Unrivaled Double Harmony

The three scumbags were all ordered, and he fell into the trap when the Ghost Scream was being serialized, and bought the physical form through crime. For the old boy, I used to watch the IQ Cup to sleep, and the first time I watched PLU All-Star Night. While both sides like it, I don't like this book very much. It's not that his writing is not good. After all, there is no doubt about Sanzha's writing power, and the number of words is still too small to be conclusive. He has that very strange feeling, a bit out of character, a bit bland, a bit nonsensical, like a webmaster writing a Tieba fanfic. I don't like those accent gags, like the idiom "well" and "hey", like the catchphrase "Shut up!" The old boy flavor is out, but the martial arts flavor is gone. So do you write martial arts, or do you write old boy fan fiction? You can have live broadcast memes, but I feel they are too dense. There are jokes everywhere, every chapter has a story. Sometimes I even feel that this segment was added just for this purpose. If there are too many jokes, they won't be called easter eggs. They are still the same person, and the drama is cheap. San Zha said that this book needs to be a perfect combination of martial arts and fan fiction. If you add these two themes together, it would be too difficult to hit the right balance. This is the starting point. There are objective factors why this kind of subject matter is not good enough. It does not mean that if you write well, it will be good. What is the use of writing a certain paragraph or chapter well? Why do I write these words? I think as a fan, I feel this way, and I should write it out for the author to see. Maybe I am an exception, and maybe I also represent the feelings of some people. It only makes sense to express your feelings. If you can't bear to say it because you are a fan, you only want to praise it. In the end, the author and readers will all lose. I'm not afraid that San Zha will find it hard to do something difficult, because it is his own choice, and he will be responsible for the results. I'm afraid that Sanzha misunderstood and thought that this would work, and went on the street. I'm not a professional author, just a personal reader, so I can't give you writing advice. I can only tell you what I don't like. The problem still lies with the author. Sorry, I am a keyboard warrior. Come on, may three days and two nights of sleep be the light of the entire site. This is the hope I made when I saw the ghost screaming, above.

{"NickName":"Three days and two sleeps","UserId":19525811} Paragraph 20 of the literary test, Jianghu Accident should be changed to Jianghu Sophistication

