Pokemon of the Real World

Very true! As far as I personally feel, this book is more realistic than dark, very realistic! Unlike some other dark wind books, everyone is deliberately cruel and cruel for the sake of dark wind! Through the perspective of the protagonist, a world with extraordinary power shortly after experiencing turmoil is presented to us bit by bit! Very well written! Come on!

It is also my first time to write a book. With inexplicable excitement, I occasionally refresh the data every day. As long as someone comments, I will be excited for a long time. So, everyone, if you think my writing is interesting, please support me more. I will work hard to write the following plot so as not to disappoint everyone. I want more people to read my book! ! !

O(*≧▽≦)ツ ~ ┴┴

Ye Li didn't feel sorry for the protagonist and didn't harm him, but he wanted to kill her and rob her because of two Pokémon with hidden characteristics? The protagonist of "Other People's Darkness" novels is that I will not offend others unless they offend me, but I will kill them if they offend me... Is the author serious about creating a protagonist with such a serious anti-social personality? Do whatever you want, but do no harm.

It's too fake that the Steel Immortal Evil hasn't been discovered in 500 years. All three types are immune to a certain type. It's too stupid that it hasn't been discovered yet. It's not that I have to argue, I just want to complain about it.

This is my favorite elf fanfic book I have ever read!

One: The realistic elf text is quite good, but many times the cruelty of the elf and the darkness of reality are deliberately described, and the forced creation of the dark wind is inferior (it does not match the elf in the minds of most people). Two: The problem with the modifier. When I first wrote the lucky bag lottery, I thought the modifier was too buggy. All the strength, potential and skills can be modified, and special abilities can be obtained. In this way, you can make a lot of money by changing your identity, and then top up your attribute skills. Isn't it invincible? But I thought too much, because the attributes in the article are useless at all, and the skill level is not very useful. From the fact that Ghost's level 5 special attack speed is A, while the principal's hippopotamus only has single A, but was crushed by the latter's momentum (# funny), it can be seen that level is the last word in this game (can attributes be eaten?) So what's the point of the modifier? Chapter 3: Chapter 74 Principal Hippo King monitors the whole school, does it mean that telekinesis = omnidirectional camera + recorder (stealing ~ # funny)? Does this mean that elves with high levels are invincible and all elves cannot detect this surveillance? Then why can ghosts resist hypnosis? (Good boy. Fortunately, the Hippo King is only at level 60. Doesn't level 100 mean that he can control all wills and do whatever he wants?) Four: I can't bear it after seeing Chapter 78. In fact, the previous chapters felt pretty good, but what the principal wrote in these chapters... Is a bit too much Five: I don't mean to criticize, just some suggestions about loopholes.

I feel that the pace is too slow, purely for the sake of water. The early stage is good, but in the middle stage, it is funny just for the sake of being funny. Dark text and funny chapters are mixed together, which is really awkward. Especially the progress issue. Many chapters are about how the author talks about how to cultivate. There are a lot of ideas, but the actual strength has not changed at all. It is simply that if you can beat it, you can't beat it, and you can't beat it. The biggest bug is that every day it says there is a lack of resources. You can completely give up on the principal. The income of tens of millions of 1,000 high-level energy cubes a month actually says there is a lack of resources. It is specifically to slow down the pig's feet and slow down the progress. My impression of the more than 400 chapters is that most of them are training ideas, and the battles are only about competitions. There are too many words on daily training ideas, but my strength is still so low, I just keep walking in circles. It's not that I'm not good at writing. The main thing is that the pace is too slow. I feel it's purely for the sake of word count. Finally, I suggest that dark writing should not have too many funny writings. It's really neither fish nor fowl. The training camp part is really going to collapse.

It is normal for the author to be scolded. Either he writes about dark wind or he does not write about dark wind. What does it mean that it is not all dark? Neither side pleases. If you do bad things, you have to have a moral bottom line, and if you are a bad person, you have to set up a memorial arch. From my point of view, I don't see where the so-called dark wind is at all. When there was an explosion, I held Ye Li's hand and used my body to protect her (block her under him). The protagonist has no good impression of her. Why do I do this? I still think about irrelevant people when it is so dangerous. There are also routines. Among the three participants in the competition, the male is disdainful of the protagonist, but the female is curious. They both come from a big family, so why do they make the men so miserable? The daughter's lowered IQ makes her curious about the protagonist.

It seems that the whole world is full of malice towards the protagonist, which is too deliberate. Whenever the protagonist encounters any problem, it will develop in a very evil direction, especially when he sees a variety of monsters being sent to eat the remains of the elves who died in battle. This is not darkness, just a crazy, selfish and severely persecuted delusional patient. You can be full of malice towards the world, but don't blame the world for responding to you. This should not be the view of an adult, let alone that he has lived a second life Darkness should not be for the sake of darkness We do not deny the dark side of society But we should not demonize the society's human feelings and sophistication (However, the author has successfully created a bad guy, which is worthy of encouragement) Above