Tian Yuan Xian Ji

It can be said that it is one of the most satisfactory novels I have read in recent years I have been reading for almost ten years and have read many novels about cultivating immortals. Except for "The Road to the Master of the Cultivation Sect" and this one, there are almost none that I thought were good. I have also carefully thought about the differences between other books and these two. Here are some personal opinions. If you don't like them, don't criticize them. In essence, novels about cultivating immortals are not about cultivating immortals. After all, those who write books and those who read are also human beings. Where do the immortals come from? Even if it is a book written by an immortal, how can an ordinary person understand it if he has not become an immortal? Many people say that cultivating immortals is naturally different from ordinary people, but art comes from life. If it is separated from life, can this book go far? In my opinion, cultivating immortals originated from Taoism and has a long history. It can be said to be a fantasy with a strong East Asian flavor. Japan has a different continent as an imaginary world, and the West has swords and magic as an imaginary world. These are closely related to civilization and history, and cultivating immortals can be said to be an imaginary world exclusive to China. Since it is an imaginary world, how the world is structured is very important. It is best to complete most of the world view of a novel before the book is written, otherwise it will be very messy later. It is mainly divided into nature and humanities. In terms of nature, the most important thing is naturally the map, which serves as the activity location of the characters in the novel, as well as products, biological species, etc.; And in terms of humanities, everything from the distribution range of various forces, various contradictions, world trends, world history, to the market prices of various materials, people's lives, etc., All require effort to structure, and it does not need to be perfect, at least it can be logically self-consistent. The world structure is completed, and the next step is the characters. It can be said that I have read a lot of novels, but there are few normal protagonists, or they are not like human beings, or they are like a lunatic, or they are like a puppet on strings, which is difficult to understand. What the characters are like is closely related to the world view of the novel and their personal experiences. After understanding the world view and their personal experiences, the readers introduce the protagonist. The choices and behaviors they may make may be different, but they understand the protagonist's behavior and do not feel that the protagonist has become mentally ill or demented. If the character can withstand speculation, then the character has been successfully portrayed. A good character is one that can make readers feel that they are flesh and blood, and the actions and choices they make are made by themselves, not by the author. The experiences of various characters change the characters, and then make the characters behave accordingly. These constitute the plot of the novel. When the world view and characters of the novel basically take the stage, the novel is no longer written by the author, but by the characters themselves. In terms of world structure, world trends, changes, etc., I think this book is slightly better than "The Road to the Master". If it can have a beginning and an end, I personally think it will be one of the best novels written in recent years.

A certain eunuch, Shu Er, went through a cycle of mortal cultivation after entering the palace. First of all, let's look at the supporting characters, how the protagonist is so talented, and after relying on his aura to survive life and death disasters that are as frequent as drinking water, he becomes invincible at the same level and breaks through levels beyond the level. This kind of fantasy cultivation novel is extremely boring. The advantage of this book is a bit like the early stage of "Katu", in that the farming plot is quite substantial. The plot is not cliché, at least it doesn't have a strong sense of déjà vu. The five elements of fighting each come with their own unique moves, which is quite rich and beautiful. Unfortunately, the too prominent Japanese animation style of Naruto is too prominent in the text style of Xiuzhenwen. For the time being, I can only stick with it until the author repeats the chance encounter routine plot of the oriole behind, harvesting the treasures of a group of people with different intentions for the second time (Yin Tiansheng/Ci, I believe readers who stick to it will not easily remember these names). I don't know if the subsequent plot will be more eye-catching, or if the author's various strange problems have been improved, but at this point, the plot becomes more and more careless, and the tendency of hydrology becomes more serious. For a newcomer's work with poor writing, it is really intolerable. In general, it is not too bad when written by a newcomer, but some strange text logic is really annoying. There are few supporting characters that are memorable, and the dialogues between the characters all have the same flavor. I like to give names to my walk-ons. I don't know if I think this is a strange trick to increase the sense of realism. But even different characters should have different language styles and memorable characteristics, but these are not done well. A bunch of names make the supporting characters who are slightly important even less prominent. The names given have nothing to do with the characters of the plot... The most obvious problem with the plot rhythm is that he jumps out of the perspective of the protagonist and suddenly flies to the unimpressive supporting characters to explain the occurrence of the incident. Looking at these characters that the reader does not care about, the plot is reversed. I forgot a lot about the plot, and it was a bit new in the early stages. There is no complicated life story or revenge plan that is too routine, but it also does not leave any curious suspense, and there is no echoing foreshadowing in the previous and following chapters. There is a lack of revision and polishing in the writing and paragraphs, there are too many white texts in the journal, and there are very few golden sentences that make people unable to help but comment. In terms of perception, it lacks the writing power to arouse the readers' emotions. Although it is not easy to maintain stable updates, most of the starting works are lackluster except for the amount of updates. I hope the author can write more interesting works next time.

