I'm Hanging Around in the Demon World

Dear, first of all, your introduction should be revised. After reading four chapters, it feels like you are writing about daily business, opening a shop and farming... As for the content, you write it in flashback, first write about the demon world and then the reason. This is okay, it is just a bit verbose... >It can be seen that you want to arrange a background for the protagonist to suffer ten times and finally achieve success. I think it is unnecessary... Digging too many holes and not being able to fill them is a very painful act of self-harm! Also, since the protagonist has nine tails, he is considered a half-demon! The essence is different, so don't force yourself to be obsessed with shemales. Every man longs for a beautiful female fox! You can write him a little more pretentious, don't write about his mood directly, and don't let him be ordered by a ring spirit! A ring spirit can be a greedy, unreliable child character, don't design her as some kind of obstacle, support does not require too much appearance and thought! Well, it's just a humble opinion, please delete it if you don't like it, don't comment! Thanks.