Knight's Path to Glory

Some readers, please pay attention to your oral ethics and do not speak in a straight line. You are the reader, I am the author, no one is nobler than the other. If you think it doesn't look good or too watery, go out and turn right. There are piles of books written by the great masters of Qidian. There is no need to speak harshly. I have not asked you for any data such as recommendations, collections, rewards, etc. I have repeatedly reminded you of the author's words and what kind of book this is, and I don't want to waste your precious time. I have a job, and I use my spare time to write books. I don't earn a penny. It's just a hobby. Therefore, you are not my parents, and I am not your father, so there is no need to coddle you. Again, before reading a book, read the author's book review to avoid reading it that doesn't suit your liking. I accept both good and bad reviews. But! ! ! You can't say bad words! To put it bluntly, before you scold me for my poor writing, ask yourself if you can write an 800-word essay well.

The second baby of the cute new author is about to be born, and she is very excited. It's 3:30 in the morning and I'm getting ready to go to the hospital.

Written for those who have one eye and ten lines, take the first ten chapters as an example. The first two chapters: the past life and the origin of Goldfinger are almost useless, and the foreshadowing left behind does not know how long it will take to be used. Chapter 3 to 5: Write an introduction to each race. You can skip it completely unless you encounter these races later and the author does not intend to introduce them. Chapter six to eight: A little bit of useful information, a very obvious routine, it is rare to encounter someone who spends eight pages writing a panel. (The ones I encountered before that had long panels were basically games, or fanfics like pirates, which were only two or three pages long.) Chapter 9 to 10: I don't know what to say. Things must have a cause and a result, right? The cause is the task, the process is the completion of the task, what about the follow-up? If a nobleman does something that is inconsistent with his status, the consequences should at least include reactions from his family. The general content is like this. Anyway, I personally don't think it looks good. Although I don't understand 🤫 in depth, but if I have the time, it is better to find a few more attractive early books.

I have had a bad cold these past few days and my mind has been confused. The author has a habit of not catching a cold for several years, but when he catches a cold, he feels like dying. Then, I saw a book review that probably meant "what a** joke in every chapter." The author was a little funny, a little aggrieved, and a little sad. I don't know, does a newbie online writer even entertain himself and make readers unhappy? First, my book is on the shelves, but I have been posting free chapters until now because I am afraid that if it is not well written, people will read it and defraud people of their money. Second, dear gentlemen, forget it if you say that the books I wrote are not good-looking. Those jokes and riddles are all classic jokes and were not written by me. Third, I didn't use it to cheat on the word count. I included it in the author's remarks, just for the author's own entertainment. Doesn't it hinder the readers' perception? The author compiled these things, which is time-consuming and laborious, but rather thankless. Finally, the author is here to ask for your opinions. If more than 10 readers say they don't want to read it, I won't release it.

The author is a newbie. He just wrote the book in October and knows nothing about it. A new author group has been added. In addition to newbies like the author, there are also some great masters above LV2 who the author looks up to. People jokingly refer to people outside of family, friends, and group friends as "wild readers." First of all, I would like to thank the book friend mjlovef13qd for taking the trouble to give me 13 recommendations every day. Thank you very much. Secondly, the author does not have Amway, and is embarrassed to have Amway relatives and friends to read the book, so every time I see a comment or a recommendation, I will be very happy. In the past two days, the author has noticed that there are more wild readers. The author is both happy and sad. Fortunately, these book friends lost their way in through some unknown channel and even gave me some comments. Sadly, fans, investments and even collections have not seen much growth. Sure enough, the writing is not as good as those of the great masters, and book lovers even dislike adding it to their bookshelves as an eyesore. Finally, I would like to thank every book friend who has read my book, even if you are not a fan of mine.

At least 80% of readers will be turned off by the protagonist running around naked from the beginning

First of all, I would like to thank mjlovef13qd, Tian Congyun, Mo Zhongshen and other book friends who gave me multiple recommendation votes. Since these brothers did not leave chapter reviews or book reviews, I would like to thank them separately here. Next, let's talk about the topic: First, what kind of novel is this? ​This is a serious knight novel that travels through system flow, Western fantasy, sword and magic novels. This is a novel with no popularity, no novel themes, no recommendations, no PY, no fans, and no data. Western fantasy is super unpopular now. It is a niche genre with many settings and a grand world view. Fantasy is difficult to write, and this category is even more difficult to mix. Super masters have written 100% fantasy content instead of fantasy. Second, what kind of author is the author? This is a very slow-paced novel. The author is also a very slow-moving author who likes to take things step by step. Moreover, the author is a setting party. I don't know if there is such a genre, but he is the author anyway. The author has been influenced by biographical novels such as Classic of Mountains and Seas and Dungeons and Dragons since he was a child. He also likes to watch documentaries and the like. Therefore, I like the world view and customs more than the characters. The author hopes to leave everyone with a huge world after finishing the novel. The author's writing is poor and he cannot describe what he imagined. The author likes a clear world view, professional level, and power system. In fact, this is a thankless task. Third, will this book be a eunuch? Why do you write it because no one will read it anyway? This book can be said to be the author's dream. Even if it is a nightmare, he must persist in reading it. This book is still the author's child, and even though everyone hates it, the author still loves it. The author has prepared 4R books of three treasures, two books of heraldry, a history of the West, several biographies and chivalric novels. The author prepared 20 DND series materials and drew some simple pictures. The author has set up chronicles, character cards, equipment cards, and monster cards. In order to prevent forgetting, he also made a PPT. There are not many authors who are as well prepared as me. This is mainly because I have low self-confidence, poor writing skills, insufficient imagination, and what I write is not attractive. Chapter reviews and book reviews are quiet, and readers' comments are less than 10% of the author's comments, which is really shameful. Having said so much, I just want to tell you: 1. This is an unpopular, slow-to-popular book. It is niche and not a cool book. 2. This is a traditional world of swords and magic. This is also a traditional knight novel. 3. If the author's writing is not good, please forgive me for wasting your time. Whether it is a positive review or a negative review, as long as it is not an attack on life, the author will not delete it. I am very happy to read it. That's all I have to say, I can't fit it into a book review.

