Super Pokemon: Long Yi

I went to visit, and grass had grown on the grave.

I'm starting a thread for extras. If you want to be an extra, leave a message below this post. The author will come here from time to time to gather material. Format: Name: Due to the initial setup, please use Japanese names if possible. Of course, you can also use codenames like Garden, but those are usually for villains.

First and foremost, I must admit this is a high-quality fanfiction. I've read quite a few elf fanfics, and while this isn't the most action-packed or the most thrilling, it felt the most authentic to me. Reading this book felt like stepping into a real elf world—how the people live, the relationship between humans and elves, and the various life and combat professions fulfilled all my fantasies…

Honestly, your novel will never be popular. The best fanfiction about elves doesn't have a female lead; yours not only does, it's also incredibly toxic. Many people might have been turned away because of this.

After reading a few chapters, I understand why it was abandoned; it turned out to be a mindless harem novel. The author's decision was wise.

After reading around chapter 20, it seems the author doesn't really understand Pokémon... Arbok is portrayed as a weak Pokémon in your writing? If it's weak, how did it become a staple Pokémon of Team Rocket? Its Zigzag transformation gives it almost the strength of a starter Pokémon, and with so many Poison-type Elite Four members raising it, how can you say it's weak?

Knowing she's weak, who would dare drag along a burden? This female lead really didn't need to.

I feel there are a few problematic aspects. First of all, he disregards knowledge about Pokémon. Despite his terrible knowledge of Pokémon, Ryuichi doesn't care at all and only realizes the power of knowledge when someone comes to tell him. Secondly, the exploration of the "golden finger" (a powerful advantage or advantage) is insufficient.

If the author can't write romance, then don't write it! It's so cringeworthy it's giving me a severe case of embarrassment!

Here's a suggestion for the author: You should probably abandon this book as soon as possible! Don't leave it hanging like this. I suggest reading more fanfiction and the comments, avoiding the problematic parts; you might get a lot of ideas from that.