Jungle Dominator: Starting with Lulu

The protagonist plays a farming style in En Jersey, so that the orcs can live a better life. The plot will be very slow, so I shortened it and used the underground troubles to let him leave quickly. Because many people don't like the LOL version of farming. In the Kingdom of Kaya, the protagonist is a person waiting to be punished, using the blood of the king as a guarantee, slowly finding out the traces of the three tombs like a detective, and finally finding the Eternal Leaf and clearing his name. But some people don't like the fact that the protagonist participates in solving crimes as a police dog, and finally leads people to dig graves, especially the tomb of the Elf Emperor. So I shortened it to two or three chapters. Nzesi Jakaya cut me off at least 100,000 words. I don't even have the manuscript saved now. I stay up late every day typing. Finally, Cross, the supernatural dungeon setting here is to strengthen the protagonist's resistance to the evil side. I haven't written it to this point yet, so I can't cut it. From now on, it's going to be a long time in Clos. I cut off 100,000 words from the first 38 chapters just to enter the strengthening stage faster. I was helpless. It's not that my plot is too complicated, it's that I've cut too many corners in the front. I want you to see the story of strengthening abilities first, so as not to say I'm stupid... There is no way I can still be a detective with 200,000 words.

After reading it, only MMP is left. The world described by the author is too grand, but there are also many shadows of other world views. It's like a pot of hodgepodge, and the story can be said to be over the top (I almost fainted anyway). But I just don't know that there is an air of joy throughout the whole process. The writing is okay, but the story is too arrogant...

Come invest. It is most comfortable to invest before signing the contract.

I couldn't understand the writing. After reading a few chapters, I felt confused and confused. Maybe it was because I was reading it while playing the game.