I originally wanted to see the protagonist of a knight, but I didn't expect that it would be "women's clothing" and "women's clothing boss".

Readers often say: You are in the water setting. In fact, writing settings is much more laborious for the author than writing text. There are three reasons for doing this thankless task: First, the author is a newbie. No experience, no master's light, and no time. The author himself has a job, and he is not afraid of everyone laughing when he writes this book. He probably made a loss, and it was all supported by his interest. No matter how poorly written it is, it is still the author's hard work. When others go to work, the author has to go to work; when others get off work, the author still has to code. Secondly, the author has read many biographical novels since he was a child, such as China's Classic of Mountains and Seas and foreign Dungeons and Dragons. So, focus on the world view and customs rather than characters. Is it good to write it like this? Not good! The online articles themselves are short and fast-paced, and most readers don't want to be tired from reading them. As of now, the author has written basically a single machine. There are as many reasons to dislike a book as there are reasons to like it. The author's writing is not good, please forgive me. Third, since everyone talks about water, I will try my best to write down the settings in the early stage to avoid writing too many VIP chapters. Although VIP is probably not read by anyone, at least it won't make readers scold you, "You make money by counting words." Actually, those who write online articles, like me, a low-level lv1 newcomer, are motivated by interest rather than money. I have worked hard to write tens of thousands of words in a month, but I can't get a penny, and I have to pay for my time, energy and electricity bills. Isn't this generating electricity with love? Writing so much is not to express misery or complain, but to express what is in my heart. Not afraid of everyone's jokes, the author opens the backend at least ten times a day to see if anyone can give me a recommendation vote? Are there any comments? Or even greedily hoping to increase the number of fans? Every support you give is a great encouragement to the author. Even if many readers say that I am in trouble, I am still very happy. This proves that at least some people are still reading my books, to some extent.

Tossing and turning, it's hard to fall asleep, it's so lonely and sore, facing the shadow of the moon. Tea is also intoxicating, no wine is needed, books are good friends but hard to cling to. Half my life has been wasted, I am tired from running around, I am depressed and miserable, it is hard to express my feelings. Life is like a journey against the odds, and you will eventually return after a long journey.

It is aimed at knights. Is the protagonist of this book the kind who has the power of a knight but does not have the heart of a knight, or is he the kind who follows the commandments?

Speaking of writing this novel, the reason is actually very simple. My Qidian account was banned on 9/24. For someone like me who can't live without Qidian every day, and who can't live without chapter reviews and comments, this is really difficult. So, I came up with an idea. Since I can't review chapters, why not write a book myself? I am a person of action, and I write as I say. A new author who doesn't know anything. I originally planned to write on a stand-alone computer. Unexpectedly, I received the news of signing a contract, which was a great encouragement to me.

After reading 30 chapters, it was almost all about setting up and I was very tired. Don't overdo it with settings. Slowly reveal your settings as you write. Could you please give more details about throwing works?

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It's not a matter of bad writing, it's just too clumsy. One chapter only has Braille, and half of it is bland. Since the first three chapters are background narrations, why not just change them into prologues? Really discouraged.

The biggest reason why I can't watch it is the large amount of setting instructions. If it is a small amount of explanation, it can really supplement it and add color to the world view. But the explanation of almost a whole chapter is a bit annoying. It makes people think why not put it in the related works? Maybe the explanation is too long, which makes it difficult for people with goldfish memory like me to connect the plots of the previous chapters. There's absolutely nothing wrong with streaking and missions. If you don't agree, it's just a matter of mental disagreement. But I have no problem. I will put it on the bookshelf. After all, there are still too few fantasy genres.

It's hard to be calm anymore when your worries are complained to the sky. The book is full of sadness. Life is hard and hard, but the pain is getting worse. The sick body gradually became thinner and the hair became white. Things are going wrong this year. I want to pray to immortals and Buddhas for blessings, but I don't know if it's too late?

Reverse order? The plot that used to be an exhibitionist suddenly became in the name of lollipops... And there are too many settings interspersed... Don't pile the settings together, take your time, people will feel dizzy watching it.

Was it written by a child? Sweat