
I Am Really Not Crocodile in One Piece
海贼之我真不是克洛克达尔
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- Completed
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- 1.5M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
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- Qidian
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Book review: Not to my taste, the poisonous points are as follows: 1. Traveling to a sand crocodile, knowing that he has lost most of his memory and that his force value has dropped significantly, he still takes the initiative to find Robin for a showdown. Shouldn't we first familiarize ourselves with our bodies and our surroundings, and avoid contact with others to avoid being killed while our force level decreases? 2. Forget about the showdown, the author also asked Robin to assassinate. There happened to be a glass of water in the office, and the showdown was about to be completed. The system suddenly appears before death, and you immediately become an awesome master. It's too poisonous.
After reading through the comments, I don't know why so many people hate this book. I think this book is awesome because it is written entirely according to Luffy's timeline, but basically all of the plots are original. Luffy and his friends rarely appear in this book. There is a brief description of Alabasta at the beginning, the war at the top, and Raph's island at the end. Anyway, I personally don't really like watching Fate Flow. I've already seen the plot of the anime and what's the point of writing it again. The author of this article has written very well the various original plots of Liquor City, Doomsday Island, Anshasha Kingdom, and the Last Sea. Forgive me for reading too quickly and not remembering the names. Especially the part about the queen, which completely describes a doomsday island. The writing is so exciting! Moreover, the emotional part of the two heroines also slowly ran into each other, gradually deepened, and finally came together! The final ending, in which Im is a war monster created by humans 800 years ago, is a bit ridiculous. Then it's not clear where the system of killing people and becoming stronger with double fruits came from. Giving others double fruits is because the book from a year ago didn't have the Yamato Black Maria of Wano. It's probably a bit of a poison. I read 1.5 Million words in 4 days during the National Day. This book is so in line with my appetite that I have been typing for so long now. I'll give it an 8. I recommend everyone to take a look at it for yourself, some of the reviews are too general!
What does the author want to do First of all, the protagonist's golden finger is to defeat the strong and become stronger. I have read more than a hundred chapters. Looking at the table of contents, around 200 chapters are still in the first half of the Grand Line, and the power system is a bit unclear, especially the effects. This reality requires adding some online games and the like. ×2 Defense. How strong is the defense? I don't have a specific concept.
I have always wanted to say that if there is Lieutenant General O'Neal, there will also be Lieutenant General Kobe, Lieutenant General Jordan, and Lieutenant General James.
After reading a few chapters, I thought it was quite well written. As for not writing about Lao Sha's feelings, the protagonist is just a time-traveler with Lao Sha's body. He has not even experienced the world of pirates in depth. Let him suddenly change his thinking like an aborigine to persuade him to quit. As for the double fruit, it would be okay if it could work well with the Shasha fruit. If it is just because the previous fruit owner is strong (such as Blackbeard, Whitebeard, Akainu), forget it. As for the three fruits... If you dare to write, I will give up Rosen is a man as soon as he gets started In short, I support the author
In the latest 966 drawings, Lao Bai, who was at his peak, tied with Roger without using his fruit power. Luo Tuan defeated Bai Tuan and ended in a tie after three days and three nights. The peak strength of these two people definitely exceeds the current Yonko. The other four emperors split the sky, but these two directly exploded the sky.
, Something's wrong, how come anyone can have overlord sex? Even with the protagonist's current aura, he can awaken the Overlord Color? It's impossible for the protagonist to be the protagonist. Crocodile is Crocodile. The protagonist has just traveled through time and has not been tempered. How can he awaken the King's color and have such a kingly aura? Don't care if it's counter-intuitive. Pai, who is not a hero? Just because the protagonist awakened just after traveling through time, what did you do in the previous life, and which country was the leader? Even though there are so many people in the new world who are domineering, are there shrimp-level people there? How can people who dare to venture into the new world be weak?, OK! Just pretend that the protagonist was a national leader or a general in his previous life, and use Es as a ruler to calculate how brave you are as soon as you time travel, but what does it mean to stop halfway through? Is it because you are afraid of getting hurt? Afraid of making a fool of yourself? Let me tell you this, me! Fundamental! At once! Didn't see it! Main character! If you have the qualifications to awaken your overlord color! Even Crocodile himself is not qualified! A wolf is a wolf! A lion is a lion! He may be able to hone his armed color to the top, but he does not have the qualifications for the overlord color. The protagonist, a person who has traveled from outside the world, may have the qualifications, but for now, he is not qualified, even if he inherits everything from Crocodile! ( , come on, author, explain the overlord color )
In fact, Oda publicly replied in SBS that the three Yonko regiments can't shake the Navy headquarters if they join the war. As for whether four can do it and whether the Pirate King regiment can, the official has not given a reply. The implication is that even if the red hair comes when they go up, the Navy is not afraid. If the red-haired pirates were left behind, there would probably be general-level casualties. According to the original plot of the manga, Akainu was not even seriously injured at that time. The anime team modified it so that he was beaten to the point of death by Whitebeard. In fact, Whitebeard attacked Akainu in a surprise attack and even lost half of his head. Garp was slightly injured, Sengoku, Aoji, and Kizaru were at full health. To be honest, no one in the Four Emperors group except the emperor's deputy could hold back the truly angry general. They only held him back. Marco was injured... The general and emperor were on the same level. Counting Garp, they were equivalent to the four emperors of the navy. Against an old white-bearded emperor, it was an overwhelming victory. In Oda's setting, only Garp did not decline in strength with age, so the Warring States Period was the strength of Marco and his lieutenants, who were strong enough, as well as the strength of Vice Admiral Momo Usagi and those general-level candidates.
