League of Legends on the Tip of the Tongue

Come on, I'm quite satisfied after watching half of it. It feels like I've returned to the golden age of LoL fandom. Encourage me, after all, the current LoL game is in decline, and the Alliance Universe IP has been erratic and almost completely bankrupt. Those who can write about it probably still have some love for this game. Special praise should be given to harems (at least half of them are the trend of harems). My suggestion is to try to control the proportion of the heroine's roles and the heroine's supporting roles that you want to promote. It is best not to spend a lot of time creating a likable character and then not accept it.

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Reminds me of a classic lol joke Vi: "I'm just worried about you, so I won't let you participate in the mission." Jinx: "You just think I'm a burden! You look down on me! I want to sever ties with you! You are my biggest enemy!" Yasuo: "Sorry, brother, I was too heavy-handed and I killed you." Yongen: "It's a big deal, I have a few buddies."

There is a legend in Rune Continent that when a person dies, he will be drowned by the blood of those he killed during his lifetime. After the death of Noxus' executioner Draven, the blood flooded his calves. After the death of Noxus' general Darius, the blood flooded his lower body. After the death of the dark sword demon Aatrox, the blood flooded his chest. After the death of Lux, the glorious girl of Demacia, the blood did not even touch her feet. Just when everyone was confused, Lux said: "I am standing on the head of Demacia's Colossus of Justice."

When I was reading Seti's family letters, I thought of my parents. They were as nagging as Seti's mother, and they often missed me who was studying abroad. Every week I would make a phone call to chat with my parents about the current situation. My parents would always miss us who were working and studying abroad.

According to my experience, those who write LOL articles are either eunuchs or get stabbed in the back with fists.

Seeing the description of the descendants of Azir, I can only say that the plot is getting more and more complicated. From swallowing the world's runes to purifying the darkin, there are obviously so many plots that can be written, but I have to make a mess In addition, the protagonist's combat power is obviously not supermodel, and the darkin transformation is equivalent to about 3/4 of the darkin. His own strength is not as strong as Garen, Yi, or Weapon Master. He is not weak, and it is difficult to fight in high-end games, but the author has begun to suppress his combat power A descendant of Azir, who has not even integrated the old team, the dark descendant gave the evaluation that using a monolith as a staff is more luxurious than Azir, excuse me? The protagonist, a single darkin, can enter and exit 7 times in the capital of Noxus. The Emperor and LeBlanc died suddenly, but a big slave owner in Shurima makes the two darkin protagonists unable to do anything? I have no memory of not being able to trust dark descendants before, but now? Go directly to the dog head. The dog head will lead you to eat arcane scrolls. If necessary, it is not impossible to find a rune to taste it. Then purify the dark descendants. Even if there is an entire legion of rational god warriors, Azir may not be more prestige than the protagonist Also, if you really don't want to push the main plot, then write something big. If you like it, stop describing your calm, wise, elegant, bloodthirsty protagonist, who has sealed his memory and used it as a test subject for Black Rose. Things must be reversed at their extremes. I don't understand why you stuffed Ahri and Riven into the protagonist group. Riven's description is quite normal, and he is treated like a big-head coolie. Where's Ahri? Is there any interaction? It's just a collection habit. As soon as the protagonist's Wangba Qi (Jingso Qi) is revealed, Ah Li will come to vote. You can come as soon as you come. Why don't you write about it when you come? The description of the supporting character Seti is really good The Void Line, the Rune Line, the Darkin Line can find Ryze, Shurima camp, Targon camp, and even the Rune Line can find the Demacia camp. You don't write about so many wonderful things, but you have to take a whole family to fight vampires? Just do it, the pace is so slow, are you Van Helsing?

Of all the time-travel novels about amnesia, none of them are well written. They are all poisonous. Finding reasons to restore memory in sections is even more poisonous.

It is essentially an old-fashioned harem story about hegemony from more than ten years ago. The shortcomings are exactly the same. In the harem story, the protagonist's IQ depends on the author's IQ. The more you want to emphasize the protagonist's exhaustive strategy, the more it looks like a step-by-step stage play. In the harem story, treating female characters as rewards for clearing the game not only lacks emotional description, but also lacks necessary logic. Today's readers are increasingly lacking a sense of empathy for traditional harem men, and are less and less willing to buy into this forced interpretation of wit. It is understandable that the author has poor performance in several consecutive books, but from the author's perspective, there is no need to consider non-target readers, and it is good to keep his basic base.

Come on, fierce steel, let Runeterra feel the power of the steel door

Author, would you like to take a look at your introduction and book title? Are they related to the main text? The only thing that can be related is the Ionia chapter. It has been unreadable since chapter 79. I just read it through it. When I arrived in Noxus, I was so bored. The memory of the time traveler was taken back as soon as it was said to be taken back. There was not even a foreshadowing. This book only has the Ionia chapter. If you can read the rest, it is best not to read it.