Personally, I have had little interest in novels about martial arts, cultivating immortals, etc. For a long time. Firstly, I didn't read any classic martial arts novels when I was a child, and I didn't have much yearning for the fairy emperor. To put it simply, the sense of immersion was limited. Second, the online martial arts novels and games are too homogeneous. In fact, I didn't notice much at first. I just thought it was because I didn't have enough Chinese culture and couldn't find a sense of belonging, so I couldn't stand it. Later, when I thought about it more carefully, I realized that it was not all my problem. This routine in martial arts novels about cultivating immortals is indeed much more serious than other themes. It's nothing more than the protagonist kicking sect disciples, punching local bullies, overpowering a generation of young people, and then blocking the killer god. In the middle, the heroine from a famous family throws herself into his arms, pretends to be a pig and eats a tiger, pretends to be slapped in the face, and some rare and exotic beasts and extraterrestrial objects are added to the background story. Then the main character's skills can be randomly selected from knife skills, sword skills, stick skills, calligraphy, etc., And some special bonuses for time travellers. A martial arts novel about cultivating immortals can easily summarize most of it. The homogeneity is so serious that the protagonist copies ancient poems and puts them on his own head. Therefore, I have seen the plot of "literary talent impresses the Confucian scholars" three or four times in different books. (And to put it bluntly, I have written two paragraphs. You have to go online to find a few poems that fit the plot. It is probably not much more difficult than giving the character a smooth name.) Some people must have said after reading this that there are many good martial arts cultivators, but you just haven't seen them. That's right. But the truth is this. The problem is that you can only pick out a good one among a hundred novels about martial arts and immortality. If I look for other unorthodox themes, there might be a good one out of 20. Then I will definitely look for books to read in other categories first. I am not a martial arts fan, so there is no need to go into that muddy water, right? Getting back to the subject, why am I writing a paragraph today? It's because I recently read a very good martial arts novel. That's right, due to various coincidences, I won't go into details, but I just opened "Unparalleled Harmony" by Teacher Sanzha. After reading this, it didn't matter, I was quickly and completely attracted. If you have time to go to the starting point and browse it, you will find this book. It is very strange. The protagonists of this book are Huang Xudong, the best poisonous milk in the East, and Sun Yifeng, his good brother for many years - two game commentators and anchors with quite a lot of memes. This protagonist, right, looks unreliable at first glance. Your martial arts novel is originally about popular goods, and the protagonist is still the game anchor you usually watch. Can you determine whether the author wants to write a novel seriously to make money, or whether he just wants to entertain his fans with a few pages? Besides, real people are still live broadcasting their work every day. What if your plot is too outrageous and people come to your door? What if your character design doesn't match up and fans don't buy it? Just the fact that the protagonist's character must be consistent with reality places great restrictions on the plot, not to mention that plots such as martial arts have been explored for a long time. Under such circumstances, can you still write a full-length novel? Really capable. And the writing is really good. This restriction against reality, not only did not become a restriction, but created the unique charm that only martial arts novels can have. What is Jianghu? In a literary sense, Jianghu is called "". If you want to find a simpler pronoun, it would be: "". Where there are people, there are rivers and lakes, and where there are people, there are things. There is love and hatred, and there are joys and sorrows. The so-called martial arts novels describe these things that happen between people in the form of art. For example, if you meet a mean person at work, it's not that bad. He's just petty. If you scold him, he can remember it for weeks. If it were in real life, at most the two of them would have a quarrel over something, and there would be nothing to write about afterwards. It doesn't make much sense to hold on until someone is ready to report to the leader or something like that. But if you are in a martial arts novel, it will be different. As a villain, you can use poisons, hidden weapons, etc. To retaliate. Then the protagonist can naturally defend himself and see through the treacherous plot. Add a little bit of misfortune, and you can come up with something like: "The villain secretly poisons the wrong person, and the protagonist chases the murderer thousands of miles to settle his grudges." After this, does the atmosphere feel better? I don't know if it's a coincidence, or whether Teacher Sanzha has already seen through the essence behind this martial arts novel. "Unparalleled Harmony" is able to create such vivid and realistic characters precisely because it quotes a large number of real people and true events as its background. Although the plot is not earth-shattering or tear-jerking, it is interesting and fascinating. As a reader who has never read martial arts, I can't help but think of the world where "the East is harmonious and the West is poisonous". Thinking about it this way, the martial arts novels that I found a little boring in the past seem to have gone in the wrong direction. Wrong, "please grudge" should be regarded as "do whatever you want". The protagonist wants to kill people when he sees them unhappy, and takes possession of treasures when he sees them. Even if he offends the public for a moment, he will kill as many as he can. And those intrigues, overt and covert fights between people eventually turned into the old cliche of "the big fist means the right". It cannot be said that the plot is uninteresting, but if you compare it with "Unparalleled Harmony", it is true that it lacks some charm. "Unparalleled Harmony" also has many problems. The fan audience is narrow, there are not enough exciting features, updates are not fast enough, and the subject matter is not particularly eye-catching. Perhaps it is difficult to become popular in such a fast-paced society. But if you can really calm down and take a closer look, you should go to a teahouse in your free afternoon and listen to the storyteller who always has a smile on his face, telling interesting stories about the distant country and its taste. . . Although it may not be as good as Gu Long Jinyong, "Unparalleled Harmony" is actually the best martial arts novel I have ever read. I hope Teacher Sanzha can ensure quality updates. It's okay if it's slower. The worst it can take is a year and a half, and I'll listen to the breakdown next time.

Seeing it now, let me say a few words. The whole plot is pretty good, but there is one thing that sticks in my throat, that is, Sun is illiterate. This is really hard to understand. He is not even as good as a primary school student. Although I understood from reading the book review that this was probably a joke, Sanzha said that people who don't understand it will have no problem reading it. As far as I'm concerned, I personally think it's very safe. To create such a plot for this joke, I think it has a great impact on the entire viewing experience. Moreover, the process of using this kind of protagonist and losing the protagonist that you understand little by little leads to a poor reading experience. After all, you will vomit if you play a joke too much. . . Personal opinion.

