Adventurer in the World of Spirits

I was reminded by a book friend that in order to avoid being highly toxic, please write down what you think is the poisonous point. I will deal with it carefully so as not to dirty everyone's eyes. Thank you!

Emmm, there are three rare elves in the beginning!

I vomited, and after reading the comments for a while, I found that they were all complaining about the protagonist's persecution delusion and the intrigue between people, and some were saying that the original Elf was a happy novel. ① Yes, yes, the protagonist is a little cautious, but this is in line with the mentality of a visitor from another world. Adults are not so passionate. Others being kind to you may not necessarily be the direction you want, just like Comrade Obama initially just wanted a "accompanying student". ② There is a lot of intrigue in this article, but other fans and original works have more or less described this part. The more descriptions in this article are obviously due to the perspective that the author brings to us. ③As the essence of elven literature: the bond between humans and elves I think the author's description is very good. Casey and the protagonist are the most vivid examples. There is great fear between life and death. Taking Casey with the protagonist will shorten his life by half a hundred but still never leave. Isn't this the bond between humans and elves? ④I have seen that the Holy Mother has some visions and that she acts in a dark way. I don't know what to say about this. All I can think of is "a realistic good person" to describe her. Help her if you can, and face the "bad guys" rationally. ⑤The original work is joy-oriented, while this novel is more realistic. It's not apostasy, everyone has a different world in their mind. (I'm complaining silently, if the subject matter is so wonderful, I wouldn't be so depressed if I changed the subject) (Ahem, you didn't even want to get the grades, so I'm so comfortable with it 😊. ⑥This article is written: Combat and duel, the essence of skills, the cognition of elves, the main plot of the protagonist, among the fans, the logical thinking is at the top of the thief. Hey, you may want to scold me after hearing this, saying how could I I think Dr. Omu is also a utilitarian person. Hey, I really think so. Listen to me, first of all, take it as a joke that "you and Grandpa Omu will give resources to elves after just chatting" and "bring home orphans in need and raise them". After all, I, Omu, am not a philanthropist. Then the rest is introduced by doctors who are related to Omu, after all. They are old friends. If you want to say that there is no human relationship, then there is nothing I can do. There seems to be nothing else, specifically the three categories above. I am not generating electricity for love ⑦To be honest, I feel that I don't understand the combat aspect. I haven't seen the skill combination of the tactical system. Conquering the elves is more like cheating, except for the auspicious eggs. It hasn't been shown yet. Casey's mantis has a certain degree of weakness (Kathy is the worst). {"NickName":"Incompetent and Crazy","UserId":330600248} has also revealed some. The dividing line is not excessive— {"NickName":"Incompetent and Crazy","UserId":330600248}When will Casey evolve? Look, look, look, look, the foodie eggs have turned into lucky eggs. Casey and Casey are afraid that one day you will wake up and be compressed into a ball by blue light 🤭

An urban entrepreneurial article in elf skin. The time point is 3 years before Xiaozhi's departure. It's outrageous that it doesn't even distinguish the various departments. I still believe your statement that there was no connection during the primitive human period 30,000 years before Xiaozhi was born. Regardless of whether it is anime or manga, there are ancient ruins and each department has different runes to represent the department. Xiaozhi even had the first-generation illustrated book when he set out. Are you saying that the systems were sorted out within 3 years? Furthermore, from the perspective of elves in Chapter 300, Omu is more like the protagonist, and Xiu is more like the supporting role of Xiaogang. Damu is doing the main mission in the elf world, and Xiu is cooperating with him on the side mission. .

After reading more than 150 chapters, the protagonist has been fighting against human suspicion. Isn't this an elf book? Why do I feel like I have read a book about strategy and strategy? The writing is actually good, but it seems too tiring.

The advantage of this book is that it is true, but it also has a shortcoming. Most Pokémon fans take the awesome route. 🙂 The protagonist starts at the level of Yusanjia, and evolves to a complete form within 100 chapters. In the early part of the book, there are a lot of quasi-gods, and in the later part of the book, there is a lineup of mythical beasts, some bullshit alliance, all the major families, the protagonist can conquer the whole audience by himself, and a bunch of awesome Pokémon can kill any enemy. There is no such book. What he wrote is too real. If ordinary people travel through time, there will be no Pokémon that is so awesome. There will only be Rattab Pidgeot and the like. 🙂 So I say that true writing is an advantage, but some readers like to see the protagonist being awesome, which becomes a disadvantage.

I watched the remake, directly from the first chapter to 190. It can be seen that some cuts have been made in the process, but the main line has remained roughly the same. Then the bond between Casey and the Giant Claw Mantis during the process was once again mesmerized. This Pokémon novel written by the author is really unique. It is full of bonds and at the same time makes the Pokémon world real (which makes the bonds even more dazzling). I read this novel in the past because of the bonds with the elves, and now that I have re-edited it, I don't feel regretful, which shows that the author is also very strong in writing. (It's just a re-edit. There are fewer little lucky egg scenes, but I believe the author's writing power can handle it. Come on, author.) And let's talk about it here. The protagonist Xiu's personality is very obvious. He is cautious (because of his experience in kindergarten at the age of three and the influence of Cathy's spirit, so it is normal to be cautious), and occasionally has a sense of justice and love (especially for Pokémon. Xiu has always believed that Pokémon are innocent, which also makes Xiu and Jin The bond between the spirits is even tighter) It can really be said that the author is really awesome, and he has perfectly presented the world of Pokémon to us. The world is so real and dark, but there is no shortage of beautiful things. Through such comparison and performance, the beauty of the world is shown, and we cherish it even more Come on, author, I will continue to wait for your book, and I also hope it will not be finished. I really like the Pokémon world in your book, come on!

A very good dark novel, at least in the top three among the hundreds of novels I have read; but as a PM novel, it can only be considered barely passing, with a few problems and some poisonous points. 1. The environment is a bit small. The novel with more than 1,000 chapters is actually all in the Kanto region, and the number of elves in it is not of the same level.       2. There is still such a thing as bondage in the early and middle stages. After the middle and late stages, it is basically Casey, and there is almost no other presence. Some even do not appear in dozens of chapters, which is outrageous.        3.，，，        ，，，

It has flaws, but it has great potential in the elf literature circle. The problem is that the quality of the whole text varies. If it is well written, it is very good, and if it is not good, it is very weak. There are successful parts in shaping and bad parts. It can be seen that the author is growing. I look forward to the author's next elf novel.

This book is an urban entrepreneurship article disguised as Pokémon. The author's positioning and writing style of this novel feel a little put the cart before the horse. What do you guys read when reading Pokémon novels? Isn't it just a passionate battle between Pokémon and a sincere emotional story between the protagonist and different Pokémon? I have basically read more than 300 chapters in this novel. I don't like the battle between elves. The level and power of elves cannot be improved. How can I explore the world of elves when my own strength is insufficient? How can you explore this Pokémon world when your Pokémon is so weak and your safety is not guaranteed? With such a weak strength, there are always unfounded thoughts. Skip to the end and read it. In the end, the author seems to have created a huge business empire and introduced several female protagonists. Pokémon is not mentioned at all. There are very few Pokémon novels with such a long word count. This is really a pity. If the author writes a PM article in the next article, I suggest starting to write between the battle and the feelings of the elves, and the results will be better. It can be seen that the author's writing style is actually not bad, keep up the good work.