What Do You Mean by a Carry Top Laner?

The author keeps making grand promises and then fails to deliver, blaming readers for padding the story. How many times have they lied to themselves? Can they even count them? If you can't finish, don't complain; if you do, don't pretend to be dead and claim readers are criticizing your writing. Is this a matter of padding? This is a matter of credibility.

The female lead's character design is really flawed. A college student and a professional gamer—how can they possibly have any interaction in real life? One has to study and work, the other is competing; they simply don't have many opportunities to spend time together. Even if they did fall in love, they'd break up quickly.

I don't understand why the protagonist is so relentlessly offending QG and RNG, and why the coaching staff and teams don't stop him. Don't they care about their image at all? And as a professional player and public figure, can't he stop making lewd jokes in post-match interviews? Do you think it's funny? No, it just makes you look sleazy. Or do you not know the difference between humor and sleazy?

The author said at the end of last month that he would try to finish writing about the World Championship during the National Day holiday, and then it's the 8th, and he's only just finished the semifinals. Then he said the SKT match would be quick, and I thought he'd finish it in a day or two, thinking he finally knew what readers wanted to see.

The protagonist kept making lewd jokes during the interview. Did the author find it funny?

Don't make lewd jokes in post-match interviews! It's fine to be risqué in private or during a live stream, but making lewd jokes in an official setting is very low! It's extremely inappropriate, especially when your wording isn't subtle. It's hard to make people laugh; it just makes them feel disgusted.

I feel the scope is a bit narrow. Using mocking Uzi as a starting point isn't bad, but this piece is too long. Look at that guy, he's ridiculously strong! What's a hexagonal jungler? The marksman is ferocious! The author's writing shows a grasp of the entire esports scene; I didn't see anyone constantly interacting with Uzi. They were all ignored.

Having read almost a third of the way, the author is making far too many lewd jokes. As a public figure, constantly spouting crude humor is really beneath him. An occasional witty remark is acceptable, but this is happening way too often.

The author writes really well, the use of references is good, and the results are impressive, especially considering it's a newcomer. Hopefully, they can maintain this level of success. However, the introduction of the female lead feels too abrupt.

Author, please make your stance clear. If you absolutely must make Huang Xin the female lead, just say so so we can decisively drop the book. Don't leave things unsaid and then have Huang Xin pop up for half a chapter to disgust us. We've paid money, and you won't give us a refund if we don't want to read it.