The King's Avatar: Leaving Tyranny, I Became the Chainsaw Grinding King

After reading Chapter 60, I found that the protagonist is actually quite suitable for Xingxin 1. If he goes to another team, why would the boss buy a substitute with no commercial value (the book says why not go to 301) 2. The protagonist is a boxing mage who is transferred to a swordsman. As mentioned before, he is not skilled enough and it is not easy to run in with existing teammates, not to mention playing games. Fireworks is still at level 20 3. In Xingxin, Ye Xiu is working together to create materials. Most of the early plots in the original work also say that other teams in online games are unlikely to spend a lot of resources to create Fireworks 4. In terms of voice, other teams cannot give the protagonist the role of captain. If so, the author will have to spend a lot of time writing about palace battles and gaining power (The above is just a personal opinion, just be happy)

Tyranny: It's not possible. If you want to stay in Tyranny, you don't have to go out and work hard to get materials Excellent Era: It's impossible, they won't be here next season Happy: It's possible, but it's a bit old-fashioned Tiny Herb: There's a grinding king, and there's another one that's a bit weird to torture Blue Rain: Swords and curses are the main thing, how to insert the protagonist needs to be thought about Samsara: I feel if Samsara will be too strong after entering it Baihua: The focus is always on ammunition and Mad Sword, just look at Tang Hao and you will know Woo Howl: Is the protagonist an old guy waiting to be defeated? Misty Rain: Capital team, if you don't have the right to speak, it's okay not to join Void: Double Ghost Team, the other members are too transparent and difficult to deal with Thunder: There is a lack of a capable deputy team for small things, you can consider it 301: Yang Cong can be liberated, and there is also a lack of this type of protagonist Other teams will not consider it if it is difficult to reach the top 8

How to say it. There is no problem with the writing style and the writing is smooth. I just don't understand "The Master" very well. It feels like I watched it for the first time and then decided to write it out of the blue, which resulted in too many bugs. I believe that fan fiction should be based on the original work and add content, but this one is not based on the original work. Instead, in order to make my novel write more smoothly, the settings of the original work are discarded.

The commentary is really toxic. It is impossible for the contestants to hear the commentary, otherwise it will affect the fairness. Also, wasn't the list of contestants submitted early in the morning? Why is it written that one team takes the field and the other team selects players to challenge? How is the fairness of the game?

When you see the commentators, as a commentator, you are not allowed to judge who will win and who will lose according to the rules. As a commentator, you only need to explain the scene and tell the audience the operation. You see, there are commentators in large competitions to tell everyone who will win. At most, they can say it in private. Your every word and deed on the field represents the organizer and is a public figure. Unless you don't want to be in this industry anymore. If you watch the World Cup games, do you have commentators who directly say which club will win? If you watch the commentators of LPL, LCK and other games, they will directly tell who will win. This is not allowed.

A new source of full-time fan fiction, currently considered to be the first echelon. I hope that the original characters in the future will not be OOC. This is what the fandom fears the most. The origin of the protagonist, being the captain, and the narration are all very unique, and the control is quite good. The plot setting is also reasonable. Keep the momentum and stay optimistic.

The author is provided with some suggestions from a legal perspective for reference. The new chapter mentions prosecution. Specifically, we can start with Articles 8 and 15 of the Consumer Rights Protection Law to show that covert modifications harm the right to know and consumers have the right to supervise. Then we start with Articles 20 and 23 of Article 20 and Article 23 that the alliance propaganda is untrue and the services provided are inconsistent (freedom). Finally, we fall to Article 39, Paragraph 1, Item 5, and sue according to Article 48, Paragraph 1, Item 7, and Article 52. Ask for compensation and apply for punitive damages (but according to the author's investment in equipment and materials, this compensation can really drain the alliance's wealth): or complain to the market supervision and management department according to Article 39, Paragraph 1, Item 3, and Article 45, and impose a fine or order to suspend business for rectification according to Article 56, Paragraph 1, Item 6 (this direction is the official outcome, as far as enterprises are concerned, they would rather face a hundred civil lawsuits than accept the sky-high price of a fine from the government)

Who is the protagonist? Why do you spend so much time describing the competition? Is the main character participating? Can you tell who the main character is? I can't stand these recent pictures.

The commentary can be heard by the players, and I'm convinced.

Stop engaging in silly operations where managers make careers suffer. Clubs and leagues do not support such operations. Later, professional players left the field in large numbers to grab bosses because they needed a lot of materials to upgrade their equipment. However, due to excessive participation, there were more mistakes and they were called in for talks by the league. As for the heroine, I personally suggest that if you can write or want to write, Tang Rou, Chen Guo, Chu Yunxiu can do it (I am Ye Sudang 😜). If you can't write, it's best not to write. Anyway, it doesn't matter whether you have a full-time master heroine or not. The main thing is to cheat people and Ye Busha together with Ye Busha. Shame Don't be too original. The manager lets Excellent Era fight Ye Xiu. You can add a little spoof to the original plot. For example, when you help Chen Guo avenge Princess Jin later, you can use a chainsaw to control Princess Jin and let Chen Guo blast her from behind. Or in the battle of Qianbo Lake, the protagonist uses a chainsaw on the shore to push other unions who are trying to escape back into the lake.