I have been reading this book for a long time, and its pros and cons are obvious. In terms of handling of relationships between people, it is more innovative than most novels about cultivating immortals. The plot setting is relatively reasonable, such as the epiphany of sighing calamity, which is very smooth, and the gathering of everyone's efforts to create an elixir is also eye-catching. But the setting is not clear, and the golden finger was abandoned after it was developed; the writing is procrastinating, I have to inform you when I see you, and I have to inform you when I see you, and the notifications come and go; the pace is extremely slow, and various small tasks are dispensable. , Set a huge world and distant goals, after seeing the vast world outside, still guarding one-third of an acre, going about daily life slowly, don't you want your wife? This is Zelda's princess, no need for first aid? Is the strategy in the foundation building stage really as important as improving one's strength? It's a pity to follow the steps in the sect and make money by relying on gray income. There is no subjective initiative and the interest is lost. It becomes more and more like reading a running account. It's a pity...

I was reading the Wulong Mountain Practice Notes of Babaofan before. The author was ill and was slow to update. I saw someone recommending it in his book circle, so I came here to read this book. I have read more than 600 chapters so far, and overall it is very interesting. I happen to like reading officialdom literature and immortality literature, and this book combines the two just right. In addition, the author's writing style is also very good, better than many of the top ten monthly votes. Of course, no one is perfect, and now that I have read the novel, I have found some areas that can be improved. For example, there are many typos. I hope the editor or operation team can help review it. Secondly, there are many repeated detailed descriptions. Although the rhetorical technique of repetition is good in itself, it may be a bit verbose when used in some non-foreshadowing descriptions. But compared to other online article authors who have scraped up the number of words, this article is already much better than similar articles at this point. It may be because I hope the author can be better, so I say this. Finally, regarding characterization, the protagonist generally does not have many problems. Small problems are inevitable, so I will not go into details. But after reading more than 600 chapters, the two female characters I dislike the most so far are the protagonist's apprentice and Sword Spirit. I don't know if straight men like this kind of unruly and willful female characters, but I personally don't like the arrangement of two female characters with this kind of character next to the protagonist. Of course, being able to write a character so annoying also shows that the author is pretty good at portraying the character. The fact that a character can make people hate it shows that the character has been successfully created. Yes, can anyone spoil it? Are the two characters dead? It's better to die, I don't like it anyway. If I don't die, I hope it can become a little normal as the character grows up.

Personally, I think Tian Yuan Xian Ji is well written and very emotional. It expresses the author's inner feelings and resonates with me. The writing technique also reflects the notation of Tianyuan Xianji. He can definitely compete with mortal cultivators.

The number of words is a bit short! The number of words in each chapter has not been many recently, and it has a lot of water content. Write quickly

Like and support, the character image is established all of a sudden, domineering, although it is strong and weak, it is not updated today

Qin Tianjiao is of mixed blood. Maybe mixed blood means that he has little or no demon talent (this is why he is disliked by the demon clan), and people can cultivate faster. Qin Tianjiao belongs to that kind of genius training (Xuanmen looks at qualifications, and he is a seed player in Xuanmen). He is inherently faster, has better qualifications, coincides with the bloodline of rebelling against the clan, and also has racial talent. If Qin keeps up his cultivation speed, Yuanying becomes a real green dragon again, or even higher. If the green dragon is taken back and vigorously cultivated, it is not impossible to merge now. In the future, he may be arranged to take revenge against Tangning. I look forward to his performance.