I was surprised. I suddenly searched today and found that there are only two books about traveling through the world of League of Legends that are still being updated, and there are no new books. There are still a lot of eunuch books. It seems that this type of book is completely out of date.

Shennong took two bites and said that he still hasn't recovered his memory after the end of the first volume. I hope everyone knows.

If it weren't for the accumulation of previous books, your book would be a flop. The setting of amnesia is definitely one of the most unflattering settings in online novels, and it will make readers feel depressed. The debuff of a long plot➕The monkey trick of not being able to retrieve the most important memory. I really don't know how you came up with this "genius" idea.

I thought it was a LOL food article, but it turned out that I didn't have any food at all, and no accompanying rice was given, so I canceled it.

Absolutely amazing. I haven't recovered my memory in Chapter 41. It's so poisonous.

I heard it was a monkey trick to restore memory. I didn't want to watch it for a moment. I was quite interested. When will I regain my memory? I'll kick it.

What a LOL fan writes is neither grand nor enjoyable. Is it appropriate to start writing in such a convoluted way? . . . . .

Wouldn't the Cross Alliance kill all the middle and upper-class people in Noxus? Child Army! Biochemical weapons! Massacre the city! Magic plunder class! Genocide! Tomb robbery! Aggression! Provoke unrest! Murder! Scam! Cult! It's also said that Noxus made you stand up and stand on the bones of civilians, right? Promise! Crow! Vampire! Draven! Enchantress! Carter! Men's sword! Spider! Anyone born in Noxus or working for Noxus is considered a war criminal, and Riven is probably the same, but she has changed her mind! After reading the story of Reel and Kayn, this is not purely a devil's behavior. The Sword Master, the Sword Girl, the Tauren, there are countless heroes whose tragic background stories are all caused by Noxus! After reading so many heroes' background stories, so many regions and city-states, Noxus is the most disgusting! The most important thing is that it is shameless. Social Darwinism, which completely reduces people to beasts, has the shame to say that Noxus wants you to stand up? Those who can't stand up are dead, right?

Personal preference, there should be no more than 5 female protagonists, too many would be ugly. If there are too many female protagonists, they become symbols without any personal characteristics. Basically, new ones are introduced and the old ones are forgotten. It all depends on the character count of the new heroine. There are many female heroes in LOL. It's really boring to write about stamp collection. Either we should write down the parts of each female protagonist in detail to make the character more distinct, or we should bulldoze the story and all the women will support the male protagonist. To sum up, I personally don't mind multiple women, but I hate stallion stories. It's just a personal preference. Discussions are welcome.

Volume 2 is such a disappointment! Reading the whole article is like chewing the beans, and it is no different from the running diary I kept when I was a child. The plot is simply piled up, the characters are unremarkable, and the interactive descriptions are even less. Each plot seems to have been pieced together rigidly, just going through the motions, without digging into the charm of the story and characters at all. This is far from the excitement I expected, and it is really disappointing. I have read Chapter 87 so far. If you have read the subsequent chapters, please reply to me and tell me how the rest of the writing is going.

Give me the emotional drama, have you accepted Kai'Sa and Wheel Mom? What did you say in your acceptance speech? The more you wrote, the more excited you became. It became a chronicle of war and the tip of your tongue disappeared.

It's so funny. To put it bluntly, I don't know how to follow the plot with memories. I just find excuses for myself to recover little by little. It's a fool's errand.

As for driving high and moving low, author, this is not a group portrait. The protagonist should have more roles and become stronger. There is no need to put too much pressure on the combat power. Steel City has become invisible. If you don't know how to write to reflect the protagonist's amazing wisdom, just write about amazing strength. It's been too long. Either update it faster or don't delay the progress too much.

It's been a few hours since I wrote the introduction, and the male protagonist is like a god who has disappeared. He showed affection before, but now he is just writing about the war in Demanok, and the male protagonist's role has become less. The early stage is really good, Sett's family letter, Riven Fox is really well written, but it's a pity that it starts high and goes low

If you want to survive, you can learn to sword, boy.

Like Lux's magic wand, it drives high and goes low. I want to see all kinds of crushing after becoming strong. As a result, he gradually developed his strength in the later period.

The author must have changed someone, it's already inconsistent. Azrasil, who was killed by the protagonist in Chapter 525, is alive again in Chapter 686. It seems like everything will be 💩 after that.

The plot has been so slow recently, it's just a half-celestial spirit, why is it that after all the things Dean has eaten now, he is not as good as the human body of a star spirit? Even if it's Kyle Morgana and others, Chew Chew Chew, the preparations have been too long and too slow recently.

Let me share another League of Legends fanfic.