I Have a City in Another World

***You started watching it when you were in elementary school, and you continued watching until you were in your third year of junior high school*

The author's imagination is pretty good, but I don't know if it's a problem with his writing skills or if it's just too watery. Some places are weird. There are many places where the logic does not make sense. It gives the impression that the author is either too young or too homely, which means that the author is a bit like a love novice. Of course, this may or may not be intentional on the part of the author →_→. Some people in the book reviews said that there is no stallion, but after reading more than ten chapters, I really can't tell that the author didn't give the protagonist a stallion. But fortunately, from what I see now, some women behave normally. As a woman, I have been reading novels for more than ten years. To be honest, I don't like stallion novels, but what I don't like even more is that the women in stallion novels are like brainless. They pounce on the male protagonist when they see them. As an author, at least give us readers a good reason. It doesn't matter if one of them pounces on you. It's not surprising that a strange girl appears. What's strange is that they all pounce on you. Even if you are the emperor, some people will not marry you, let alone someone who is not the emperor.

How to say, it is quite surprising that this book has nearly 4,000 chapters. I saw more than 2,100 chapters and stopped reading it. It was the chapter about the Kingdom of God with the Fall of the Temple. The account was lost and I recently found it. At first glance, I was shocked that it was almost 4,000. At a glance, the chapter names were a bit stinky and long. In fact, I came to read this book to see if it was complete enough to read the ending. After all, the book is a high-quality book, but I was disappointed. , There is a kind of wireless loop and non-stop flow of guides. I also read Legend of the Seven Realms in 2005. I lost my account before and registered another one in 2017. I like long stories but don't like super long ones. Just like eating delicious food for 365 days, you will always get tired of it. However, I also understand the difficulties of every book author. The literary environment is like this. People have to eat under great social pressure. I hope that the next book will be better.

The creativity is very good, the writing is average, the main character and the supporting cast are brainless, and I can barely read it without any brains.

He has a good brain, a marginal IQ, and he has drug addiction/epileptic seizures from time to time.

After the 500th chapter, the writing collapsed. The first part was a little bit toxic and you can still read it, but the second part was so toxic that I didn't know what to say!

I can't complain, how could the protagonist be any more mentally retarded?

461 Why can't you read the broken chapter?

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If I plant one picture, I will harvest countless pictures

Can the author tell me how much the monthly royalties for this book are? It has been updated for 9 years and my perseverance is invincible. If I was asked to pick up money, I probably wouldn't be able to hold on for 9 years.

It's crazy. The book I read more than ten years ago is still being updated. I thought it was the same name, but I didn't expect it was really you.

Awesome, even on my daily guide

Damn, I'm still writing. I read it when I was in school. It's been several years since I started working in society. 666

The author's perseverance is really awesome!

I think the results of this book are not very good, but the author actually keeps writing until now, which is amazing! Specially subscribe to a chapter and leave a comment

Congratulations on breaking through 10 million words and thank the author for his perseverance

This author has so much perseverance and has more than 5,000 chapters, which is unimaginable, 👍

This has more fucking chapters than Samsara Paradise.

. As an old bookworm, this book is actually very contradictory and makes people uncomfortable to read. The most attractive part of this book is the novel world view, which shows that the author's imagination is first-rate, which is also the driving force for me to read. However, the shortcomings are also a bit obvious. Many places are watery. I want to pretend to be cool, and I think of the Holy Mother when I think of the Holy Mother. I obviously did not think carefully about the progress of the writing. I wrote wherever I thought. The writing method is very immature. Although the writing methods of the big writers are all pretentious by middle-aged teenagers, the writing method is really good. Keep working hard, keep your imagination, strengthen your writing skills, and you may become a god.

When I saw that the protagonist of Chapter 4387 was beaten to death, I didn't finish the book, but started to evolve and upgrade again! The author felt that there were too many holes to fill, was that intentional? !

6,000 Pieces and 14 million pieces are pretty awesome.

The protagonist saw the homeless man and the old woman, chewing on dry corn buns and drinking wild vegetable soup without saying anything. When he saw the lonely sisters, they brought food and water, and even hugged and comforted them. The author misses women so much that he goes to prostitutes. If he doesn't pay, it's not considered prostitution, and he won't be caught.

No, brother, they are still updating 😂

The writing in the early stage was very good, from establishing your own building city, developing the building city to establishing a war zone. It was not until after participating in the test of the fifth war zone that I started to write at a loss. Randomly writing a world before finishing it and then running to write another world. It is probably that the protagonist finds a world and runs there to develop it. When it is halfway developed, he runs back to rest for two days. After returning, he discovers a new world. The protagonist goes to this new world again. Halfway through the development of this new world, he discovers that there is a space crack in this new world. When he goes in, he sees that there is a world, and the protagonist develops in this world again. Halfway through the development, the platform calls the protagonist back to participate in some competition, and this competition is in some new world. There are several worlds in one game and hundreds of chapters in one world, which really disgusts me. The big structure in the early stage of each world turns out to be hasty in the later stage. Isn't it good to go back and write about the development of war zones? When it comes to ranking war zones, I start not to write about the original war zones, forgetting my roots. The protagonist was decisive in killing in the early stage, but in the later stage, he started to become a virgin, which was a bit unbearable.

I dare say there are many people who haven't finished the first chapter. The first few poisonous points in the first chapter are enough to persuade a lot of people to retreat, the first sister. The second licking dog. The third character.

I hope the author is writing a book about the world of Loucheng. I really can't get enough of it.

Awesome, this book has always been on my bookshelf, even though I haven't read it much. I specifically set 20 chapters to encourage you.

When I read this book, it only had a few hundred thousand words. Then I thought it was finished before reading it again. I waited and waited for so many years and it still hasn't been finished. The author is awesome.

There was a loophole in this novel when I first read it. Did the author not understand what it means to have bills with the same number? Are you kidding yourself about millions of bills with the same number?