The Age of Discovery

The settings are inconsistent. During the first trial, the protagonist told us that the things he brought during the trial must be charged for travel expenses. To bring high-rated items back will only be considered qualified if you bring more resources. The important thing is that a small person can be big and the family cannot take care of it. Now is there any killer weapon that is useful for level 0 and level 2? How much travel expenses will it cost? Can you earn it? It is better to just slander them and drive them away.

I don't see that this territory is necessary for the protagonist, but it actually delays the protagonist's cultivation. Author, this is a world view in which the jungle prevails. The territory you created does not improve the protagonist's own cultivation at all. In the chapter I have read, the golden finger can quickly improve the personal cultivation. If you are strong, you can eat meat when you come to the world. It is useless to create a territory. If you are strong, no one will turn to you.

Well! When I first read it, it was quite to my liking, but maybe it was because the author wasn't skilled enough or something. I feel a lot of discomfort every time I change the map. It doesn't feel as natural as the other Infinite Stories I've read. It's just blunt! Uncomfortable. Even if it is a full order, I can only abandon you! I hope the author will work hard! Of course the above are all my personal opinions. Bye now!

I quite liked the setting at the beginning, but after just reading a few chapters, I was stung by the nonsense that was as long as a footband.

My thoughts after reading most of it, I wonder if the author can see that most of what he writes is really not suitable for the tastes of today's young people. First of all, there are a lot of problems with the practice. What is the indestructible body? What immortality? What are the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon? Who wouldn't feel sick after seeing a bunch of stupid skills? There is also the issue of realm, what kind of immortal? What demon? How did you become an immortal in the end when you entered Taoism through martial arts? The most important point is, are you a group fighting for hegemony, or are you fighting alone? If individualism is too prominent, there is no need to write about lords. Since you said that one person can fight a group, the protagonist does not need to develop his own lord. It is better to let the protagonist directly plunder other people's territories! It's all about crushing anyway, right? Since you have written about lords, you should not highlight individualism, but should strive for hegemony and fight for it! Take a look at Heroes of Another World and see what other people wrote about it. Why do so many people like to watch it? Because he knows what type of novel he is writing and will not deviate from the overall! Although your subject matter is refreshing, it has been twisted by your writing, just like a tree that was originally straight, but you made it protrude a little on the left and a little on the right. How disgusting. Will others still pay attention to this tree? All deformed!

Somewhat creative, but the author's writing is touching. The setting is full of errors and omissions, and the writing is stumbling. I feel uncomfortable watching it

Ahem, I just want to know. There are so many people in a family, but after hundreds of years, they haven't found any nests. You can find them as soon as you enter. The important thing is that you still think the quality is not good. I feel like you can build a family by yourself and pick up nests every day.

The beginning is a bit draggy and the plot is unclear. If it is an infinite flow, then the main line only serves as a series, and the highlight is traveling through the world. Similar to bunches of grapes, the vines won't eat them. If there is no infinite flow, it would be a bit redundant to write a branched world. If there is no primary and secondary, you will quickly lose interest.

I'm so verbose that I'm not interested

The latest two chapters are so poisonous that I almost foamed at the mouth. What kind of twist is this? I thought it was some kind of scroll, talisman or other trump card, but it turned out that grandpa saved me. What kind of thing is Long Aotian destroying other people's worlds and asking people to surrender to you? The setting text does not match Long Aotian at all, is it the supporting character Long Aotian, or the villain Long Aotian? If I don't say anything else, I'll just talk about one issue. You can succumb to power, so why not succumb to Thousand Souls Head? Obviously your clone can't beat Thousand Soul Head, otherwise you would just do a big push at the tree of life.

It's really uncomfortable to look at disgusting people. Slip away.

I just watched the first world and had some thoughts. Wouldn't it be better to just add some gold fingers? Why do you need the decomposition function? Anyway, you don't need it. As I said before, I have saved energy for more than ten years because the material conversion is used up. In the first world, why only decompose scorpions? Can't those stones and other things be used? With this kind of gold finger, you can worry about being discovered by others at home. In a world with no one, the world is not worthy of this kind of gold finger.

The setting is good, but the writing is not rigorous. Farewell.

Hey, I'm very impressed by this author. Every time, the creativity is very good and the content is attractive, but the content is really not rigorous. He forcibly reduces the intelligence of the main and supporting characters, uses some incomprehensible reasons to perform some zz operations, and uses golden fingers indiscriminately, and the power system can easily collapse. . . This author refused to listen to advice. He didn't listen to so many people's opinions. He just went his own way, but when his grades were not good, he would become TJ. I became FO at that time, and blamed the readers for not subscribing. . .

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I originally thought that as a divine farmer, I could withstand the poison of this idea, but when I saw what happened later, I realized that I was overestimating myself. A super lair heart requires a level 10 saint to be sacrificed, but it can only summon a level 6 Yuan Shen Immortal. I don't want to miss this opportunity. You are probably losing your mind. Even if I have a saint, you can't destroy the Yuan Shen Immortal even if you have one.

The creativity is really good and the setting is very eye-catching. The protagonist is too zz, just like the previous bet, when the situation was good, he went to fight with the sandworms, the world fragments were shattered, he was judged as a breach of contract, and then he was exiled. . . . Even my elementary school IQ would not have allowed me to do such a stupid thing! ! ! After being exiled to the Supreme Tower, he rashly brought the captives to the World Tree without strict supervision, allowing them to spread the news, and then they were besieged. . . . Don't show your wealth in vain! Don't show your wealth in vain! Internet novels more than ten years ago overstated this truth, and the protagonist wanted to do the opposite and become a zz🤫🤫🤫

This is an introduction to the ancient world, the fairyland. What kind of winter scorpion and centaur warrior are you paired with? Aren't you embarrassed? It's not that I don't like Fairyland, and it's not that I can't read Western mythology, but writing these two things together makes me uncomfortable just thinking about them.

