Lingmu Xiantu

The book is actually quite well written, but the heyday of Xianxia has passed. If you want to achieve success, you have to endure loneliness, just like the swordsman. The updates are stable, and if the number of words increases, people will naturally recommend and promote it.

Updates are slow, but it's really good-looking. It's one of the best among traditional fairy tales! 👍

The protagonist was born in a humble background and had no background or support, so he kept seeking death and taking risks to obtain treasures. However, as an ordinary person who traveled to the world of immortals, he should not just sit back and develop, but don't waste time.

I would like to give a suggestion to the author, use verses rationally. Using them indiscriminately will only make people feel embarrassed when reading, and it will feel like a child writing an article. Literary talent is not about how many verses are used in an article, but about making people read like a spring breeze and a sense of comfort throughout the article.

It feels too scripted! Wherever the protagonist in the novel is in danger, he is there, and there are various laws of immortality for the protagonist.

Can the protagonist put the magic weapon into his physical strength during his Qi training period? You can fly only during the foundation building period, okay? There is insufficient fuel during the Qi training period.

Do you have any misunderstandings about farming articles?

Hello fellow book lovers, when I was writing "Spiritual Wood Fairy Road" last year, I encountered force majeure and some changes occurred in my family. I really didn't have time. This year I finally had time. When I started writing, I found that I didn't know how to continue. I simply opened a new book, using the background and setting of Lingmu. The characters are completely new. It can be regarded as a sequel to Lingmu. I wrote it from scratch, and a small part of the plot and characters will be used. I am still a new author. It is so miserable to write a book that no one will read. Please save it and leave me a message if you have any questions. Original book TJ really had no choice but to mention the changes in his family here. Please forgive me! New book title: "Cultivation of Immortality Begins from the Suzaku Stars" https://book. Qidian. Com/info/1025021260 Please collect and recommend! I'm extremely sorry. I will definitely write a new book well!

The writing is quite good, but please pay attention to the names of the supporting characters, they are different from before and after.

It's just one chapter a day. It's too little. I vote for recommendations every day.

That is to say, the main character was deleted due to being a bit like a virgin. This is the first time.

The cool night makes me miss you like a river

Slowly get into the rhythm, keep it up, it will definitely become a hit!

The old school classic fairy tale writing style, without the word count, is becoming more and more rare nowadays.

It's a bit slow, just write your own, don't worry about other people's opinions. If you listen to other people's opinions, there will be nothing new.

The book written by the author is a slow-burning one with few explosive points. In addition, the author is a novice, has limited writing skills, and does not have his own readership. He should be somewhat prepared for the difficulties at the beginning. Many great masters also experienced this when they started. You should always start writing one or two popular books, cultivate a readership, and practice your writing skills, so that you can achieve explosive growth. I don't know if the author will read it, but I hope you try hard!