The Rise of the Shen Family

I discovered a problem. The protagonist seems to have no father, but he has a grandfather. I kept waiting, but no explanation came...

If there is no heroine in this book, I will read it. I like to have no heroine, mainly based on family and sect. If there is no heroine, I can share it with others. After all, there are still very few mortals in the family!

Let me tell you what I think. I have seen more than 400 pictures in this book. Because the author was a college student when he wrote this, working part-time as a writer for fun, there were many typos, and his writing style needs to be improved. For patient readers, this book is a good one to pass the time. This book is the only one that I have read so many books with a protagonist who is still in the middle stage of foundation building after 400 chapters. The pace is really slow. Halfway through, the protagonist is in the middle stage of foundation building, and the total chapters are only about 800 chapters. I estimate that the protagonist will be finished in the golden elixir stage. For those who like to read cool articles, I don't recommend reading it. Those who like a slow pace can read it.

In the land of Lingnan, where the wind and clouds meet, ordinary disciples of a small family lead the family to rise quietly in this cruel world of immortality. It can be regarded as the bread and grass in the family's immortal cultivation stream. It doesn't have much highlights, but it can still be seen. The protagonist is an ordinary disciple of the family, and then leads the family to slowly develop. The main point of attraction is that it shows the traditional cultivation methods, which has the flavor of a fairy novel. Various adventures, cultivation of elixirs, and cultivation of martial arts. It is rare to see an original novel about cultivating immortals.

Recently, I have read basically all the families. This one is the best so far. I personally feel it is better than Immortal Evergreen. Please note that the framework is better. I feel that it lacks the ups and downs and the immersive complex. I like the author and give it my best.

Personal opinion. The second-person philosophy advocated by the author. This is good. But what? Author, you should express the Er Er philosophy advocated by the protagonist! Rather than leaving it out in words. In this way, readers will feel, who is the protagonist in your book? How many protagonists are there? What do you want to do with this book?

I've gone to school, and I hope to update Chapter 20 in two weeks.

I've seen a lot of family abortions, so I'd like to make some comments. The style of the family flow is generally stable, but stable does not mean dull. For example, let's take a plug-in. It's always better to have one. It doesn't need to be too outrageous. It just makes people a little happy and has a little expectation. The suspense and tension of several triggering events are well written, but the protagonist's sense of presence is too low. The first time was about picking up the slack, and the last two times were about following the elders. Personally, I think it's better to try to write some protagonist-oriented events. The family is the face and the protagonist is the point. Don't waste the point because of the appearance. The first side job of alchemy is not fully written enough, and there are too few triggering events surrounding alchemy. Generally speaking, it is neither the best nor the worst among the family streams, just average. In fact, Immortal Evergreen also has many shortcomings, but the overall rhythm is pretty good. Is there any other book in the family series that can reach the level of a pioneering work like Mortal.

Alas, it's not easy for the author. It hasn't been put on the shelves yet, but I can still keep going. Come on, author. We will always support you 🙏

I am a 15-year-old bookworm, and this book is so well written! It is better than Immortal Evergreen, Desert, Qinglian and other family streams. It truly captures the essence of the family stream! The former, no matter whether it was the desert or Qinglian, he became a lone ranger as he kept going. He kept going to new places, constantly finding relics with unlucky luck, and then killing people and grabbing treasures to get rich. It turned into a routine of fighting monsters and upgrading, and the family became a burden and became dispensable. This book undoubtedly revolves around the family. Family members support each other and each supporting role plays an important role. This is undoubtedly more realistic! It truly shows that there is strength in numbers! I saw some comments from readers before saying that the protagonist's leveling up is too slow. I strongly disagree! Family novels are more exciting when they are slow in pace, because they need to use a lot of pen and ink to describe the supporting roles of each family member, and use realistic techniques to describe the development process of the family's quantitative changes leading to qualitative changes. If you want to see a quick upgrade, you can watch the monster-killing upgrade flow, because every time you kill a monster, you will definitely be able to level up, and the pace is naturally very fast. The family flow is undoubtedly more realistic than the Lone Ranger. Even if the Lone Ranger is unlucky, it should not be able to compare with the thousands of years of accumulation of a big family. I have read a Lone Ranger novel before. The protagonist travels through time and his spiritual consciousness is far higher than that of the same level. By chance, he gets a divine consciousness attack spell and becomes invincible at the same level. Killing the children of sects and powerful people is like killing pigs. This kind of plot feels very nonsense! There are many similar poisonous points in the traditional monster-fighting and upgrade flow! Divine consciousness is so important, don't even the big powers pay attention to it? Their core disciples should have practiced various inherited secret techniques since they were young. Their physical strength far exceeds those of the same level, and their various magic weapon configurations are also more powerful than you, the Lone Ranger. This is the reality in the world of cultivation!

