. I deserve to be in a book shortage all the time, alas!

The text of this novel is relatively new, but the author's writing skills may not have a general title framework. It feels that there is less and less substantive content as you go to the end. When you read it, it feels like a large paragraph has been skipped at once. It also describes too much realistic content. It is obviously a virtual game title, and the role-playing of the justice hero in the game is a bit out of place. Isn't it good to follow the plot flow of the copy? I hope the content is richer instead of feeling like I've watched something less.

I really like this book. I think the world view established by the author is quite good. Some brothers may think it is a bit holy, but I think everyone has different views on others. Why is it not good to write a world view in which one's heart is not so dark? There are good and bad, the author's style is here. If you have a picky eye, nothing may catch your eye. The authors are all human beings and storytellers. Let's patiently listen to what the author's story is like.

I can't stand reading this book as I write it.

Really at the beginning, the setting of this novel is really attractive. I also like the daily nonsense between players and NPCs. The protagonist studies magic and it is really interesting. But I don't know what I am writing about later. Write about reality. Write about games. You can have a harem like Mars Gravity, or you can learn like Lost Leaves. Focus on the game and do some operations. The reality is written like an urban novel. Weird relationships are really not necessary. You develop the master step by step and become awesome. It will be good.

A friend recommended it and I finished it in one go. I really like the game world constructed by the author and the values ​​​​of the protagonist. But there are still a lot of things to complain about. 1. The extraordinary difficulty of upgrading the mage. It is understandable that the author hopes to highlight the rarity and difficulty of the mage profession, so as to reasonably highlight his high power. But now the restrictions and differences of the mage profession are so different from other professions that they are simply not part of the same game system. My suggestion is that while mages need to rely on mathematical modeling to learn to cast spells, there is also a relatively simple and rough upgrade method to ensure that some mages who are willing to persist can continue to upgrade, so that the world will not end up with the protagonist at level 100 and the other mages adding up to level 100. Other professions should also increase the difficulty of upgrading and be affiliated with reality to make mages less special. You can refer to the archers among dungeon players. 2. Derivatively, there is a problem with skill casting in this game. Now it seems that all skills are instant and silent. Firstly, it does not meet the positioning of pseudo-DND, and secondly, it is inconsistent with the difficulty of learning magic as a mage. The third is that it is inconsistent with the "magic casts spells by reciting incantations" mentioned in the first chapter. I think this is a detail that the author failed to consider. In other words, after becoming proficient in a certain spell like the protagonist, you can reduce the cost of casting and speed up the reading of spells. However, it is very frustrating that the magic given initially cannot be cast (at least it should be cast by chanting a spell). In addition, it is also very frustrating that once you learn it, you will no longer be able to read the spell. The suggestion is that all spells can be cast after you learn the spells when they are in line with your own level. After you learn how to model, you can quickly cast the barrage/release across levels. After you become proficient, you can basically cast it without the barrage by relying on keywords. The same idea should apply to the skills of other professions. You can't make mages completely different from other professions in terms of basic concepts. You still have to abide by certain general rules. For example, the warrior's shield attack, if you activate it by shouting, you have a chance of being stunned first, and a CD when you activate it second; but after you become proficient, you can use it at will, which means you can use it flexibly. Now the protagonist is invincible, and it feels very boring. I feel that this kind of routine where only the protagonist is powerful is no longer applicable. As a leveling stream, you should at least create a situation where although there are always enemies as powerful (more powerful) as the protagonist, the unique advantages of the protagonist allow him to grow quickly, and he can quickly catch up with and defeat this powerful enemy after suffering a loss. It's not fun to just abuse food. Some people may say that there is no boss at this stage, but the overall environment created now has the protagonist No. 1. He is the peak of the masters, and other masters can't catch up. This is not conducive to the development of the plot from the overall environment. There is no competition, and it is easy for the follow-up to become dull. Because the protagonist must have constant adventures and endless struggles. He is number one in the world now, he will still be number one in the world after thirty chapters, and he will still be number one in the world after three hundred chapters. How can he compare? What else is there to say about this story? Some simple opinions, for reference only.