1. I have read more than 1100 chapters in this book. Overall, the flaws outweigh the flaws and it's worth reading. The key is that the advantages and disadvantages are too obvious. If there are adjustments, I believe the next book will be a hit. 2. Let's talk about the advantages first, the writing is delicate and the language is beautiful. The description of the story is vivid, fascinating and like a real scene. Then there are the details and vivid images. The issue of economic development runs through the whole book, giving people the feeling that if there is a real cultivator, is this really the case? It is also worth praising that the dialogues are vividly described and the characters are portrayed in detail. 3. After boasting, let's ask a few obvious questions 1. There is a lot of nonsense. For example, every time someone enters the protagonist's cave, he must describe it again. When the storage bag moves or when the clouds disperse... It is really unnecessary. For example, the description of Xu Qingwan's appearance every time. 2. I especially like explanations and explanations. Some of them are really unnecessary, such as letting the snake out to breathe air, etc. I won't go into details one by one. 3. Goldfinger is not reused as always. There are some special spells such as the Wooden Forest at the beginning, but they are rarely used later, and they should be used throughout. Later, the protagonists are stronger than White Snake and Xiao Zhan. I think the Golden Finger thing should be emphasized. 4. The economic system is in a state of collapse. The Nascent Soul upgrade package is estimated to cost 100 million spirit stones, the God transformation upgrade package is estimated to be more than 1 billion, and there is also the Great Vehicle of Refining the Void and Combining the Void. When the protagonist first arrived in Qinghai to fight, he got 300,000 spirit stones. The reason is that the distance between him and many people can be ten or twenty times different, which is unreasonable. 5. This is an important issue. There is a lot of content in this article that has little to do with the protagonist, such as the description of the war. I don't think it is necessary to write so many chapters. I think it should be briefly introduced, mainly the development of the protagonist, his battles with people and the sky, and his adventures and twists. 6. Too much description of the protagonist's daily life, lack of adventures, twists and turns, adventures in secrets, etc. I'll write this today, and we'll discuss it later.

One chapter a day is not enough

This book is simply designed for TikTokers. The more I read, the more desperate I get. I finally made it out of Xingang. I thought I could reunite with the heroine, but it turned out to be just the beginning of despair. Two hundred years of hard work in the workplace. Where does long-distance love go in the end? I hope the author can give Xiao Ningzi hundreds of acres of green space in the ending to repay the readers for their long wait

How long will it take? Speak! , All the flowers I waited for have faded.

Pace it a little faster, come on, come on

I really don't want to have a female protagonist, so even if there is one, please don't write it in such a disgusting way, okay?

Seeing this made me laugh. I want to curse people, but it would be better not to write it if I write it like this. Do you insist on doing this because you think the readers are living too well and are too happy?

I became a man today, so I got up in the middle of the night to give some advice. Some books become boring after a few glances as I get older. The author has been following this book until this point. This is his strength. It has something that attracts people to finish reading. I have some questions about the author. I had questions at the beginning. Why are there rows at the gate and things are done? It's like a child playing house, without any power, just like Kangxi, with a constant ambition, a pearl, and a picture of asking for money. If you have anything to ask them to do, and it's so troublesome to collect money, you must have never given a gift. Then the leader said, you have to go, you can't ask for it yourself. Xuanmen kills demons and makes elixirs, but doesn't the demon clan kill them? Qinghai is a place where there are no hairs. How come some people can go there and walk around with Nascent Souls? There are as many great achievements as dogs. The most problematic thing is that Taixuan Zhong has no foundation and relies on the protagonist to grind people one by one. Taixuan is not as good as a small sect. Status, when the protagonist gets the first of the three jade pendants, you use other families to check the other. Isn't this very good, but it disappears later. Such a large sect can only use one method to rob, revitalize Hong Kong to the inland, and there are too few tricks.

I subscribe to read 20 chapters at a time. Currently, I have subscribed to 1336 chapters and have read 1321 chapters. Decided to give up now. This novel is generally good-looking. Why do I say it is generally good-looking? But the reason why I abandoned it is that I really don't like watching wars. It's just a matter of personal taste. I like to read about immortality and officialdom, but since entering the Qingzhou volume, the theme of the novel has entered war. It can be regarded as an important transition from officialdom to military literature. I can only say that I personally feel that fighting is not good, at least it is not suitable for me. But overall this novel still has many advantages. I think the description of interpersonal intrigues is a highlight. The author's writing style is also very good, and his choice of words and sentences are also remarkable. The language description is also very brilliant. Of course, there are many typos, and there are also many low-level errors such as punctuation marks on some names of people and places. Although there are some redundancies in the detailed descriptions, I think these detailed descriptions are not a big problem. On the contrary, many of the detailed descriptions are wonderful.

The strength system is a bit broken, and the ability shown in Qi training is too strong. The direction of the protagonist's training leaves no one with a sense of expectation. The writing style is really good, but it's a pity that there are too many trivial things. The cultivation is always brushed aside without any passion. It was recommended by the Xuanchen Daolu book friend group. It is still good, but I think the update trend is,,, I am afraid it will be a bit disappointing. .

