I Can See World Properties

The plot of this book is really too slow, and it is a fantasy novel with Cthulhu elements rather than a Cthulhu-type dark suspense novel. It is just covered in the skin of Cthulhu. If you replace Cthulhu with the sun god, Vulcan, etc., It will not affect the plot...

Not bad. However, when it comes to Ancient God, the plot often develops into an "overwhelming, only the protagonist can change the outcome" mode. Moreover, many of the protagonist's concealments feel completely unnecessary. With so many things going on, the protagonist has not committed himself to attracting the attention of the country's ruling class to the issue of ancient gods. Instead, it feels a bit excessive to say nothing.

I hope I can avoid typos. Although I can understand it, it is still awkward, especially when I am fascinated by it and suddenly I can't read it, and it is very difficult to distinguish.

I really like this kind of slow-burning book with a sense of simplicity in writing😊

This book is very well written, but I don't know why it becomes less interesting the more I read it. 😥😥😥

I couldn't stand it after reading two chapters. The witch in it has no brains, and the protagonist has no brains either.

I've read more than a dozen chapters and there's nothing surprising about it, but strangely I can't bring myself to continue reading**

I feel that the protagonist is very inexplicable, he is so confident, he is as weak as a chicken, yet he dares to rush into anything.

Why does the author always like to create ambiguities? The supporting female characters with names can hardly escape. I saw that the protagonist went to the capital to meet the little witch. According to the previous description, the protagonist had a normal friendship with her, and the little witch had a one-sided crush on the protagonist. The protagonist actually used his hands and feet directly, which was really disgusting to watch. Originally, the writing on the lord aspect and the suspense aspects were quite good, but the ambiguity was really unbearable and made me feel physically uncomfortable.

When I saw it, I felt that the plot was relatively bland. After thinking about it, I found out that it was because the protagonist had no strong goals, no sense of mission, and no great pursuit. Generally, the templates for big events are: ① A big thing happens; ② It is related to the protagonist and a group of supporting characters; ③ It triggers the protagonist's sense of mission or crisis and must take the initiative to solve the event; ④ The big event is solved. The protagonist in this book feels like he gets things done half-heartedly, without much subjective initiative. For example, in the big event of summoning Mr. Ke, the male protagonist did not want to participate in the beginning. In the middle, he just wanted to mix with the mercenaries to see what was going on. However, due to the situation, he had no choice but to join the game. After entering the game, he immediately started to cheat and settled the matter with the cheat. There were no ups and downs in the whole process, except for the goat man who was "shocked" a little bit, and it felt like I was able to pass the level in a daze.

I found that I suddenly like Crusoe-style novels. Can anyone recommend them?

The writing in the territory was very good at first. After I went to find the prince, I felt it was very confusing and I couldn't stand it. It was too broken.

After reading the chapters before charging, I can describe the plot in two words: bland! The protagonist has no goals, just like a log floating along the river. The plot has no ups and downs, which made me feel a little drowsy. (Personal understanding)

Farming makes me feel lonely. After reading more than 200 chapters, I would rather the protagonist not have a territory. I originally thought that the protagonist would use farming to climb the technological tree while growing up, but it turned out that it didn't matter at all, and I felt numb. A little more exciting is crisis response, which is more suitable for writing adventure stories.

Let me talk about my thoughts after reading this book. It is quite good. It has some advantages and some shortcomings. Of course, this is inevitable. The author is a newcomer and has not written many novels. The early and middle stages of the novel are both good. It is not bad for a newcomer. However, it feels a bit broken in the later period. But don't blame the author. Bi Jin's book is actually not very good. The author also has to catch up and come back to write novels after work, or because of mood reasons, etc. Not much else to say, let me talk about my views on this book. In the early stage, the protagonist becomes a count, develops the territory, and until the empire reverses, the plot of the desert queen's son is quite amazing. The measures including the development of the territory are very well written, but I feel that the author's protagonist setting is not very good. Since the setting of the Cthulhu world, the protagonist always wants to be a mortal living person, isn't it to become stronger? Other things always come to the protagonist, and the protagonist will investigate. Then there is the plot of the protagonist wandering around. In fact, the reason for this is that the book is not set up well, so it is difficult to advance the plot later. When writing a novel, it is best to create a boss for the protagonist or save the world, or lead the rise of the human race. If there is such an outline, otherwise the world will be peaceful, so why should the protagonist do it? For example, in this book, there can be an outline of a strange god who wants to destroy the earth and re-create a new order. Otherwise, when a goal is completed, it will feel like the protagonist has nothing to do, so later in the book. . . In fact, the novel can be put simply in one sentence, which is to defeat monsters and upgrade, and it is up to the author to fill in the plot. Also, the author needs to create more exciting points and climaxes, otherwise there won't be much plot that will impress the readers in a long paragraph. Generally, books by great writers are better at making them more exciting. The more refreshing it is, the easier it will be to attract readers, otherwise it will be too bland. Typing is not easy, so stop here.

The book was too slow to read, and this golden finger was left to its own devices without any active exploration. The protagonist's personality is better than that of Xianyu, but I can't say he's diligent.

I'm surprised. The protagonist is a territorial baron. If he doesn't stay in his own territory and farm well, he keeps getting involved with those counts and princes.

I read a bit... Can't a gun with 500 damage kill a person with 1000 HP? Come on... That's a real world, blood volume just represents health value, ask you? See what harm does block strips do? Just take two blocks and insert them into the two eyes. No matter how much blood you have, it will be useless. More blood only means that you die faster or slower, and it does not mean you are invincible.

Deliberately slow down the pace, rather than the so-called slow heat and pour water vigorously

Absolutely, I thought this book was dead

Alas, what I want to see is the development of farming, but I can't stand it anymore because you're just walking around.

In fact, many things in this book have already been explained. If the author can't continue writing, don't dig new holes, write a better ending, and start the next book. The author's style is relatively slow, leisurely, and has a grand world view. I think the writing is really good. However, it may not be suitable for the current trend of online writing, or the attributes are not prominent enough. The magic practiced by the protagonist did not play a big role until the end, or it was hidden later. Although there are Cthulhu elements, it actually failed to go in depth. It wrote about the power struggle, but in fact it didn't write much. . . The author has written a lot of things, but has only scratched the surface, but the overall story is really good. The protagonist's life continues to stir up waves, but finally calms down. The span of the book is too big, and many things passed by without understanding. If you can't continue writing, don't write about magic, grudges, werewolves, etc. You can still have a good ending now.

There is no bright spot, I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye when I'm destined to

In fact, this book should have been almost finished by the time of Cthulhu, but it opened up new pits later on, which made me not want to read it. Sometimes you have to make subtractions, and sometimes the ending does not have to be happy, it can also be regretful.

The author should consider changing his profession, so that he won't have to eat even if he writes like this.

I am crazy about nostalgia and like to read the books I read before again and again. I feel that only those works are from the same era as myself.

Have you restored the update? I don't dare to fall into the trap like this.

It seems that there is no end in sight. This should be the first book I read from beginning to end. I started reading dozens of chapters and kept reading it for almost a year. I started to read it when problems started to appear in the subsequent updates. This time it turned out to be a eunuch.

The subject matter is very good, but it is too slow to develop. The protagonist in the early stage has no purpose at all. It would be great if it could be used as a reference for the doomsday jigsaw puzzle game.

What a pity... It would have been nice to have ended up at World Watcher.