The previous book was about Beta in "Heraldry of the Nobles", this one is about Roland, what will the next one be about? Will you write about Shu Ke? Looking forward to Shu Ke and Loli Dragon Margaret

This is the best book I have read this year! The biggest reason is innovation! Yes, after reading the ubiquitous system articles on Qidian, it is really not easy for someone to break out of it and write something new! (The system novels I'm talking about here generally refer to novels about the protagonist who relies on the system to survive, upgrade, and soar to the sky. Although this book also has a game system, this system is not the core of the protagonist's upgrade. The protagonist relies on scientific research to upgrade, which is a 24-hour daily grind.) After reading the excitement of these system novels, starting with a knife of 999, soaring on the spot, etc., The rest is empty (like The malaise after that) But this book is substantial and long-lasting. Although the author cannot last long (dog head🐶 to save his life), although the protagonist has a good talent at the beginning, he still gets a headshot at the beginning. There is no genius, only 24 hours of explosive life. When other players attack the beautiful NPC, the protagonist is still nesting in the magic tower doing scientific research and becoming the number one magic master. There is no destiny, just hard work! The second advantage is the setting of the world background. The ordinary real world and the extraordinary interface in the virtual helmet are very soft and balanced. (However, the conversion between game time and the real world seems a bit illogical, but it must be retained. "The game time is from 10 pm to 10 am. If you enter the game outside this time, the time in the game will be static.") I hope the author can fill in the pit. The third is the human thoughts brought about by the novel. Facing vivid NPCs, whether you can ignore morality in the game world or stick to yourself is something that not only the players in the novel have to think about, but also us outside the novel. (Especially the plot where players massacre a city for a gold mine is the most thought-provoking) This is the sublimation of this novel. It is separated from those vulgar plots and seems to be a heavy real world!       ，…       ，，！ Finally, the author feels that I have typed so many words, so I will update it quickly! Otherwise, I'll send you the blade 🙂

I see that all the character descriptions are male. . .

I read nearly 400 chapters in a row on the first day It's very interesting and innovative It's a pity that the slightest hint of a harem made me abandon the book.

Updates are so slow. It's still short 😭 and it's not enough to watch.

Come on, it's a very good book. Don't listen to those people's nonsense. I really like the author's style, but the amount of updates every day is not enough to read 😁😁

The book is good, but the update is really slow. Other books have updated 100 chapters, but this book has only updated forty or fifty chapters, which is a bit unsustainable 😅. If the update is slower, I can put this book on the list of things I can read in my lifetime.

If there were more passers-by, there would be more of a grand world. The IQs of all the supporting characters are described online.

It's pretty good-looking, but I feel like I've dug a lot of holes and haven't filled them in yet. In fact, it doesn't have much of an impact. It just feels like the logic is inconsistent. For example, the vampire player showed up, and the true ancestor of the blood clan was almost dead later. It felt like the vampire player was completely useless. . . Or perhaps, the identity of the elves is only recognized by the elves, and the red magic tower with the bug skill of Elemental Incarnation does not even know that it belongs to the elves. . . There are still some messy things, which are considered pitfalls, but it doesn't matter if you don't fill them in. Faye Luolan nb is over. Roland, who loves studying magic, is the genius in my dreams.

As in the title 😍😍😍

Seeing the floating city + mechanical creation, I feel that this is not magical at all but very scientific

Some plots are too IQ-degrading, such as the public trial part. I have lost my IQ after watching it and stopped watching it.

Update, look at the small monthly ticket in my hand

Irregular driving made book friends cry 😢

Let me tell you how I feel. It seems to be getting more and more inconsistent. I saw the chapter where I sent petals to Vivian. I don't know the connection between the author's previous books and this one, but when the protagonist knows that the game can affect reality, he gives away his ten years of life. I feel that it is nonsense. After all, he and Vivian have never merged, and the protagonist has also absorbed energy in reality and started to practice. It is a choice made in this situation. . . Should it be said that the writing collapsed, or that the settings were compromised?

I don't follow this book every day. I subscribe with free coins intermittently. It's been more than half a year, so I'll just talk about it casually. The three perspectives of the protagonist are well written, and the game is also good. For me, the most disgusting thing is the female protagonist. I haven't finished it yet, but I think I've read about 300 chapters. I have nothing against harem stories or anything like that. If the emotional line is well-shaped, then that's no problem. There is no objection to the fact that the heroine was once someone else's wife, and now there are many women who are getting married for the second time. What I object to is that the background is in modern times. I saw that the protagonist has thoughts about Xisha and also has thoughts with the two women in the game. I really can't accept it. Xisha is a normal modern woman. This game is in the real world. Do you think a normal modern woman would tolerate her husband having two other women? Even if they are not in the same world. Let me just say this, for most people, either the protagonist only needs a woman in the game, or only Xisha. You can only choose one of the two, and choosing both will only make people feel sick. After all, the three views of the protagonist are so well written, and he is not a playboy like Li Lin. Never force yourself to write something Xisha is willing to accept, that would be even more disgusting. How can I write this emotional line smoothly? I can't think of what to do if someone sees it, please tell me which chapters, I will read it, but for now, I have to leave before I don't hate it. I hope the author doesn't write it down.