Pokemon: A Heavenly Mission

The setting in this book is too discouraging. It's normal for Pokémon to have a limited lifespan, but this is ridiculously short. Beedrill only lives for two years, and the others don't live much longer either. Does this mean professional trainers have to keep changing their Pokémon, and there's no guarantee they'll all be equally strong? The four moves are the most frustrating part.

This book is a pure fantasy novel disguised as an elf story. The elves in the story can be replaced with any kind of creature. It is recommended to read it as a regular fantasy novel and not as an elf fanfiction. The only sense of existence for the elves in the show is that they eat energy to level up and then become henchmen.

1. The lifespan setting for spirits is too discouraging. 2. I feel that some of the descriptions of mythical beasts are over-interpreted.

It's basically not bad, and the premise is quite interesting, but only four chapters are not enough! 😃😃😃

If it weren't for the little elves, I would have thought I was reading a fantasy novel about clans, haha.

After the protagonist overthrows the powerful clans, his group becomes the new powerful clan. What's the point of that?

I feel this book has been dragged down by the Pokémon fanfiction. It would have been better if they had created their own set of Pokémon. It just feels a bit off.

At first, the author's subject matter seemed interesting and relatively novel. However, the author then proceeded to write lengthy explanations of the game's setting, which felt like an over-interpretation of Pokémon and became quite awkward to read. Then there's the part where Slowpoke needs to contemplate philosophy to evolve—that's another story.

Judging from your novel, the author thinks you're not suited to writing elf stories; you're better suited to writing cultivation stories.

The beginning was alright, but it got increasingly mythologized later on, with references to the Tao Te Ching appearing everywhere. Seriously, it was so cringeworthy! The protagonist's plot armor got stronger and stronger, and even his signature divine weapon appeared.