Harry Potter: The Great Calamity

Shennong has arrived! Shennong has died...

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I can tolerate you buying a robe that doesn't fit perfectly, but you should be more selective when buying a wand. Is this the mentality of a loser? You don't care about anything.

Reporting in at dawn, are you surprised or not? There's a problem with Chapter 1. Zhang Xingxing is a time traveler, not a reincarnated individual. Rebirth is starting over, while transmigration is being reborn in another's body. Pay attention to the details ٩( ö̆ ) و The novel's pacing is quite good, but the punctuation and paragraph breaks could be improved. I hope my advice can help you. 😜

Cultivating immortality at Hogwarts, circulating spiritual energy throughout your body—do you really think this won't kill you, or are you the only smart one?

Ever since watching the movie, I've become obsessed with fanfiction, or rather, obsessed with Emma 😏😏. I've read about ten chapters, and I feel the plot is a bit too bland and uninteresting, failing to highlight the main character—in short, there's not much action. I hope the author can make some minor changes; this is just a small suggestion. Compared to most formulaic novels, it's already much better. I'm already at my wit's end; I've been suffering from a reading slump for so long.

For the female lead, consider Penelope Cruvat.

Let this old man take a look and see if this book is poisonous!

Hannah, who's always been there, wasn't the first one sorted into the Sorting House?

I've come here today, at this very moment, to visit and leave my footprints as proof! ❕This is my special ⚫sign-in❕⚫.