Becoming a Pokemon Trainer in a Parallel World

The new book was said to be discontinued, so I came to read this one, but I couldn't stand the second chapter. Can't I have a normal sister? It sounds like a cute sister with a vicious tongue, but in fact, she is just a person who uses the name of a sister to insult her brother. (It's not just you, the author.) I don't know why everyone likes this kind of character. Don't you find it disgusting? Don't people who don't have a sister have such a scumbag in their fantasies? Let's go. I'd better delete this one. Keep your new book first and read it when you remember it.

I have only read dozens of chapters and would like to give my suggestions to the author. First of all, the portrayal of this sister is very unpleasant. The problem is that the protagonist licks her like a licking dog. When I saw that I wanted to give my sister the Chou Chou Fish with the golden qualification, I really wanted to delete the book. After it is announced that Chou Chou can evolve into Menas, wouldn't it be nice to replace the Chou Chou Fish with the Yusanjia with the same qualifications or a slightly inferior quasi-god? Secondly, there are skills. The protagonist's elf upgrades and evolves without understanding the skills. It is very confusing, especially when the Ugly Fish evolves into Menas and only learns one water wave. It seems that in the setting, the Ugly Fish, Carp King, Cowardly Worm, and Burning Worm can understand many skills immediately after evolution. Then the cheat cheat is a bit too big, the skill points come too fast, the mission system has no sense of existence, and the skills outside the elf world are very cheap and very abnormal. It is recommended to increase the price as mentioned in the book review, and you can only learn skills that are very suitable for you.

The protagonist went back in time and had no relationship with his sister. He just kneeled down and licked her. If he wasn't a lolicon, he was just greedy for her body! Despicable!

I still don't understand what the author thinks. I've read more than a dozen chapters. This is the most disgusting book I've ever read about starter pets. If you don't like it, don't write about unicorns. A person who says he loves Pokémon has no interaction, no nurturing, no training, no contact with Pokémon after he gets the starter Pokémon. Then the unicorn worm evolved due to malnutrition, and then said it was okay, I have a golden finger, I really accepted it, just because the protagonist cultivated it like this, the following content must be the Long Aotian type, that is, don't worry about anything, just lie down casually and you will be invincible. No wonder no one has read this book

I have photos of the author wearing cross-dressing in high school!! Anyone who is interested, please come and ask me!! One Thousand Floors Photo (ಡωಡ)

After looking at dozens of pictures, I really can't stand it anymore. Not to mention the freezing light and the 100,000 volts you gave to Bibi Bird. What do you want to do by giving Menas the entire hard vortex water blade? 🤔 You also want to fix the Rasengan. Do you want to give your Bibi Bird wings and the entire Raikiri? Who would dare to write a Pokémon fan with a real-life Pokémon background? The relationship between the characters and the background are not explained clearly at the beginning. As a result, when I saw the school trip, I didn't even know what everyone was doing. I had to rely on dialogue to know who was the teacher and who was the classmate. The plot of a sister is even more vicious. I have met my sister and classmates for a few days. At least on the surface, the classmate is very good to the protagonist.

In fact, it's okay not to have a female protagonist. What kind of girlfriend do you want when you have an elf?!

After reading more than 400 chapters, I felt that the protagonist was inexplicable. The author wanted to express the protagonist's mentality as an ordinary person. Has it changed after more than 400 chapters? Instead of seeking a championship, how about exploring the world? There is just no goal. Also, the author, did you write whatever you wanted and didn't write it down? Earlier, it was said that the protagonist exchanged Kati Goudan and Ibrahimovic, but later he only had Ibrahimovic, and wanted to find Junsha to exchange for one. The big milk jug I had agreed with the teacher was nowhere to be seen behind. The most important point is, author, do you have no sense of time? I won't tell you how long the trip will last after the senior year of high school (it's almost March). The College Cup is also funny. The author, can the protagonist participate even after finishing his senior year of high school? After that, it's time to travel and hit the gym. What about college? Eaten by you? You also need to have your own set of logic when writing a book! Or are you studying Doraemon or Conan? Say no more, give up the trap.

I originally wanted to read it, but the comments stopped me, and why did you take up the spot in my daily guide?

It is recommended that authors write less about female characters if they are not good at writing them. It is really poisonous if they are not good at writing. Many authors have been persuaded to quit their books because of female characters such as heroines or sisters. Isn't it good for the male protagonist to be a lone ranger and work hard? I suggest the author read the Dark Rises of Elves and Pokemon Garden Tree, which are elf novels without female protagonists.