To be honest, I have a small suggestion. I don't know if any brothers feel the same way. I hope Teacher Jue can read it.) Just, this book is about martial arts at the beginning, and the martial arts writing is indeed very good. The first chapter follows Gu Qiying and Shen Youran's calculations, including the interludes on the road, whether it is the depth of the idea or the pure plot arrangement, or the jokes and cross talk to amuse the bored child. In the later stage, there are also wonderful scenes that have a strong sense of martial arts, such as the cage killing of the red plum bird. But, to be honest, from the chapter on Xiao Zhun, the boss battles in each chapter have become boring. This is not to say that the inexplicable death from a plot is not good-looking, but that the setting of the boss has become obviously more fantasy. Excluding jokes, the proportion of the plot is almost higher than that of the original Green Forest Chapter. The bosses in other chapters are: fighting the mage (creation), fighting ghosts, fighting monsters, and fighting aliens. Moreover, the emergence of these supernatural, not martial arts but fantasy things has seriously shaken the world view of martial arts and the audience's perception: Just imagine, a second-rate magician Ye Luzi rubbed an unformed magic sword, which enhanced the strength of a first-rate master to a super first-rate, beat up a group of first-rate masters, and finally was chopped by another third-rate master, Zhao Tianlei - where does this leave the strength of the martial arts master? In the future, if Defeat Dragon Sword Dugu Yong, Yin Dao Bai Ruhong, and the Killer Three-Character King appear again, will they still have the sense of oppression and superior demeanor they had when they first appeared? Why many people like Lin Yuancheng and even call Xiao Lin "the man who changed the style of painting in this book" is because Xiao Lin's martial arts is very pure, not at all fantasy, and he does not fight against monsters. Whether he is performing chivalrous acts of justice, challenging masters, rebelling against sects, or drunkenly fighting against golden branches, he is a pure genius swordsman who does not deviate from the tone of Jianghu. This is not to say that fantasy is not good, I also watch fantasy, but either we cut off the martial arts and let everyone practice leveling and slaying demons together. To put it bluntly, the martial arts people are just chickens. They fight in a small way. The martial arts masters are just picking up some leftovers for cultivating immortals. In the end, there is no need to worry too much about the affairs of the world, and it is mentioned that casual suppression is enough, and the focus is on leveling up and killing monsters; or, the fantasy content is cut off, and everyone focuses on the affairs of the world, disputes in the world, and the story of the two dogs taking risks in the world in their own style. But the two go hand in hand. On the one hand, everyone is unhappy about defeating monsters. The monsters are not of high rank, and you have to worry about going back to join the world. On the other hand, the masters of the world have become chickens in front of these monsters. Readers will also lose the sense of excitement and tension when fighting against them in the future. In fact, when Di Bujue was mentioned again in the previous chapters, many people already thought that Di Bujue was a complete novice. I personally think that this issue should be paid more attention by Teacher Jue. To digress, the chapters that I personally don't like very much are the Green Forest Chapter and the Japanese Chapter. As mentioned before in the Japanese Chapter, the Japanese martial arts only mentioned that the martial arts system is different, but they did not practice with alien masters like Miyamoto Musashi at all. The ones who fought most were supernatural monsters such as magic monks, aliens, and ghosts on the mountains. The Green Forest chapter is another problem: the central axis of the story is the plot of the movie, and everyone likes to make jokes, but it's okay to make jokes about the details of the characters and speech, but the entire story outline is based on the memes, and it is written like a fan fiction, so the perception is not very good.

The world depicted in this book is the most "live" I have ever seen. I can truly imagine and feel that there is such a world and that there are such a group of people living in it. In addition to the exquisite details and large amounts of information, more importantly, the characters in the book are extremely "three-dimensional". It is no exaggeration to say that the boatman, who only has two lines of dialogue in this book, is more three-dimensional than the second character in some works. Unlike most of Qidian's works, although the trajectory of this book always follows the protagonist, the main perspective of the events is rarely dominated by the protagonist. The advantages of this writing method are very obvious; it can create very full and three-dimensional characters with very little pen and ink, which is why this world can "come alive". But the shortcomings are equally obvious. It is difficult for readers to empathize with the characters. Therefore, some comments said that they could not be substituted, and some people joked, "It turns out we still have a protagonist." For example, the incident of the Seven Heroes Club. About 70% of the actions are done by the protagonist, but the main perspective is constantly switching, watching and thinking about the actions of the protagonist from other people's perspectives. It is more like the reader sat in the audience and watched the entire Seven Heroes Meeting. But just because I was sitting in the audience, I couldn't stand on the stage. Although most of Qidian's works are in the third person, the main perspective rarely cuts to other people. Therefore, although other characters are easy to be flat, they are very convenient for empathy, and readers can better feel the emotions, anger, sorrows and joys of the protagonist. Audiences who are accustomed to this writing style will inevitably feel strange when reading this book. Of course, I personally feel that reading this book does not require too much empathy for the protagonist, because the protagonist is a well-known figure in real life. So the focus is on "what they did" rather than what "you" felt. Let me explain to other book friends here that this is not a Tieba fan written by a master of online writing. It's just that the author chose a writing method that is reasonable but not recognized by you.

