The Parasitic Immortal

None of the novels about parasitic cultivation are well written.

Since we're all in this world, let's cultivate immortality in a slightly extreme way, it's all about the thrill, how about something like 'Three Flowers Gathering at the Top'?

The writing is smooth. Personally, I think the author could use more fragmented elements to connect with the plot within the main narrative, since while the idea is good, the writing style and setting of earlier, more famous works don't quite match this one. I'm quite satisfied with the author's handling of the "golden finger" (advantage/cheat code); there's extra information, but it's not like those other books where skill points pop up unnecessarily and get in the way. Keep it up! 🤭

The inspiration must be Sun Zha's parasitic cultivation of immortality, right?

But the problem is that you've chosen a theme that's either insects or bizarre cultivation stories, my friend. Imagine you open a restaurant serving Cantonese-style dishes, but all the customers who go in are craving stir-fried and spicy food. What you wrote feels like just a formality; inside, it's still very traditional and typical. You think you wrote it well, but do you think you wrote it correctly?

I'm a Q reader, so you're probably more likely to see my posts in the Qidian comment section. Author, to be honest, your writing style and narrative ability are quite good. There are two problematic points for me: 1. The protagonist went to Qin Xiaodao after knowing that the disaster was enough to threaten his life, and then Qin Xiaodao was killed by "Chen Zhuiyun's" side because of the…

The author's plot and writing style are both very good. But I feel that if this kind of parasitic cultivation story isn't bizarre enough, it just doesn't feel right. Aside from the premise, it doesn't seem much different from traditional cultivation novels.

The writing is so flowery and difficult to read... Dude, you're writing a novel, this half-ancient style just makes it seem pretentious and hinders reading. It's also too verbose and lacks a clear main plot.

So far it seems pretty good. The inspiration should be Sun Zha's Parasitic Cultivation?

Instead of writing about Nascent Soul cultivators fighting, why write about the protagonist fighting?