Change Begins in the Ninja World

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Konoha's Five Reforms 1. Establish a Merit System Civilian ninjas covet the titles of the ninja clan, and the village should establish its own honor system. (Until the end of the game, Konoha's annual prestige +1, noble influence -10%) 2. The guidance of the Jonin Countless young lives have been lost in the war, we must pay attention to the quality and safety of the new generation of ninjas (Until the end of the game, Konoha's military training degree +5%) 3. New security department The Uchiha group has long-term exclusive rights to maintain security, and we must return power to the Hokage. (Trigger event "The Fate of Uchiha") 4. Eradicate the roots At this point, the spy organization of the noble Danzo has deeply threatened the interests of Konoha, and it is time to eradicate it. (Until 20 years later, Konoha obtained "unified intelligence department, espionage ability +200%", gained 100 administrative points, and 25 noble troops led by Danzo rebelled in Konoha Village) 5. Five Shadow Conference The world should no longer be in turmoil, the Five Shadow Conference must be held regularly, and peace led by Konoha has arrived (until the end of the game, Konoha gets +2 diplomatic relations, diplomat +1)

Let me sort out the important events of the Third Ninja World War: ① The third generation Kazekage of Sunagakure Village and the genius puppet master Scorpion disappeared. In order to find the traces of the two, and to prove that even if Sunagakure Village lost the Kazekage, it was still one of the top five, Chiyo and Ebizo brazenly devoted all the fighting power of the village. After that, the three wars officially started. ② Namikaze Minato repelled the AB combination, Konoha's reputation increased ③Iwa Ninja raided Konoha's supply line, Konoha retaliated, the battle of Kannabi Bridge broke out, Obito sent his eyes to fake death ④Iwa Ninja The rear was empty, and the Third Raikage led his men in a sneak attack. The Third Raikage died in the battle ⑤ Seven people with ninja swords raided the Leaf Village. Matt Dai opened the eight doors and killed four, and three escaped. Matt Dai died of side effects ⑥ Kirigakure snatched Lin away and sealed the tailed beast in Lin's body. Lin died under Kakashi's Chidori move, and Obito witnessed the opening of the kaleidoscope ⑦ In 50 years, Namikaze Minato and Orochimaru competed for the position of the fourth generation, and Minato came to the top; Orochimaru's Hokage dream was shattered, and he officially gave up moral restraint and used people from Konoha Village for human experiments Becoming the Hokage of the fourth generation basically means the end of the Three War, and what follows is the matter of Konoha Village. In 51, Naruto was born, Obito attacked the village, and the Nine-Tails Rebellion broke out. The signs of the Nine-Tails' eyes being controlled by the Sharingan intensified internal conflicts. In 54, the Kumogakure Village came to Konoha to sign a peace agreement, and took the opportunity to abduct Hinata Hinata and expose her. Hyuga Hizashi knocked out Hyuga Hizashi, committed suicide in exchange for peace In 1958, the Uchiha clan was destroyed, and Uchiha Itachi defected There is no specific time for Orochimaru's defection, probably between 51-53 years. The above content may have deviations or omissions. It's enough for everyone to just take a look and get a general understanding. Let's talk about the respective situations of the three ninjas. At the end of World War II, Tsunade learned one after another about the deaths of her boyfriend Kato Dan and her younger brother Senju Noju, and suffered from anemia and retreated to the rear; Jiraiya lamented the ruthlessness of war, and at the same time received a prophecy from Toad Sage, and determined to travel through the ninja world to find the son of destiny and a way to achieve peace; Orochimaru witnessed the death of his disciple Senju Noju, lamenting the fragility of life, and when paying homage to the tombstone of Noju, he saw a white snake shed, and determined to pursue eternal life. I would like to emphasize that although Jiraiya left the village to travel, he had also been gathering information about enemy villages for the village. It was not that he had done nothing.

Talking about bad data all day affects your mood for updating, but you should update more? Where does the data come from if it is not updated? Do you only blame others? One chapter a day, the number of words is still small, if there is good data, there will be ghosts

There haven't been any good Naruto fanfics recently, but Hongye is winning at the starting line this time.

I can't tell what level the protagonist's strength is. You may say he is strong, but his sage mode is not complete, but he is weak and can defeat a complete nine-tails. Nagato and others cannot even defeat half a nine-tails.

