The Repair Knight in the Abyss

Personal reading progress: Chapter 348 is a very poisonous plot. I personally accept it and cannot be dissuaded from it. First of all, Eluticia itself is a character in the official novel. If you want to use the official character as an author, don't add too many changes to the character's image and personality. Otherwise, you might as well create your own character. This will neither offend people who know DND nor affect pure readers. If you change the original character image like this, it's like writing a novel about Conan's worldview and ending up with Xiaolan falling in love with the protagonist of your own creation. Readers of the original work cannot accept this kind of illicit thing. Secondly, even if Alutisia in your book is regarded as a creative character of the same name, is this forced dedication of the character at all reasonable in the plot, let alone forcing the setting to be a hit? The character was clearly written as a girl who has experienced love, and she also has emotional counseling and corresponding tools for finding someone. In the blink of an eye, The love interest is just taken away from the book. I dare you to ask if you have even a little foreshadowing that the love interest does not exist. A character that was originally focused on was forcibly destroyed just to give the protagonist a one-night stand? You wrote that the dwarf was cursed and turned into a succubus without a beard, and then it was more reasonable than the protagonist. As an ordinary reader, I can't stand such a horrific character collapse, especially the forced collapse of unoriginal characters. At least I personally feel that when I read a book, I don't want to see a female character who sacrifices her life for this kind of brainwashing by the author. To me, this is not exciting but highly toxic, so I quit. Author, if you think that the money I am reading is still worth it, please change the plot of 348-350, and I will delete this post myself. Of course, the above are all my personal opinions, and they only represent me personally. They do not involve the opinions and ideas of others. If you think what I said is wrong, there is no need to correct me. You are right. I apologize to you in advance. Please just ignore me.

It is a very rare DND fantasy team adventure article, and it successfully uses a large number of official modules and settings, and does a good job in world building. The plot arrangement is remarkable, and several adventures can be written into modules Although many chapters that throw away settings are just water for fans, they can also be used as a stepping stone for newcomers to enter the game In addition, only a small part of the settings are currently used. I looked at the Apple Orchard model. The group and setting area is so exciting, I want to have it all I hope the author will focus on the latest 5e magic ship Shining City or something, or wait for a wave of new alien landscapes Finally, there will be more interactions with famous adventurers, and the picture of the yawning portal can be used as a list

Personally, I think the relationship between the succubus and the protagonist is too abrupt. Let's not mention the cliche "his eyes are different from other men" when they first met, but the protagonist's fall is really a bit sudden. Since I don't have much patience for articles with CP, I will put it aside for now.

That's it, nondescript, just like RMB can be bought in the United States.

I dug up a good book in the middle of the night. Although I have only read half of it, I feel that the author's writing is smooth and he doesn't feel like a newcomer at all. Borrowing from other book reviews to summarize the characteristics, "people are in the abyss but their hearts are not there". Against the depressing background, the protagonist and his group are like a team of laughing and weird people. This may not be realistic enough, but it is valuable enough. The Western Fantasy DND-style background is still as attractive to me as ever. The elements of fantasy and immortality added in the middle are also eye-catching. If I had to mention a few shortcomings, it might be that several missions in the early and middle stages ended with the summoning of the dalao divine soldiers (one by the Fire Demon and the Nameless One, and one by the Old Red Dragon), which makes people feel a little regretful. But considering the protagonist's need for upgrading and the foreshadowing that drives the main line, it's not surprising overall. To summarize: It's not a loss after reading it, the author keeps up the good work!

I'm actually curious, can an indigenous knight understand the inheritance of cultivation? Take a passage from the Tao Te Ching as an example: "The superior virtue is not virtuous, because it is virtuous; the inferior virtue is not virtuous, it is not virtuous. The superior virtue is done without doing anything, but there is no thought; the inferior virtue is done, but there is thought. The superior benevolence is done without thinking, the superior righteousness is done, but there is thought, the superior virtue is done without thinking, and the superior virtue is done without thinking. If you don't respond to the etiquette, you will throw it away. Therefore, if you lose the way, you will be virtuous, if you lose virtue, you will be benevolent, if you lose benevolence, you will be righteous, and if you lose righteousness, you will be li. For example, in Zhuangzi's "Equality of Things", "Zi You said: "The sound of earth makes all the apertures the same, and the sound of people is better than bamboo. Dare to ask about the sound of nature. Zi Qi said: "I am so different from others that I can make it my own." If you take it for granted, who will do it if you are angry? "You think this native who has not been influenced by Chinese culture can understand it? Obviously not, the cultivation inheritance will be a thousand times more obscure than this. I actually have another question... Can he, a foreigner, understand the Sino-Tibetan language...

