The Ultimate Creator

Overall, this is a very novel. I've read two chapters, and the pacing is a bit fast. Some things aren't explained clearly, and I can't quite put my finger on it. The author must have thought of them himself. I'll think about it and comment again if I remember. From the two chapters I read, it's very good; I'd invest.

🙂Why is it that while it's emphasized not to rescue people randomly to prevent inflated combat power, the protagonist rescues people every single time?

Change the title; your book is an insult to the Genesis genre.

I suggest you avoid some problematic points; some writing styles are no longer suitable for today.

I couldn't bear to watch any longer. The guy who joined said, "I'll take care of it." The protagonist had tears in his eyes. Sigh, is this what a reborn person is like? I can't take it anymore, I'm leaving.

The sauce is bubbling up, and I'm here to report for duty!

There's a reason why seasoned bookworms generally dislike savior-themed novels. If you include any betrayal or anything like that, the book is basically finished. And if you include rebirth, a saintly figure, and idiotic intelligence, it's finished again... It's so difficult! When will there be novels that aren't so depressing?

Is the book review section really this quiet?

The beginning was very vague, and the world-building was unclear, so much so that I had to go back and read the setting to understand it. The companions arrived too quickly; at the beginning, they were all unclear about the male protagonist's abilities, yet one person after another was added, which was very chaotic.

The protagonist seems to lack intelligence; he's just an idiot. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, he would have died hundreds of times over.