From Copycat Writer to Superstar of the Continent

This kind of slutty heroine is really drunk. There are only five gods in the human race to protect the safety of the human race. The heroine needs a heart from a god to live, and a heart from a god can only live for one year. Why does the protagonist depend on this woman? The existence of this woman is a scourge that destroys human beings. For this scourge, the protagonist gave her a heart when the human god Guili gave her a heart, and when it disappeared into ashes, he did not want to see it. He created a god to give her a heart, and then disappeared into ashes, and then kept repeating. This kind of woman should be humanely destroyed And this protagonist, the structure is too small, only seeking profit, and has no ability, low vision, giving me a feeling of extreme inferiority.

I just read this book and I think it is very creative and the protagonist has a good personality. It's just that sometimes it's a bit awkward to advance the plot, and as a cool novel, I often feel like I'm about to reach the climax and then hold back, which is quite uncomfortable when I can't get up or down. . The most obvious part is the part where the protagonist is trying to make money and ends up standing under a dangerous wall. I saw a lot of people criticizing it, which I also found quite embarrassing. There are many solutions, such as adding system skills, for example, you can have multiple clones (similar to the Zhaotian Gang, the strongest anti-routine system), or you can directly disguise yourself, or you can create another online name when you reach a certain amount of money, you can also imitate Tiandao to send messages to the entire network, etc. . This book is mainly a light-hearted novel, and the protagonist could be a little more flirtatious. I feel that the protagonist is too small now, and it is a bit embarrassing to insist on money. . Personal suggestion, I hope the author can see it.

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After reading more than 30 chapters, I just can't stand it any longer. Can the author come up with an incident to raise the IQ of this lousy protagonist? Wouldn't it be bad to compromise such a good idea with the character of the protagonist? Don't ask the protagonist to kill decisively, just write like a normal person. The protagonist in your story looks like a retard. They all want this and are afraid of that. Looking frustrated. I wonder which reader will come back and spend money to find trouble. If you really don't ask for anything else, you can write about your interactions with the person in charge. Stop being afraid of this or that. There are many themes like Wenzhao Gong. Take a look at how the character of the protagonist is set and changed. Doesn't it smell good?

Twenty chapters ago, it was a fairy grass, and then it turned into a poisonous weed.

Nine recommendations every day, others have to add more, I remain silent

Shennong's Test of Poison: The creativity of this book is indeed pretty good, but other than that, it's really hard to complain... (I read it on other genuine free channels, so don't talk about fan value) 1. Zhuxian, God's Tomb and Zhetian are just classics in the past, but what the heck did they choose in the end, Confucianism, Taoism and the Great Monkey. There is no Journey to the West, so I just wrote The Legend of Wukong and The Big Monkey. I don't know how to express it. Damn it 🤫🤫 2. Now there is a routine where the villain cannot be killed. The protagonist turns against his good friend, and the villain accepts him as his disciple, and then they fight 3. Introduction A single female protagonist was chosen, and then... The protagonist and his best friend turned against each other because of the second female protagonist. The second female protagonist liked the male protagonist, and the best friend was so angry that he wanted to kill the male protagonist. He also spent a lot of time describing the female protagonist's feelings, but in the end he refused to accept it 4. Xiaoxi turned from a young girl into a little girl. Is the protagonist really raising her as a daughter? Since it's a single heroine, don't engage in these things. Just ask whether you will accept it in the end? It really disgusts readers

What is the difference between a bad novel and a eunuch novel?

After reading more than 40 chapters, I found that the setting of the novel is actually very good, but the protagonist is poorly portrayed. He is greedy for money and has no plan for doing things. It is useless for the system to worry about him and force him to make progress. Then the author has no priority, no focus, and it looks quite confusing. There is a novel and a music. Either the music serves the novel, or the novel adds color to the music, and it can also be linked to increase the feeling of pleasure. The protagonist is not motivated and greedy for money. It is really too poisonous. In this kind of world, you don't want to write to become stronger, but always think about making money, 눈_눈

Well, I only read the first few hundred chapters and it feels good. Come and support me! The imagination is not bad, the shelves are relatively large, and I can feel that the author wants to write a relatively grand world view. Judging from the title of the novel, he wants to write a genre that is in full bloom. Secondly, the protagonist is as his name suggests, he is very cowardly, very interesting, and The protagonist is very caring, and I can see the progress of the protagonist, but the progress in mentality is not obvious, at least not as good as the progress in strength. I don't know if this is because the author is digging a hole. For example, the protagonist will stumble here (a touch of regret and tragedy will make people impressed!). The story lines of the supporting characters gradually unfold, and the characters gradually become fleshed out. In fact, compared to the protagonist, I am more looking forward to the love-hate stories between the diverse supporting characters. There are many small foreshadowings from the past that are easy to forget. The map is changed too frequently, and it feels like the protagonist is always running around, just like the feeling of a novice online game character running around taking tasks. You can dig more into the small stories of each map to enrich the supporting roles. The sense of history in the story is also great. The thousands of years of history of the novel world revealed through just a few words are exciting. Also, will Tiandao. Com and Yaoshen. Com interact with each other in the end? I'm waiting for the day when my vest will explode! I don't know the use of the Internet for entertainment. There must be other uses that I haven't seen yet. Come on ↖(^ω^)↗ Overall, this is a novel worth looking forward to. Looking forward to the update (⊙o⊙)!