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In Chapter 58, the protagonist believes that Konoha can accommodate Danzo if it can accommodate him. It's out of the question. The protagonist is to represent the interests of non-ninja ninjas. But in the third generation period, ordinary ninjas can only rely on the ninja clan. The Hokage faction is the world of the ninja clan. Behind the third generation are Sarutobi and Inokacho, behind Danzo are Shimura and other radicals of various ethnic groups (such as Yamafuze, Aburame Taken), and the two advisors represent conservatives of various ethnic groups. Although Danzo is very jumpy, in the final analysis he is still the leader of the Ninja clan, which belongs to the internal conflicts of the Ninja clan. If the protagonist forms his own faction, it means that the common people have their own faction, which is contradictory to the fact that the Ninja clan belongs to the Earth. This is different. Konoha can accommodate 10 Danzos, but it cannot accommodate one protagonist.

If modern people time travel to Naruto, wouldn't reincarnation be the biggest temptation? The original works have proven the magic of immortality! The protagonist turned a blind eye? Even if it's not for longevity, it's still a pretty awesome life-saving method. How can you ignore it? This is illogical

I have to say that Momiji's writing and plot are actually very strong, but unfortunately he is a hot dog. He likes to give up when the popularity of the book is not enough. Let's not talk about the Tokyo book. You are not popular in One Piece. It is the same when you switch to Naruto. It is better to honestly finish a million-dollar original, or simply stream it unlimitedly, so that at least it can give new readers some confidence in the introduction.

I really like the flavor of scar literature in this book. Through the tragic situation of the protagonist and several comrades around him, it vividly describes what it means to be a speck of dust in the era, which is like a mountain when it falls on an individual's head. Today's young people are becoming less and less interested in scar literature, but the author is able to find a new way to write scar literature in the form of passionate anime and humanities. This approach is worth promoting, and it is expected to be more easily accepted by young people.

If two consecutive books are written like this, the pen name Hongye can be dropped, and only negative assets will be left. Who would dare to update it?

This book is very good in the early stages, but later on it feels like it was written by another person. Most of the narration in one plot is sarcastic, which gives people a sense of fragmentation.

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After reading a lot of controversies, it is better to watch the original animation again. The first time I watched the third generation, it was a good one. I have read a lot of fan fiction in the past two years. Some authors are right in their writing. The current situation of Naruto's life as a child in the original animation is that his parents' inheritance was swallowed up by the third generation, and the house was rebuilt. He ate expired food and drank expired milk. He was often hungry even though he didn't have enough to eat. The third generation brainwashed Naruto from time to time, asking him to agree with the will of fire, and made it clear that he would give a candy to a stick. Later, Naruto went to an island with Octopus to test whether he could defeat his own dark side. This shows that Naruto has long understood the third generation's face, and Naruto just hides his dark side. I didn't face it until I reached the island. In the latest extra movie, Naruto travels back to the past and fights the blackened Naruto, almost dying, and finally returns to the original time and space.

Magnetic Escape made these ninjas useless. They would create metal streams, metal forests, and some just throw iron lumps at every turn. Micro-management is the key to success. Is it difficult to control metal to kill people? It's not difficult. It's not too easy to control a small amount of metal debris, enter the body along the enemy's breath, and pierce the internal organs in the body. Even the sensing ninja cannot perceive so comprehensively on the battlefield.

I actually haven't watched Naruto at all, but I just like your writing about Naruto. I have ordered all three Naruto fanfics you wrote. I clicked in and wanted to read more, but I didn't know what attracted me to it. Why is the writing about Ta Ma so attractive to me? The most important thing is to return the eunuch.

It seems that many authors have not even read the Naruto anime properly before reading it carefully.

We've all arrived at this place and suddenly we can still be eunuchs.

I don't understand the point of the author writing the main character to death at all.

And he doesn't take revenge, I'll wipe it out

In fact, my favorite is your book, Scientific Naruto. Well, it is your first book. I really like the relaxation of that book. I have been paying attention to your books since then, but I feel that the author is a bit confused.

The time is wrong. The Golden Horn and Silver Horn are from the First World War, not the Third War.

Old Hongye, why did you disband?

All metals can be controlled, but what about human bones? Can calcium carbonate and calcium sulfate directly control the disintegration or flowering of each other's bones?