To be honest, what is the highlight of everyone's visit to Crocodile? The aloofness and domineering nature of Sand Crocodile are the unique charm of Lao Sha. However, the author is a completely self-defined character and cannot show this aspect. He is a complete pacifist and only knows how to be stubborn. . 🙄 Then I might as well write about Blackbeard, and I can keep doing it
Author, when you write about Crocodile, you must write about his personality charm! If you write this kind of character that already exists in the original work, if it is not better and more distinctive than the original work, you will be scolded. Also, when fighting Ace, it's like using skills in the game. It doesn't match your settings! There is no memory of the past, and there is no adaptation stage. You can do everything Crocodile can do...
Damn it, you were poisoned at the beginning, and you still want to lick a woman who almost killed you. If there is no system, you will die. I admire the licking dog.
Not bad. It suits my taste. Please give me more.
How should I put it, Lao Sha gave the protagonist such a pure manly appearance, but the process of persuading Robin at the beginning was as gentle as water. You said that some people are born to be lawful and kind, but the three who gave in in these sentences are simply weak and kind... What do readers who come here with the tyranny of Sand Crocodile King think? . This character color itself portrays a real man with ruthlessness in the desert and a bit of wolfish ambition. The whole character is just like his ability... Even if he is guilty for acting, but he is domineering on the outside, it can be regarded as making good use of the original resources while creating laughter. . It's really not necessary to overthrow it and write about it with another character. It would be too wasteful.
I haven't read One Piece, but I want to read a non-licking book by the same fan. Well, this is the one for now... I've also read the basic system of old books. Do you have any recommendations? I found four books in the rankings today, and they almost poisoned me to death. So whether the writing is good or not depends entirely on the support of peers, old man!
Shasha natural fruit is not strong enough? Isn't it right? As a time traveler, it should be "there is no strongest fruit, only those who use it"?
Damn, this is a piece of shit.
Let's be honest, I feel like the protagonist written by the author has a soul that has passed through Lao Sha and has a long-winded personality. Although you don't have to be opposed to Luffy, you are not so inconsistent with Lao Sha's status! I don't have any domineering attitude at all, I have turned into a person with a very good temper. I feel like I have insulted Lao Sha, and I try to clean up everything. In fact, I am a good person, and I keep showing it to others! I met Luffy and explained it! I really feel that it is not easy to find a fan of Lao Sha, but I feel disappointed. After reading four or five chapters, I am not interested!
It was too inconsistent at first, and since I was planning to write a double fruit, couldn't I create an original character to kill Lao Shana's fruit? Using Lao Sha to attract readers turns out to be neither human nor ghost.
Zhenchunchun is a dog licker. He is a modern person who has traveled through time. He is going to kill you, and yet he rushes over to lick you. Have you never seen a woman before?
I thought it was quite good. I watched it for three days at a time. Now I am waiting for the update 🙂
I was thinking about a question when I watched One Piece before. Every dynasty in Chinese history has called itself the Celestial Kingdom, and the Chinese people all call themselves descendants of the dragon. In One Piece, the nobles of the world are so disgustingly portrayed that they are called Celestial Dragons. Are you insinuating the Chinese?
I can't stand it. In this world of pirates, which depends on will and dreams, you have portrayed a character who is timid and wants to escape from everything. It's so disgusting.
A monthly ticket, please improve it, (come and learn 🤫🤫)
Tell me what you think One is the plot. Too much time was wasted on original characters. More than a hundred chapters were used for the heroine. It felt like it took too long. Another one is the double fruit that everyone talks about, but now the protagonist is still a single fruit and has two double fruits. But according to the author's description, the second fruit given to the protagonist's subordinates is to be absorbed by oneself first, and then given to the subordinates. So, why doesn't the protagonist temporarily absorb an animal species? It may not be of much use, but it will definitely be physically strengthened, and if it is a defensive type, it is probably almost comparable to Big Mom. When the time comes when you have new goals, just give them to your subordinates. But maybe the author is afraid of readers' objections, so I just talk about it here.
I've booked all the three-month tickets for you, please be more refined.
He traveled through time and became Kroc, but he was always called Rosen. The protagonist was also a bit of a virgin, so he slipped away.
I have read more than a dozen chapters. To put it simply, the protagonist travels through Crocodile. But if you read this book as Crocodile, you will be tortured. You know what it means. Anyway, I felt like I was being fed shit if I didn't read it.
I feel like this book is the best pirate fan fiction I've ever read.
After reading about 30 pictures, I feel that the main character is a little pirate, and there are the Shichibukai there. You must know that the Shichibukai has been very stable after Luffy went to sea. Except for Luffy's few pirates, they were basically afraid in the first half. A rear admiral can attack the Shichibukai at will. Do you think everyone is a smoke man? He also has armed colors. You must know that in the first half of the CP training, no one knows how to armed colors. How many people you meet here will know how to arm colors. In the previous world, you will meet someone who is the overlord color. I am really speechless. I feel that the author has not read One Piece and just checked the information and read other people's novels. It is too outrageous to write this.
In the world of One Piece, a person who is neither ruthless nor ruthless can hardly survive for three days even if he has great power. How can he achieve great power without using cruel methods to frighten the monsters and ghosts everywhere? In my opinion, what if Robin is a beauty? In the first chapter, she actually attacked the protagonist, so she could only atone for her sins by dying. As for Robin's value, it's useless! A tool that is not used by me must be destroyed. The protagonist who dares to crawl on all kinds of cats and dogs has to urinate on his head. Is the pig's foot a licking dog, the kind who has never seen a woman in his life 😅, if you have strong strength and cruel methods, then the whole world is yours, not to mention the so-called original heroine 😅, she is simply putting the cart before the horse, guarding the golden mountain without knowing the goods.