A Laid-Back Life Beginning with Ever Night

Sometimes I write too much. When it's a life-or-death situation, who has so many thoughts or so many words? Too much drama goes too far. Be concise when necessary. And then there's the scene where they cook noodles and eat a meal before the fight? Are the villains all idiots?

While tidying up the comments section, I realized that many of the readers who supported me from the beginning are no longer here. It's really disheartening; it was their support that kept me writing during that period. What a pity. My writing skills are too limited; I've seen so many people go. ‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )‧º·

What's the point of writing a protagonist who's completely useless?

I can't take it anymore, the whole book is just narration...

You're really bad. You made me waste ten yuan, and the more I watched, the less I wanted to continue. All sorts of nonsense just came out.

This protagonist has a serious case of self-indulgence; he needs treatment!

It's getting worse and worse, this won't do!! It doesn't have the same feel as it did at the beginning.

If I had to choose the female lead, my first choice would be Haotian! Second would be Ye Hongyu, third would be Li Yu, and that's it!

Your narration and rambling are really excessive. This isn't just filler; it's rambling on and on. I couldn't stand it anymore, so I'm giving you a 100 yuan reward and leaving a comment.

The game felt terrible after "Ever Night"; the beginning was so good! The random transitions later on were just ridiculous.