Read it all in one sitting. It can be said that the author has no obvious loopholes from beginning to end, and his writing style can fully support the plot. The combat part is also very reasonable, and some parts can even be used as modules if modified. It just so happens that the plot has not yet progressed to the most difficult part to write, so I will say it here... What is the next action plan of the protagonist group? The next most reasonable choice is to go to heaven. It has been said that there is a portal to the upper heaven on this level (and it should be where the Angel of Aira is stationed). It can be seen that after this battle, the protagonist and his party will definitely not let go of the method of leaving through the heaven, even if they need to run the group again to perform meritorious services/collect materials. The protagonist will not return to the plains through the talisman, because he is being chased by two powerful beings, and there is no problem in the town. Going back is tantamount to asking for trouble in the town. The most effective way is to leave the abyss and improve her strength (probably during the golden elixir stage), wait until she asks for help, and then take the initiative to return to the abyss. At this time, the talisman can also be used as a precise teleportation within a plane. When you reach the Nascent Soul stage, you may be able to open up your own demiplane. But the protagonist will not stay in heaven for too long, because he and the art-loving angel do not have much in common. In addition, the aura of heaven in heaven will slowly cause damage to vampires, and dwarves will not like this place without wine. They might go to see the Great Contest between the Angels of Order and Chaos. But after that, they will probably leave. The team may be separated. The Encyclopedia Skull and the Halfling Cook are the most likely to stay in the Celestial Realm. The original planes of each team member are also different, and they are likely to be separated. The protagonist is most likely to go to the plane of the vampire maid, and there may also be angels of love joining the team.

I probably understand why the author is so short 😏

Being chased by the demon of desire, running a hundred feet in one breath, and then three miles in five minutes? This still activates the escape technique, and the demon of desire cannot catch up... When escorting the succubus for investigation, the speed was 40 kilometers per hour, which was described as being as fast as lightning. . I'm sorry, I rode the ⚡️ intermediate and high-level demon team that chased the succubus every day and walked day and night for two days to cover 250 kilometers. . Don't the author feel that this math is a bit low? Although it is low martial arts, it is as low as the hobbit fighting in The Lord of the Rings

The pace is indeed a bit too slow. Updates are slow to begin with. If the plot progresses too slowly, it will be difficult to attract people. Moreover, where is the strength of the protagonist? It feels like he is very powerful at the first level of the abyss. There is no clear concept. Moreover, the strength of the protagonist has not changed for a long time. Has he not passed the training period yet?

Now that I have seen hundreds of chapters, the biggest feeling is that the plot is dragged out. After looking at the table of contents, it took dozens of chapters to infiltrate into one operation, and even used long dialogues on the battlefield to overdo it. The hard stories about cross-dressing transsexuals feel more like a stench to me, full of violation and inappropriateness, and I almost always skip them. Compared with the novels I have read in recent years, low popularity means it is inevitable that it will not be a hit. But despite its flaws, it's still worth watching.

I'm thinking, you know so much about dnd, why don't you just set up a demon knight? It feels so inconsistent to have a cultivator knight, and the style of painting is inconsistent.

This protagonist is not Han Paopao at all. He was obsessed with a succubus who obviously didn't like him, and he was helping out with work, paying several times more than his salary. Giving money and artifacts to this damn vampire again. How is this any different from giving your wife to someone else? The only cool thing is licking someone's hand later? ! ! ! Real life is already very cruel, and the novel is also so disgusting... Isn't it better to go it alone? Lord Knight is not very good? What are you afraid of the devil's revenge? It's not like there is no secret method of cultivation to hide one's identity. It's not like he can't run away. The more enemies, the more loot, isn't it common sense? This will speed up development. Farming is usually a beautiful thing, but I actually help the succubus work, I'm convinced

I just discovered a problem with this book. Why do you have to add a practice setting? Is there any explanation later? Although every world created by DM is part of the DND multiverse. But it still feels strange. If you really can't do it, can't you just use Lu Yuan, the slayer of gods on the 300th floor of the abyss? It's not like there are no Chinese-style settings here. Whether it's the qi setting of the monk, one of the most basic professions, or the escorts and monks in Dragon Magazine, why do they have to use the qi-training golden elixir system?

What does it mean that the cultivating knight turned out to be a cultivating knight? 🤔

This

Thanks to the author, good protagonists are really rare

The biggest problem with this book is the full rules table setting. I just ask, who can accept that the fastest speed of a golden elixir boss is only 60 yards? The rules of the game are simply outrageous in reality! !

Sure enough, even dnd can't escape the fate of eunuchs

After reading about 100 chapters, this book gave me a sense of dissonance. The background of this book should not be in the abyss, but in a normal plane, because although the protagonist is in an environment where the jungle is strong, it gives me a strong sense of order, which is different from the disorderly and chaotic environment of the abyss. The environment doesn't quite match (of course, this is my subjective assumption about the environment of the abyss), they are all in the abyss. Nine out of ten demons' natures should be lunatics, fighting madness, or psychosis. They can be orderly but not much, so I think it is better if the protagonist's background is in a normal plane.

I have followed four hundred chapters, and the previous emotional scenes were all fine, but why did it suddenly become so OOC? Moreover, the boyfriend was written out all at once, and there was no foreshadowing in the previous plot. This is too fucked up. Reading it well makes me feel as sick as eating a fly

This book is very detailed, and the characters are written in a very realistic way. Unfortunately, it's the wrong subject, it's too niche. If it were about fairy tales and mysteries, it would definitely be a hit!

It's really well written, but no one reads it.

It's really good. Why is the popularity so low?

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! I would like to recommend a book that is decisive in killing, nonsensical and full of joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and lived by making bad movies" is hilarious...

The idea for the second part is to add a 2 after the name but change the number.

That mod exceeds the standard, look at this