Pokemon Trainer: The Strongest

Personally, I don't like the data-based writing method. If the author is writing about a game world then that's fine. If it were to describe a real world, this kind of digitization would be off-putting. It doesn't matter if the protagonist can see the elf data himself, but any passerby can tell the elf level, which is very game.

The seven-color aptitude division is quite vulgar. Each one is divided into upper, middle and lower levels, and the lowest level red is also divided into high and low. It's a bit funny. How can the measurement in the Pokémon world be so accurate?

I suggest you revise Chapter 5. It says that not many kings have top-level skills. They are basically all high-level. But later I found that almost all elves have top-level skills, and there are quite a few.

I beg the author to read the Pokémon Encyclopedia. Although the fanfic is simple, it is deep. Moreover, you only need to look at the Pokémon's qualifications, and then its characteristics and personality. What's the use of just looking at the qualifications? If you have good qualifications, how many operations can you give a rubbish character and characteristics? Your battle is too straightforward, and there is no fun in Pokémon battles. It's just a running account, which is boring.

I found that those who write about Pokémon nowadays don't even know what Pokémon is called. Most of them read what others write about Pokémon and then follow it. I wonder if I have ever watched Pokémon. Not all Pokémon sound like Pikachu, and their names are just sounds. I get annoyed when I see people who use a word from Pokémon as a sound. Nowadays, fanfics are all written by practitioners. Be more dedicated when practicing. Is it okay to check the information? I can't even notice the humanistic details. I want to be a god. It's a joke.

The author really has a lot of nonsense... How did you write so much nonsense? I'm impressed! The three golden chapters of others become three chapters of explanation when it comes to you. Settings do not rely on explanations. Settings need to be integrated into the plot to appear logically! Regarding the dialogue between the protagonist and his sister in the previous chapters, every time a person finished a sentence, one or two pages of nonsense would be interspersed before the next sentence appeared. You are really cheating...

Something similar to the author's has already been put on the shelves. When will it be put on the shelves? ? ? Although there are no subscriptions💰 there are still rewards

Come on, author, although the update has stopped again, but I, a bookworm of 10 years, think your writing is still good.

When playing online games, orange costumes are the best, but orange qualifications are the worst. A little uncomfortable

Everyone has a Pokémon world in their heart, please don't judge other people's books. The author stopped writing any comments.