Heroic Spirit Mentor

The senior in the group just now told me that someone was pushing my book on Longkong. I was very confused. I ran up to register and found that there were registration restrictions. Then I couldn't reply to you, so I could only watch. All I can say here is... Anyway, thank you. I feel like I have my first reader, and then the second brother said that I can't stand men having sex, and I won't write a love story between two men. In fact, I just watched Gintama become possessed... I'm not gay myself, I just want to write something very lively, with that magical feeling. One person wrote more than 200,000 words without any comments. I thought I was writing a book on my own. After get off work, I use my time in Genting to write a book. Recently, I have been considering whether to play chess or write a book. Since no one is reading it, I should slowly write two thousand words a day until I finish the book with more than one million words, accumulate my character and write another book. Now... I am very excited now and have decided to write a book! Anyway, I will always be third in chess, bah!

I came here from the book list and after reading it for a while, I felt it was a bit... Complicated. I came here specifically to comment and talk nonsense. Don't be offended... One thing to say is that the author's writing style is very excellent. The atmosphere of some scenes and the description of some of the characters' expressions and gestures are all very good among the books I have read. I'm very sorry that I didn't read too much, and I really can't stand it, because this book is really a bit of a radio wave. If the radio wave doesn't match it, it will be difficult to read. I happen to be the kind of person who can't match the radio wave () First of all, it is grammar. The author prefers short sentences or omissions, and sometimes creates some wonderful long sentences, that is, sentences that cover complex clauses in one sentence. This kind of sentence is reflected many times in the previous chapters. Obviously this is the result that the author deliberately pursues, because I can often understand the general meaning at first glance, but I feel that something is wrong. When I read the sentence again and again, I find that there is no problem with the grammar at all. This strange reading experience makes me always struggle with small details, which makes it uncomfortable intermittently. As for the writing style, it is very popular. This kind of narrative intertwined with short sentences is very artistic, but the straightforward content cannot support it as a refined thought, and can only be used as a simple narrative method. This method omits a lot of lengthy foreshadowing. Those who like this style may regard it as a guide, but those who don't like it will find it very difficult to read. This kind of performance is really too young, making it very difficult for an older young man like me to read, and it is even difficult to focus on the author's shaky baggage... The author's description level is quite impressive, but my dyslexia makes it difficult for me to read it, which is a pity... Mark it, and I will definitely come and read it if there is a new book in the future.

Got 141 points, thanks. Let me know below when the next book is released, I will continue to invest.

Just a dad, 🤭🤭, I personally like the style of this book very much! Author, keep up the good work

Come on, pig umbrellas rush!

I got 89 points. This is the first time I got so many points. I would like to thank the author.

I can't understand the title and introduction of the book 😰

It's a very interesting novel, I've read it over and over again ~ Come on! 🤭

Keep up the good work, author~

The pig advances suddenly! Bamboo umbrella advances!