The Pioneer Commander

Emmmmmmm, I don't understand. I prefer the perspective of earthlings compared to people from other worlds. The various settings are not clearly explained. An earthly woman will blush because of a very beautiful sentence? 🤫🤫🤫

I gave up because I was an outsider.

To be honest, if you look at it from an earthly perspective, it would definitely be more popular than it is now.

This book has the potential to be a hit, but it is not popular, so I am worried...

This is a very good theme. On the surface it is a battle of wits and courage among dozens of pioneers, but in fact it is a collision of two civilizations. You should write more behind-the-scenes stories of the two civilizations. How you react when you encounter a different world and encounter magic on the Earth side. A person on the other side can say a few words and hundreds of staff psychologists on the Earth side can give you a clear analysis. Dozens of various plans were clearly prepared.

I think the most important time for people on earth is to exchange magic knowledge. Even people from other worlds know that they need gunpowder technology. People on earth just focus on the materials.

The beginning of the chapter was confusing and I couldn't understand it.

I think it's pretty good. Who stipulates that people in the magical world must be brutal and warlike?

This book is crooked and anti-war. Abandon books

The author of Don't Starve is passing by~ I feel like you can write a lot of games, but I can only play Don't Starve...