Pokemon Trainer: The Strongest

Personally, I dislike data-driven writing. If the author is writing about a game world, it's fine. But if it's depicting a real world, this kind of data-driven approach becomes off-putting. It's one thing for the protagonist to see Pokémon stats, but for a random passerby to be able to tell you a Pokémon's level is just too game-like.

The seven-color aptitude classification is rather cliché, with each category further divided into upper, middle, and lower tiers. Even the lowest-tier red is further subdivided into high and low levels, which is a bit ridiculous. How does the Pokémon world measure aptitude so precisely?

I suggest revising Chapter 5. It states that while the Elite Four members don't have many top-tier skills, most have high-level ones, but later I discovered that almost every Pokémon has top-tier skills, and quite a few at that.

Please, author, check the Pokémon encyclopedia before writing. Fan fiction may seem simple, but it's actually quite complex. You only need to look at a Pokémon's stats, but what about its abilities and nature? What's the use of just looking at stats? If a Pokémon has good stats but a useless nature and ability, how much skill can you really pull off? Your battles are too straightforward and lack the fun of Pokémon battles. It's just a monotonous record of events, which is boring.

I've noticed that many people writing Pokémon fanfiction these days don't even know how to pronounce Pokémon names. They're probably just copying what others say. I seriously doubt they've even watched Pokémon. Not all Pokémon sounds like Pikachu; their names are their sounds. I get annoyed when people use a single word from Pokémon as their sound. These fanfictions are all just practice.

The author rambles on so much... How did you manage to write so much nonsense? I'm speechless! What are others' golden three chapters become three explanatory chapters in yours. Setting isn't about explanation; it's about integrating it into the plot to make it logical!

Other works by the same author have already been released. When will yours be released? Although there was no tipping There's still some money left from subscriptions.

Keep it up, author! Although you've stopped updating again, as a 10-year bookworm, I still think your writing is pretty good.

In online games, orange-tier equipment is always the best, but the end result is that orange-tier gear has the worst stats. It's a bit disheartening.

Everyone has their own Pokémon world in their heart, so please don't criticize other people's books carelessly. All those criticisms will drive the author to quit writing altogether.