Marin's Poem

This book makes me feel very conflicted. I have read almost two hundred chapters, but I have never been able to get into the plot or characters. I feel there is something wrong with the author's writing skills. The plot and story are quite interesting. But I personally feel that there are big problems with the author's character description and story description. The characters written by the author have no souls. Whether it is the protagonist or the harem heroine, they just make people feel that there is such a person, but the feeling is very unclear and abstract. Especially the protagonist, his image fluctuates between the ages of 10 and 30 in my opinion. Half of the time, he looks like a naughty kid to me, and the other half of the time, he looks like a violent maniac. The protagonist's image makes people feel unfair, and the story relies on killing and beating, which makes me feel that the characters and the background are quite inconsistent. The biggest problem causing the characters to have no souls is the author's description skills. I have been reading online articles for almost eight years. A good book has a sense of immersion, whether it is a cool novel, a harem novel or something else. The most important thing is the sense of immersion, but this novel by the author has no sense of immersion. After watching more than half of it, I only gained some understanding of the world and understood what happened, but the story failed to sink in. This is my opinion on this novel. Welcome everyone to communicate in a friendly way.

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The author is very good at writing Western fantasy, and also likes to emphasize sacrifice and passion (the influence of the Warhammer series is clearly visible), but he always has an erratic stance, and his writing style is sometimes subjective and sometimes objective, sometimes speaking out for a certain class, sometimes building momentum for a humanistic stance, and the characters in his writing always reveal a refined individualism like a small capitalist. He denies agency while praising agency in an idealistic sense, which makes people look confused and not refreshing enough.

After reading Chapter 199, I really can't understand the author's thinking. Where did Ser Kate die? He discarded the biological armor, and then because of the armor's mind, he went berserk and killed people in a city. No matter how you look at it, this is a problem with the armor. Serket's mistake was that he shouldn't throw away such a high-level weapon at will. He should have completely destroyed it before throwing it away. But this is not a crime that leads to death, right? No matter how you think about the author, the biological armor is just a weapon, and all her thoughts are wishful thinking. How can a normal person fall in love with his own weapon? What the hell kind of plot is this? In order to show justice to the protagonist, you can't just talk nonsense?

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It's October 6th and I haven't seen any new books yet. I come here every day to take a look.

There is only one core problem. Forcibly elevating production relations against productivity will only follow the old path of the Soviet Union. Instead of pursuing everyone to become a god, but to unite behind closed doors, this pattern is indeed too small.

I haven't read the book yet, but the first thing that comes to my mind is Kuokou Dayou

I feel like I collapsed in the middle and later stages of writing. . Too many additions to the system resulted in one having insufficient clarity of combat power and the other appearing disorganized. The sequence is considered weird by Cthulhu, but there is no need for you to forcefully add high technology. Are the basic settings of the other four vendors being eaten? (I remember they are emperors or something, Predators. Only this can prevent the evil god from invading to a certain extent. As a result, the protagonists in this world kill randomly. The evil god in this book feels a bit threatening in the early stage, but has no effect in the later stage.) In short, it is a bit refreshing, but what I wanted to write in the first place may have disappeared. In fact, the world view of the previous book was good, but the setting of advanced civilization and the like was forced into it, and it changed the taste, which is a pity.

God of Courage and War God of Wisdom and Strategy God of Life and Love God of Love and Beauty If loyalty had a color, it would be red.

Recently updated, when I saw 199, the first thing I felt about the insect man was that the city lord who wanted revenge was very wronged, just like the scientist in the Ender series who was killed by the pigs to express their gratitude (the pigs would turn into trees when they were killed in the ceremony, and the pigs thought it was an honor, so they killed the human scientists who provided help). Does that man know so many strange customs of the insect people? If you don't know, that's really unfair. Even if you know, is it necessary for the gods to die? To put it bluntly, Monkey didn't want to kill Chong, so he went to kill Monkey. Chong expressed his displeasure and killed tens of thousands of monkeys. When it was over, he said in a very arrogant manner that I would commit suicide, but the monkey must be killed. Co-author: You killed so many people, but no one was your target? And what if the two gods end up as guarantees for this kind of thing? Also help with the platform? Let me put it more harshly. So many people died in such a big event. It's enough to give you face without bringing down you and the host. Why do you want to avenge you? It is recommended to directly can the different species. In a word, it is a beautiful friendship to see the Lord of Justice express himself. I was mmp when the insect killer committed suicide. A beautiful friendship can let go of the death of at least tens of thousands of people. It is a just and beautiful friendship. It seems to see the murderer who claims that God has forgiven him and refuses to apologize to the victim's family 🤫

Just do it (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

The biggest problem is that the protagonist hasn't leveled up for a long time, but he has learned a lot of spells, and those 8910-level ones are no match, so what is the use of those sequences? It's better to do academic exercises with everyone, and have not seen the special abilities of the sequences. Do you feel there is no difference? The protagonist is still an apprentice, and the tasks he has experienced are more terrible. Yes, there are too many orcs around, how cute are they?

I read the latest chapters in two days, but there are a few parts of the plot that don't fit my opinion. I will probably abandon the book before the ending, just like the author's previous books. The author wanted to write a righteous protagonist, but the style of the protagonist described was more like a warlord or bandit leader. I'm very curious how the protagonist will handle it if the following two plots happen in the future: The head of the Sherrington family is exposed for assassinating people from other families. Will the protagonist have the face to say with justice that you caused the death of my teammate or attacked Faye and went to trouble him? The relatives of the man in black from the religious sect who were mistakenly killed retaliate and kill people in the army or family members of the army or attack the harem group?

My classmate's name is Ma Lin, I also shared the book with him. . .

My sister is such an important character and she doesn't even have a picture? This is millions of words long. Are you kidding me?

By the way, if the author returns to watch Miao Ke now, will it feel like it is full of dark history? After all, many of the plots in Miao Ke are really full of secondary atmosphere 🤭

This book made me suspect that I was reading a pirated version. It took me a long time to see a comment 😒

On February 17, 2022, it was promised that it would be released in January, but it turned out not to be the case (ಡωಡ) Those who broke their promise should go play with the big sister Slaanesh van♂!

There seems to be a book about Bai Shouchuan, the winner of life, at the front or back of Miao Ke Creed. When I thought about it today, I saw it was not this one. Am I hallucinating or is this really happening?

The writing is really good. The story of cause and effect is very difficult to write. I started with Infinite Horror and now I can hardly remember the title of the book. It took me 30 minutes to find it. Come on.

I'm starting to read it now that it's finished. This book is really well written.

If you don't understand, just ask, what other books has the author Miao Ke written before?

Seven of the ten books read today are "Those who have read Ma Lin's poems have also read..." Understand?

Come on, work hard to write, it's really good, I voted for it with 5 monthly votes

Why is there no Matilda character card?

Speaking of which, when we faced off against the Lord of Silent Hill, where were the two artifacts, the One-Handed Sword?

It's already been a month, author, I order you to publish a new book now, immediately, immediately! ! ! 😡 I'm going to die if I don't have any books to read recently 😰😰