Daily spiritual food, a refreshing stream of online writing.

Chapter 1 Young Heroes Sun and Huang were just starting out and were invited by Shen Youran to participate in the Young Heroes Meeting. He told the anecdotes and competition between the two on the way to Luoyang, and destroyed a conspiracy against the participating members and Jianghu sects, making the two famous. Volume 2: East Evil and West Poison The two traveled around the rivers and lakes, fighting against concubines, fighting "Yi Xie" and drowning "Dong Lai", humiliating Song Xiang. Encountering demons on the island in the river, walking in the Gold and Silver Village, and Infernal Affairs in the shadows. Volume Three: Years of Pursuing the Tao Huang Qiuxian entered Taoism, and Sun Qiu opened a restaurant to settle down his family affairs. The chief sect leader of the Cao Gang wants to do something for the Hunyuan Sect, and Xiao Zhun secretly forms a big conspiracy to gather blood swords everywhere, and also creates a vendetta and plot to pursue Donglai Jipo. Volume 4: Fighting Demons with Swords Doing a lot of evil! The two harmonious wits fight against the Fire Lotus Cult. Suspicions abound! The rivers and lakes gathered together in a sword formation. Open the village and discuss the sword! The explosion in the cesspool shocked everyone. Hell on earth! The bloody sword is unstoppable when it sees blood. The sword defeats the devil! All four swords and three swords are accurate. Lightning whip! The two harmonies nearly killed the swordsman. Volume 5: Harmony is the Most Important [Jian Chapter] Double Harmony mistakenly releases the dead night. All the dragons on the green forest road are dead, and multiple forces are entangled in the game. The two parties hold a competition and decide the head by force. Volume 6: A Trouble in the Capital The Dao is one foot high, the devil is ten feet high The vastness of the world, righteousness will last forever The pinnacle of writing, must read The seventh volume: The Return of the Dragon [Japanese Chapter] , the main plot has not advanced much] Volume 8, Six Kings Confrontation [big event, too lazy to write about it] Volume 9, Journey to the West to Fight the Demons [Castlevania, I guess there is no main plot]

There are probably some fans who really like Sanzha. I feel that Sanzha's new book is quite good. I personally think the martial arts flavor is quite authentic and has a real martial arts spirit. Based on this, I think the double harmony should have better results, unless it is delayed like Zhou Lin.

Although I like books about three days and two nights, I have finished reading two of the first three books. Zhou Lin has read a lot and I don't know when the author, the upholder, will finish it. In order to avoid this guy running to "collect materials" again, I chose to wait. See you in the world in a few years!

Teacher Jue, I'm really convinced. Do you know how desperate I was when I saved it for several years and didn't read it, but when I started to subscribe in bulk and found out that it only cost a few dozen yuan 😄?

Deleted the comment, right? Just this much magnanimity? From Guihuo all the way, the writing style has also changed from an energetic teenager to a slippery middle-aged man. It is not about the update speed, but it is reflected in the works: I want to write a story well and now I want to get enough words for an article. Of course, if the foundation is relatively good, this is better than most websites. The author of the article is much better, but I vaguely remember that San Zha once wrote in Ghost Scream: I hope there will be a world where the characters in the play can continue their own stories after the end of a story. Wang Xu is still complaining, and Master Mao is still plotting some conspiracy. San Zha thinks, does this world really exist? Maybe even after more than ten years, I am still immature and have not become an adult like you, but I believe that this world exists

Chapter 61: The Five Spirits refer to the Five Spirits (incorrectly) in Pig Man. They are the Five Divine Beasts. Although they have not stated it clearly, they all know in their hearts that the Five Divine Beasts are the Blue Dragon, White Tiger, Black Tortoise, Suzaku and Yellow Dragon. Note that it is the Yellow Dragon, not the Qilin. The Qilin is just an auspicious beast and is not qualified to be compared with the mythical beast. Moreover, the Qilin, like the Phoenix, is a male and female pair. Don't mislead your friends, Mr. Dang 🤭

San Zha is so good at writing Shen Youran's experience before the war, confusing the concepts of good and evil. Shen Youran is not a born bad guy, nor is he a pitiful person who forced his memory to clear his name after failure. Instead, after the only person who was good to him in the world was indirectly killed by the martial arts sects, he became lonely and lonely, and was easily led astray by the Lord. This character trait was probably formed by his willingness to stay in the Demon Cult when he was a child in order to stay with his mother. In order to repay Gu Qizong for taking him in, he dared to become an enemy of the entire martial arts world. If placed in other novels, he might be regarded as a template for the protagonist.