As a bookworm for more than ten years (although I am not old), I have recently been reading novels about Xiuxian families and sects. I came across this book when I was looking for a book. After reading all the chapters, I will share my feelings. I hope it will be useful to new authors. First, the idea is very good. Recently, books about cultivating families and sects have become popular. The author probably started writing after reading books. I have to say that in this type of novel, the author's new ideas are very surprising and different from others. This is a good point. For example, leaving behind a contracted spirit beast protector Protecting the Family, I haven't seen anything like this in other books. Not only do bottlenecks occur in the middle and late stages of Qi Refining, but also in the later stages of Qi Refining, small and medium-sized people will also have bottlenecks due to excessive consumption of elixirs. This is a good point. Other books don't say that they don't have such small bottlenecks, but most of them don't have small bottlenecks for this reason. Second, don't learn routines. It's a good idea to read more similar books, check for omissions, and compare yourself. But don't copy other people's routines. Although the names, places, causes of events, etc. Have been changed, for me, as a reader, I have read several similar books and they all have the same things or routines. I will instantly feel disgusted with these books. It does not mean that all events must be novel and weird. If the author can be the same as the first point, more Thinking of a few new ideas, mixed with the old routines, will give people a feeling of novelty from time to time, which is very attractive for new authors to read the book. Third, typos, confusing word order, and suddenly a large paragraph is not divided into sections. These are just small mistakes that new authors will make. Although they do not have a big impact, for readers, just starting the book like this will definitely have a negative impact on people. I hope the author can take a closer look after writing a chapter. Four, because there are too few chapters, I can't see other points, so I will add them later... Finally, I hope the author will work hard and the new book will get better and better. This month's last investment will be given to (๑‾̀◡‾́)σ»

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Family Map

Collect names 1. Spiritual flowers, spiritual grasses, spiritual fruits, heavenly materials and earthly treasures 2. Demonic beasts 3. Magical weapons, spiritual weapons, talismans 4. Various magical powers and spells 5. Names of dragon sets, sect monks, family monks, casual cultivators... Can all be used

It's well written. It's written about a cultivating family. It's a bit new. Although there is a protagonist, it's more interesting to have group portraits. Come on

Come on, author, I don't care how you write, just keep writing well. If you stick to it, you will win. We will always support you.

I think the next plot should be the protagonist's wedding. The protagonist and Ouyang's marriage will definitely be a great event in Lingnan. It will break away from the clouds of war. In addition, it will also be a strong display of soft power to the outside world. With the three Jindan, it is really necessary to think carefully about moving the Shen family. The second step is the abdication of the patriarch and the protagonist as the patriarch. After all, it is a Jindan family. Jindan is a nuclear deterrent. After marriage, the protagonist will take charge of the outside world and the female will take charge of the family, developing the family.

Three Yuan Thunder Technique, this golden finger is good, this setting is better! It can be said that being the protagonist has better benefits than others, but it is a pity that it cannot be used as a family inheritance technique. After all, the requirements are too stringent and others cannot practice it!

There are too few scenes for the patriarch, please add more scenes~

Let me put it another way, what we are watching is the rise of the Shen family. After reading more than 600 chapters, the Shen family is a vassal of the Qingyun Sect. After finally being able to talk to the Qingyun Sect on an equal footing, let the Qingyun Sect Yuanying be allowed to regress and then make the Shen family a vassal for more than 600 chapters? The Shen family should at least start to have a voice in Lingnan, instead of continuing to rely on others.

The Foundation Building Chapter is so long that I can't stand it anymore. I'm afraid that if I continue reading, I may not be able to form a Nascent Soul until the end. There's nothing interesting about reading a book about forming a golden elixir that can lead to immortality, so I decided to give up.

I think the author's attitude is right. Writing books can only be used as a side job to earn pocket money and satisfy hobbies. This is especially true after the first book proved that there is no talent for fire. I wish the author good luck in his postgraduate entrance examination.

I was so angry when I saw the foundation building technique. There was so much foreshadowing. It was said that the path was difficult and tortuous. During the Qi training period, there were several narrow escapes. Many elders protected the protagonist's path. He was in trouble. From the side, it also showed that the road was difficult. So far, it was good. But once it came to the foundation period, the author, like a mother who couldn't bear the suffering of her child, immediately gave a golden finger. He also said that his three spiritual roots were equally balanced, just in line, not even close. The main reason is that other people don't know this yet. Yes, it was achieved in a daze. This is really lucky. The difficult pursuit of love is all nonsense. Cultivation of immortals still depends on aptitude. Ordinary people are promised to change their lives against the will of heaven. Even if you say that his three spiritual roots are unbalanced, he needs to rely on massive spiritual power to make up for the insufficient attribute spiritual roots, and then rely on painful perseverance to grind away the excess attribute spiritual roots. Or there is a prescription in the skill that can adjust and balance the three spiritual roots, so that the protagonist can travel, collect the elixir with difficulty, and take it. This can not only show the specialness of the protagonist, but also make everyone feel that the road is really difficult. The protagonist is really perseverant and deserves it. It is really not satisfying to give it to him for free, and it also insults the reader's IQ. I really want to change the author's paragraph. It's like reading the first half of an entrepreneurial story and having a rich father come in the second half. It's very uncomfortable. Please give me the same idea.

I'm afraid of you being a eunuch, but it's hard to find books that suit my taste. After thinking about it, I'd like to support you. I hope it's a bit stressful and I'll work hard to update! Maintain character

Could the author consider that the clan members sacrificed their lives for the interests of the family and fought to the death? The monks in the family were twisted into a rope. Why worry about the family not being strong? Then he could consider the construction of internal infrastructure within the family. For example, upgrading spiritual veins, cultivating spiritual fields, and medicinal fields,

It hurts, the reward is just for complaining, it can be seen that I am very angry After 200 chapters, the magic sword broke the bones, right?

Brother Dao, are you still here to write to Shen? I promise to support you.

I was just about to write another article, and you became a eunuch again.

I would like to recommend the new book "The Supreme Cultivation Family" by an old author. Thank you!

Work hard and make progress step by step, and every harvest brings a full sense of accomplishment. Wish you great sales. Borrowing the treasure to promote the cute new book "Family Cultivation of Immortality: Rebirth in the Monster Farm", Wang Haihan 🙏