I Took a Trip to Another World

I'm starting a thread and asking for your votes, everyone! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

I don't even want to criticize these kinds of authors anymore. They write fantasy, but the content is distinctly Chinese. It's such an embarrassing situation of trying to imitate something but ending up with something completely different. Either you should just write about Chinese things directly, or you should read more Western literature and stop writing like this. Even though it's a fictional world, please respect the facts.

The book is good (but there are too many chapters of the main characters flirting, making the plot really drag). The pacing is too slow.

It's 180,000 words long, and only 20,000 more words until it goes on sale. Readers, could you please leave a comment? I'm a little anxious right now.

The war scenes are too childish and bland, making them utterly uninteresting to read. The constant flirting with the female lead is just one story after another; it's typical of a deadbeat otaku's fantasy. The main problem is that the way the flirting is written gives me goosebumps.

Having read from chapter one to seventy-three, as a reader, I want to say that the author's writing style is inconsistent, sometimes good and sometimes bad. The romance between the two heroic spirits and the protagonist was so cringeworthy it gave me angina. This is supposed to be an isekai fantasy war story, but I'm reading it like a romance novel.

This is my first time writing a long review. I think the author is quite similar to me. I also stumbled and made many mistakes when I first started writing a novel. I wrote a few books but abandoned them all. Recently, I picked up my pen again. It's not for any particular reason, but simply because of my love and passion for novels! I've read your book, but to be honest, I only read two chapters.

Should we even write about it? Seriously, if you're worried about censorship, then don't write about women. Can't you write about men?

Dear readers, I'm a newbie, so please let me know in the comments if there's anything I've written incorrectly. I'll revise it as soon as I see it, because I'd really appreciate any suggestions from you all!

The camp had over 2,000 soldiers out of a total of 5,000 men, and I wiped them out. There were also a huge number of slaves. Medieval productivity meant that supporting even one soldier was a struggle for ten people.