A Laid-Back Life Beginning with Ever Night

I feel the protagonist's character development is very successful, yes, very successful, but it's a personality I absolutely hate and don't understand. I can't comprehend the protagonist's behavior, the core of their saying one thing and doing another.

Are you writing some kind of cryptic script?

You're just a salted fish, always calling yourself one, but your actions don't match your words.

Too much nonsense

To be honest, the excessive amount of internal monologues and reflections interspersed throughout the novel is unnecessary. The narrative points and plot climaxes are weak. It feels like reading a pre-written review. To put it bluntly, the main plot lacks depth and relies entirely on internal monologues and reflections to pad the word count. I read half of it and then lost interest.

I finished reading the part of "Ever Night," and barely managed to read a little of the later parts. I feel the author still needs to improve; their writing style for this kind of relaxing story about an invincible protagonist needs further refinement.

The main character's personality is a mess, the romantic subplot is nonsensical, and the writing is extremely padded.

I felt like this book was just rambling nonsense the whole time; I had no idea what it was trying to say. There was no main plot, and the protagonist had no personality. In short, it had absolutely nothing.

There are too many monologues; there are only two or three chapters of monologues before there's non-monologue content. It's too tiring to read.

The writing is really bad. Does the protagonist have some kind of mental illness?