The writing style is sophisticated, and it is said that the human touch is the basis of writing, which is true. As the saying goes, where there are people, there are rivers and lakes, and where there are people, there are rivers and lakes. The martial arts of Three Days and Two Sleeps integrates human feelings and sophistication between the lines without losing the humor. It paints the two characters of rivers and lakes into a picture of the various states of the human world, and there is no lack of new ideas. The writing is not rigidly bound to one style, which really makes my eyes shine; when I read this book again, It can not only be exciting in terms of storyline, but also thought-provoking in terms of ideological principles. It can also increase cultural knowledge from time to time. It is a rare light of contemporary martial arts.

After checking his eyes, he was a young man in his mid-20s. Based on this introduction, the starry hunk came to report.

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It's so funny hhhhh I almost died laughing when I was watching it, and when I was reading the book nm there was a picture hhhhhhh It's really good to watch, I am worthy of being Teacher Jue! Especially those who know a little bit about the interstellar world will be laughed to death, it's so stupid hhhhh

I stocked up on dozens of chapters and they were all gone in no time. Please Sanzha please keep updating daily

How much is the third sister-in-law's mirror worth? 😅😅😅

Do you know why I voted for you monthly? Because I'm afraid you'll get lost, will I be able to finish it in my lifetime?

Looking at what Teacher Dang wrote was similar, I decided to take action as soon as school started. I have only read Chapter 16 of Volume 2 so far, but I always want to write something, otherwise my hands will be busy. Shen Youran, hereinafter referred to as Xiao Shen, can also be regarded as the important mini-boss of the first volume. Although Gu Qiying is stronger, after all, he is a character used to ambush the pen, and he is not included in the first volume. The character of Xiao Shen is a bit neither black nor white (I did not deliberately emphasize that the character must be either black or white, but I just feel that when Teacher Dang described this character this time, he just made Xiao Shen's black and white a little bit sticky, and did not portray it very deeply.) Of course, as a 'supporting role', in contrast, the attributes of the two protagonists' 'righteousness and bravery' are greatly enhanced. But Xiao Shen really doesn't feel deep enough, and he always feels like something is missing. Before, except for 'poisonous milk', I had never heard of any e-sports related topics. The function mentioned in this chapter has indeed played a very important role in popularizing science. Of course, as of now, even if you don't understand the memes and don't read this chapter, "Double Harmony" is still relatively good. Many of the memes are related to oral habits, descriptions, and descriptions. Even if you don't understand it, it won't affect the reading experience. For old readers, this book may not be evaluated with the mentality of reading "Trading Crime" and "Zhou Lin". After all, the content of the book is different. Just look at it and be happy. Anyway, let's look at Tianmen Mountain.

I heard that Teacher Jue plans to write 3 million, is it true? [Put the flag here first]

Go to the county government office to ask for some money and ask the superiors to "send" someone to investigate. (Not condemnation)

Finally updated! This is the principle of slow work and careful work, right?

Catching Insects, Chapter 33 "First Grade" "I was not educated like this when I was cooking for the Emperor's Empress" The term "Emperor's Empress" has unclear meaning and can easily cause ambiguity. Combining with them in the next paragraph, it can be seen that the reference is plural. It is recommended to change "the emperor and the empress" in the two paragraphs to "the emperor, the empress", or "the emperor and the empress".

Jianghu. As long as there are people, there will be grievances, and if there are grievances, there will be rivers and lakes, and people will be rivers and lakes. This world is not very reasonable. Officers and soldiers kill civilians, and experts kill low-level players. The world is still the same world. This is how this world is, if you have a grudge, you have to take revenge, if you have a grudge, you have to complain, but you can't blame others at all. The young Lu Mingyu also has a world in his heart, a world where chivalry saves the world and beauty brings good fortune. At least that's how it started. There is a world in everyone's heart, but people will change, but the world will not. People will die, but Jianghu will not die. It is better to forget each other in the rivers and lakes than to wet each other with foam. 😊😊😊

There will be no updates tomorrow. If you read this message again tomorrow

Attending the meeting in Luoyang, the East is harmonious and the West is poisonous, just like the four masters and apprentices are seeking Buddhist scriptures from the West

Didn't you say yesterday that you would continue to support the fire today? Why haven't you started yet🤔