Is this a studio work? All kinds of prefaces don't match the afterwords. The protagonist is Lin Chen, Lin Chen, March World, second level, and third level. The protagonist's grandfather is Lin Zhennan, the seventh son of the lord, and Lin Zhenying, the fifth son of the lord.

Why are you in such a hurry to establish a territory? Cultivation has just begun. Is it possible that there is a causal relationship between territory and personal practice? Why waste precious resources to establish a territory at this time?

It's the first time I ordered it, but I don't want to read it after opening the clones. I don't know why I hate opening clones. I'm afraid that the author might cheat. Several of the world clones are at level 7, but the main body is only at level 3.

I don't want to read anymore. I'm so speechless at the end. I've already made a bet and I'm sure I'll win. As a result, I have to break the rules myself. Isn't your outline written like this watertight? It's your plan. The jump is too abrupt. This is completely suppressing it when it is about to collapse. . . . .

The beginning of this book is okay, but as it goes on, it becomes more and more cliche. What are these recent pictures? Not to mention deliberately arranging to be beaten, how can you save a dragon? There is something wrong with the transaction. The enemy is a locust, but pig's feet are not. Everyone is a locust. Helping the NPC heal can also be said to be a hindrance to the enemy, and guarding the NPC is completely deliberate. The plot is too short. Lian, there is no need for such a powerful plug-in to build a lord and build a family. I am not good at it, and I am afraid that the plot will not be able to contain a lot of settings. What group of people in this world are not interested in the cultivation level, and the setting of the place of experience. The pig's feet have not been practiced much since it was put on the shelves. If the author can ask why the subscription is low, I will be drunk!

As long as the author admits that he is a mediocre author, he should use a little more routine when writing books. You wouldn't dare to make the protagonist have immortality in the second world, and not write about the upgrades to fight monsters, but do it in a different way. The key is that you don't have this ability. It's a typical case of high vision and low hand.

I was so angry that I couldn't read the book and read the book reviews. They were all the kind of comments that book friends hate after reading the book. None of them were the kind of black-handed insults to the author. In the end, the author still went his own way and wrote rubbish. One or two may have different tastes, but they all said that you made the same mistake and still didn't change it. If you read the book reviews, we all hope that you will be a good reader, and that you can make more money and read better books. Your writing is very good in all aspects. Go read the book review.

This book by the author is really boring, and the protagonist is so disgusting! Author, take a look, after more than 130 chapters, do you have a real meaning? Every time this protagonist encounters trouble, why does he fall into the whirlpool of other people's disputes? Annoying! Don't want to! Or something like that, why don't you be a turtle if you are so afraid of trouble! Also, when a lord comes to a world of martial arts, and is despised and insulted by a little person, then martial arts comes up, and a small punishment is to point a sword at someone to scare them? The most important thing is that this person also vowed to find someone to play the protagonist! After the protagonist has mastered martial arts, he wants to travel around the world? Not interested in the leader either, so Buddhist? The more I read, the more annoyed I get, and I don't know how many more chapters I can last!

After reading a little bit, I found that the protagonist has been compromising no matter who he is with. It does not mean that the protagonist has to be invincible all the way, but there is no need to keep compromising like establishing a base. There is no need to cooperate with the Condor Chamber of Commerce. You can find another chamber of commerce. Moreover, you have portrayed the Condor Chamber of Commerce in a way that is annoying. Click to find the sect line again, and let's talk about the family and the golden finger. At the end, you can also change to a world group and slowly develop. The protagonist seems to be a bit indecisive now. He wants benefits but doesn't want to compromise, but he is forced to compromise, and he still has to compromise even though there is a way out. This is a bit frustrating. The most important thing is that this situation has happened several times. I don't have to say it, the key is that I feel uncomfortable if I don't speak out after seeing it. I hope the author can see my opinion

In the midst of the book shortage, I have been reading it, but I feel that pig's feet are sometimes worth a lot of money, and they often reduce intelligence. The golden finger is so powerful, and the author always suppresses the protagonist, and the suppression is a bit harsh. If the development is slow, he will give the protagonist treasures and experiences, such as absorbing thousands of evil souls and enslaving the scorpion god. Now he has written about the success of enslaving the scorpion god, and he has also reduced the protagonist's intelligence and used the sixth-level boss as a nest. Spirit of the Cave, you know you are so capable. Your Rubik's Cube space can transport troops. Why don't you put the Scorpion God in every mission, enter other worlds, sweep across other worlds, collect resources to develop yourself, and advance early. If you have to send troops to the lair, what is the use of five or six third- and fourth-level garbage soldiers every month? Having a sixth-level boss is very helpful in the early stage? Goldfinger always writes so much about it, but I just don't use it. I'm so angry that it hurts.

It's so rubbish. Selling dog meat over someone else's head, doesn't it mean to lead the mainstream?

With such a good name, I thought it would be a magnificent adventure and plundering story in the heavens, but the whole text is full of nonsense, like the smelly and long footbinding of an old woman. The content is also about selling sheep over dogs. The protagonist travels around the world just like the protagonist of ordinary fantasy novels from one city to another. There is no sense of the heavens and the world. This title is a waste.