The King's Avatar: Leaving Tyranny, I Became the Chainsaw Grinding King

After reading all 60 chapters, I realized that the main character is actually quite suitable for Happy. 1. If he goes to another team, why would the owner buy a substitute with no commercial value? (The book explains why he doesn't go to 301.)

Tyranny: It's unlikely. If you were in Tyranny, you wouldn't need to leave and go through all that trouble to gather materials. Excellent Era: No way, they won't be around next season. Happy: It's possible, but it's a bit old-fashioned. Tiny Herb: We have a grinding king now, so another one that's a bit too much of a torture.

Well, the writing style is fine, and the flow is smooth. It's just that I really don't understand "The King's Avatar" at all. It feels like I just finished reading it for the first time and then suddenly decided to write it, resulting in too many plot holes. I believe fan fiction should be based on the original work and include additional content, but this one is not based on the original work. Instead, in order to make the novel flow more smoothly, the original setting has been abandoned.

From a legal perspective, here are some suggestions for the author's reference. The new chapter mentions filing a lawsuit. Specifically, one can start with Articles 8 and 15 of the Consumer Rights Protection Law, which state that unauthorized alterations infringe upon the consumer's right to know, and that consumers have the right to supervise.

The commentary was really off-putting. The players couldn't possibly hear the commentary, otherwise it would affect the fairness. Also, weren't the participants' lists submitted in advance? Why was it written that one team would play while the other team would select their players? Where is the fairness in esports?

The account is so overpowered that it features a cross-dressing character who never explains himself and always calls someone "sister."

As a commentator, you're not allowed to predict who will win or lose based on the rules. You're a commentator; you're only there to explain the action to the audience. Do you see any major competition where commentators tell everyone who will win? At most, they might say it privately.

This is a new and promising fanfiction for "Full-Time Master," currently ranking in the top tier. Hopefully, the characters from the original work won't be out of character (OOC) later on, which is the biggest fear in fanfiction. The protagonist's background, role as captain, and commentary are all very distinctive and well-handled. The plot is also quite reasonable. If it maintains its momentum, I'm optimistic about its future.

Who's the main character? Why spend so much time describing the competition? Did the main character even participate? Can't you even tell who the main character is? I can't even look at these last few chapters.

I'm impressed that the commentators can hear the players.