The author put a lot of thought into his creation. The Boundary Breaking Pearl has extraordinary spirituality and loves its master. It was just right for Tang Ning to communicate with it, and when it understood that it could save its master, it could be used by the male protagonist conditionally. If Xiaoxiao makes use of its function, he can also cross between the three realms of Tianyuan, Necromancer and Weapon Spirit at will. Awesome🐮

The author wrote it with all his heart, but unfortunately it does not meet the needs of the public and can only be welcomed by a small number of readers. However, the author probably does not write online articles as his main job, so the impact will not be big. Just write what you want to write and don't affect your normal life.

It is not easy for the author to write a book, so readers, please give me some encouragement! Thank you🥺

I feel like you changed your account and started a new book. It has the same plot as this one, but the progress is half faster. I guess the results will be better than yours.

I roughly drew a map. If there are any mistakes in the map, please point out fellow Taoists and the author so that we can improve it together! Updated 2022.9.21 I roughly drew the concept of the island and will continue to update when there are more clues

The best mortal stream in recent times. Unfortunately, it has received too little attention. I don't know why the author failed to sign the contract. This is a rare detailed description of the life and division of work within the sect in Xiuzhen style, and it has a bit of a sect officialdom feel.

One look at the author and I don't understand Xianxia! Do you know why Wangyu set up the spiritual world and the mortal world? Because there is a world around level 5, which is just right for the protagonist to show off! You are so good. From Qi training to Mahayana all at once, the protagonist in the early stage has no effect at all, and there is no sense of enjoyment at all! People forget to talk about the monks' war in the mortal world. The protagonist Jindan can play many important roles. Only in this way can readers see the importance of the protagonist. The protagonist Nascent Soul can decide the outcome of a monks' war. In your book, even if the main character becomes Yuanying, what will it do? Even if the protagonist becomes a god, is he still an ant in front of the Mahayana? This is the difference between a master and a fool. The master has really thought carefully about the structure of the entire book. Just like in today's movies, there is a scientific basis for how many minutes it takes to reach a climax and how many minutes it takes to reach a low point!

I am an old reader who has been reading this book since the very beginning, so I have some comments and suggestions. From a plot point of view, the Xingang story is well written, but the battle against the machine armor in the middle is a bit nonsensical. The design of the God of Death's forcible pits later on is not good enough. Then I want to focus on the protagonist. In a work, the protagonist is not everything, but it is definitely the soul and backbone. The protagonist Tang Ning is full of life from the beginning, has a righteous heart, is brave and resourceful, and is affectionate and righteous. In the middle period, it is mediocre and trivial, greasy and crooked. Until the rat behind is short-sighted and selfish. I don't know what the author went through to make Tangning so unlikable. Maybe we will be like this in reality, but when the protagonist of a novel about cultivating immortals becomes like this, you can imagine everyone's disappointment. Being willing to see what the purpose of cultivating immortality is is not because of the repression in reality and the hope of seeing a different life. So if Tang Ning writes like that later, it will definitely not be popular. What I said here is a bit harsh, but I still have high expectations for the author. I hope the next one will be wonderful and the book will sell well.

After reading more than a thousand chapters, the content of the novel is okay, but the comments are really disgusting to me. When the protagonist is weak and deflated, a lot of people come out to criticize it. Especially when it is not on the shelves, I like to read three chapters, a small amount of fun, and ten chapters, a large amount of fun. Isn't there a starting point? Why do I have to disgust people? There are even some people who keep shouting abandonment from the beginning to more than a thousand chapters, and they keep reading, which is outrageous.

I secretly coded words for a whole day at work. The USB disk file was damaged and could not be restored, so... Everyone is going crazy, they are most afraid of this kind of thing. I don't want to update anymore today. I'll make it up next time.

Recommended by Xuan Chen Dao Tu Group. I read part of it and I like this style of writing. However, it does require a lot of persistence from the author. After all, it is not a cool article. I hope I don't want to be like Xuan Chen.

In the first half of the golden elixir stage, the character Tangning is remarkable, especially in the secular martial arts world at the beginning, and then in the sect, which is also very exciting. However, when it comes to the Nascent Soul stage, it starts to repeat the internal fighting in Xingang back and forth. It is endless and described back and forth. The first half is exciting, but the second half is just a bunch of words at best, and a lot of nonsense at worst.