Adventurer in the World of Spirits

A fellow reader reminded me that, in order to avoid any potentially harmful content, please write down what you think are the problematic points. I will handle them carefully and will not offend anyone's eyes. Thanks!

Hmm, three rare Pokémon at the start!

Ugh, after scrolling through the comments for a bit, I found that most of them were complaining about the protagonist's paranoia and the backstabbing between people. Some were also arguing that the original Elf story was a lighthearted and humorous one. ① Yes, that's right. The protagonist is a bit cautious, but that's consistent with the mindset of someone from another world.

This is an urban entrepreneurship novel disguised as a Pokémon story. The timeline is already three years before Ash's departure. It's absurd that the types haven't even been defined yet. I'd believe it if you said there were no types in the primitive era 30,000 years before Ash's birth. In both the anime and manga, in the ancient ruins sections, each type has different runes to represent it.

Having read over 150 chapters, and with the protagonist constantly embroiled in suspicion and conflict with humans, isn't this supposed to be a fairy tale? It feels like I'm reading a political intrigue novel. The writing is actually quite good, but it's just too tiring to read.

The book's strength lies in its realism, but that's also its weakness, as most Pokémon fanfiction on Qidian takes the "awesome" route. 🙂 The protagonist starts at the level of the starter Pokémon, evolves to the final form within 100 chapters, has a bunch of pseudo-legendary Pokémon in the middle of the book, and has a lineup of legendary Pokémon in the later part of the book.

I read the revised version, going straight from Chapter 1 to Chapter 190. It's clear that some parts were cut, but the main storyline is largely unchanged. The bond between the protagonist, Casey, and Scizor also captivated me once again. This Pokémon novel is truly unique, brimming with bonds of friendship while bringing the Pokémon world to life (making these bonds even more dazzling).

It's a very good dark fantasy novel, at least in the top three of the hundreds of novels I've read; however, as a Pokémon fanfic, it's barely passable, with a few problems and some flaws. 1. The setting is a bit small; the novel, with over 1000 chapters, is entirely set in the Kanto region, which means the number of Pokémon there is on a completely different level.

It has flaws, but it's considered very promising within the elf fiction genre. The problem is the inconsistent quality throughout; some parts are excellent, while others feel weak and drawn-out. There are successful character developments as well as less impressive ones. It's clear the author is growing, and I look forward to their next elf fiction book.

This book is essentially an urban entrepreneurship novel disguised as a Pokémon story. The author's focus and writing style seem to have gotten the priorities backward. What do people read in Pokémon novels? Isn't it the exciting battles between Pokémon and the genuine emotional stories between the protagonist and different Pokémon? I've read over 300 chapters so far, and I barely see any of that.